OS:kal kitne baje?(part 2) pg3 updated - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: alishamerchant


haha waise are you going to make a second part?? if yes then plz pm me!


Actually not really thought about it. But if if members loved it then ofcourse. I'll pm you if i wrote 2nd part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: hayakhan5

Nyc os!!!
Acha tha!!
Complete strangers


Thank you. will try yo improve more.
Posted: 12 years ago
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wow... amazing.. hot os.. loved it.
plz continiue and don't forget to pm me.. hehe 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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mast os ...plzz cont soon 😳😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
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so hawttt
raghu so naughty boy lolsss
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@ Nichuss
thanx alot.

@ Reeyana
thank you. i'll pm you if i continiue it

@ pampz
thanx alot. sure i'll cont. if this os gets good response... and pm u for sure.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Main sharam se pani pani hi gayi!!! Great os.. I hope there's a part 2 :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ok...
I thought not to continue but as I am free today I just wrote it down .
sorry that u'll have to bear it...😛
here's short update ... plz don't throw chaapal and eggs😭 but ya tomatoes are welcomed 😆

Part-2

LOVE or ATTRACTION???

Antara was thinking in her room ... what was it? Why I couldn't stop myself? It never happened with me before. And he isn't the first person I have hugged. I have dated many guys in my college too but never got so close to anyone. But why this happened this time? Why I went so close to him? What kind of charm he has that I was ready to give up myself to him?

Hitting her head she thought.. And what was I asking him? ... Kal kitne baje? ... God I have lost it... But every time he comes close to me I just couldn't fight up with my feelings. My feelings make me get down on my knees. What is this? LOVE or ATTRACTION???

Raghu went to hospital and asked Machmach "kya huwa aaji ko?"

"wo usko heart attack huwa hai"

Raghu rushed towards ICU... Macmach stopped him.."Ruk jaa.. wo Daya Mai andar hai"

Raghu felt as someone had tied his legs.

"Machmach... meh andar jana chahata hoon" his eyes were wet.

"par tumhe tho pata hi hai Mai tumse Naraz hai... thodhi der baat Mai chali jayegi aur tum Aaji se mil lena.."

There was silence for some minutes. Then Machmach asked Raghu "tum kaha rehe rahe ho?"

Raghu gave him his address . After sometimes Daya Mai came out. She looked at Raghu with her wet eyes and turned back to Machmach and said "Take care of Aaji..." .

Raghu looked hopefully towards her but she left. He then rushed to seek his Aaji.

He spent whole night taking care of Aaji.

It was a new day... Antara woke up and fresh her up and thought of Raghu. She went to his room to seek him but, he wasn't there. The whole day Raghu didn't come back. It was 8:00 pm... still Raghu wasn't back. Antara was tensed...but still, she didn't know it was due to love or lust; that she wanted him to be back soon...

Raghu was there in hospital caring his Aaji. It was 4 days they hadn't met each other. Doctor confirmed that Aaji was out of Danger and that they could discharge her tomorrow. There was a sign of relief on his face... Just then he noticed his watch ... it was 9:00 pm. He remembered his words to his scooty girl... then he asked Machmach to look after Aaji and call him if there's anything wrong and went back to his residence.

It was 10 pm. He went to the balcony thinking she might have slept. But, Antara was there on the balcony.. in her night suit (a white T-shirt and a track) with open hair which were flying with the cool breeze. The moon-light added extra beauty to her.

"Raghu?" she said looking at him.

They had a short eye-lock...

"ha.. tum sooyi nahi?" he asked.

"nahi..." she replied being harsh and added " where were you? Huh? You know these four days every time I was seeking at your room that when will you come. I was so worried ... At least you could have called me..."

"wo... Tumhe meri itni fikar kaab se hone lagi? Hum? Aur kiyun ho rahi hai?"

Looking here and there she said "pata nai... Par ho rahi hai"

"aacha? Aur Aunty kesi hai?" turning back he said.

Just then she hugged him from back " I missed you"

"kiyoon" he asked

"pata nahi..."

Looking back he asked "bol na kiyoon?"

"kiyoon ki me tumse pyar karti hoon" she spoke fast in a breath...

"kya?"

"ha... Pata nahi tum me yeh kesa jaado hai, jo mujhe har bar tumhare pass lata hai... Jab bhi aaakeen baandh karti hoon tum yaad aateho... aur jab bhi aakheen kholti hoon tho tume miss karti hoon.. Tumahari attitude, baate,gundagiri, saab se pyar hogaya hai.. I LOVE YOU...

Raghu smirked and said " maine tho socha tha ki mujhe hi khena padhega phele ..."

"kya"

"Yehi ki main bhi tumse pyar karta hoon...

Jab se tujhe pheli baar scooty main dhekha hai tab se tu mere dil me ride kar rahi hai...me bhi tjhse pyar karta hoon... I LOVE YOU too..."

Then they had an intense hug... Raghu took her face in his hands and planted a passionate kiss on her lips ... And slowly it turned into wild kiss...

He took her in his arms and entered his room...

And whispered "Let's continue..."

Antara smirked... and said " Aaj tho beech me chood kar nahi jaoogena?"

He smirked and explored her... with love and care...

And they continued to make their love...

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p.s. plz hit like button if u like... and do comment even if u didn't like 😆 i thought to write mature part 😳 but saw 1 post containing mature part got reported so gave up the idea...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Do continue the next part plzzz.i just loved ur os.too good
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: FatemaMazahir17

Do continue the next part plzzz.i just loved ur os.too good


O... thank you sooo..much 😳

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