OS : May I kiss u ?? - Page 2

Originally posted by: samwllms

good os...but very fast ...It could have included two three parts and the story could be more deep with emotional views and story track could be better...

nice plot...if there is only one part you wanted to add bcs it is an one short story..then the os could be more long with changed sequences and character views...

keep up the good effort...all d best...

Originally posted by: lizadavidmm

aate hai ruko thodi der!!!😆

Originally posted by: ifians

juhi juhi juhi..

Originally posted by: tintin0602

ya i know that this was a lil fast one ... but actually i dont want to focus on the confession part as i know that cvs will be at there best but i wanna on marriage part..

so i wrote this as a plot for next part...

thanks for commenting

ok...so u want our rantara married...thats what we all want...but the satya n antra marraige news is scaring me...i hope the cv wont do any stupid tricks with us...i want that creepo guy satya to be far away from rantara's paradise

omg Juhi it is super duper sweet he hai, i loved plz continue na

Originally posted by: lizadavidmm

aate hai ruko thodi der!!!😆

edit:

It was simply super-duper-awesome!

hv no word for ur writing 👏 ⭐️

Raghu cant wait ...lol

he is so fast guy!chat shaadi phat SR...lol😆

machmuach is so confused , poor guy!

kisko kya bole? he dont understand! and its true with more confusion !!😆 😕

very well description from you for ds week epis 👏

is DM ki to main...gharrr!!!!!!!!😡

do continue kameeni, kameenapan tujhse jyada better kayon describe kar sakta h? 🤣

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon

omg Juhi it is super duper sweet he hai, i loved plz continue na

Omg i loved your OS so much...Shaadi bhi itni jaldi hogayi?? haha bless them! One of the cutest couples! ☺️

Originally posted by: tintin0602

got it that u liked it... but yaar say something

Thats really sweet update!
My 2nd OS in this forum i am reading😆
so both have realized their love for each other😳
and both want express their feelings.
Choosing the idea of mouth organ for proposing is really dreamy..
Loved it.
Oh i love him calling her yedi😆
and then Antara's insecurity. But raghu managed it all well. I thought he will elope with her. But ye pehla , aadmi jo shadi ko hi surprise plan kar diya😃😆
loved it ! So beautifully written.

Next part☺️gutter?? Piya!😛
thanks for pm😃