This is my first os... plz enjoy and comment ... your valueable comments like and suggestions are appreciated..
here, both Raghu and Antara are unknown to each other
Raghu is a gangster with love in his heart and Antara is a modern girl ...bold girl.😳
Lost in his own thought, he walked across the road...
flashback
"Bye... Machmach"
was the only thing that he could say. After all, leaving basti, where one spent his innocent childhood, his mischevious teenage and his memorable moments of life wasn't easy.
Still in hope to see his Lord, he looked back.. but in vain, she didn't come out to bid him farewell... farewell for forever..
Lastly, looking at aaji, all he could say was "apna khayal rakhna" And he turned around to hide his tears.
"Chintu... Chintu.. "
He heard it clearly but didn't turn back. Nahi aaji I can't stay here.. And walked out of basti...
"Bhai... Bhai... Bhai"
Machmach stoped him... as how could he let his best friend go?
He asked "Tu?... yaha kya kar raha hai? Agar Mai ne tujhe yaha dekh liya tho bada babaal khada ho jayega"
"please bhai... mat jaoo.. Agar tu chala jayega tho main kya karoonga?"
"Machmach,.. tu chala ja"
"thik h bhai, agar tu jana chahate ho tho main bhi tere saath chaloonga"
"tu mere saath aayega tho aaji ka dhyan kaun rakhega?"
"par tu jayega kaha? kaha rahega? Nahi me bhi tere satth chalunga"
"machmach" he said in loud tone. Realising it, he soften down "sorry, tu chinta mat kar. woo Arsad miya hain na, wo abhi iss basti se bahar hai. Wo rehene ki iltazam kar denge. Tu fikar mat kar. Bas aaji ka dhyan rakhna aur mujhe khabar karte rehena"
Tears fell down his (machmach) eyes. Raghu couldn't stop himself from hugging him.
"I have to go" saying this he broke the hug and went without facing him.
flashback ends
suddenly, a scooter hit him. He shouted "aiye!! dhek ke nahi chala shakta. Tu ruk main abhi batata ho"
The scooty stoped at the road side. Raghu begun to walk towards it with full confidence. He noticed the person in the scooty was wearing salwaar kameez. A girl? He stood there like an idle. She got out of the scooty and pulled out her helmet. Wow! What a beauty
He was lost in her shining, mischievous eyes, her milky skin, her long hair...
"Excuse me" with her words he was back to his consciousness. "kudh dhek kar nahi chalte ho aur upar se chillate ho? tum jese insaan ki waje se iss desh me acidents hota h aur blame kiya jata chalne wale par. Agar ..."
"Aur tu. Tu jho ye aakhe ghar pe chod kar aai h uska kya?"
"kya? kitne badtameez ho tum. Kudh galti karo aur maafi magne ki jaga chilate ho. tum.."
"Dekh mera bejha bohoot garam h. tu jyada mat bol aur chalija warna.."
"warna? warna kya karoge?"
"tu soch bhi nahi sakti main kya karunga"
Being abit afraid and heading back her way to scooty she said"ek tho galati upar se gundagiri huh?"
"chal nikal" Raghu's anger was clearly seen in his face.
Then Raghu went to Arshad's bakery and Arshad gave him four addresses to look on for Raghu's new shelter.
Then, they both went together to look for the places. Raghu had rejected already 3 places because it wasn't good and too expensive.(as now he should think of his budget too) This was the last place, a four-stored building. They met the owner...
"kya? ek hi kamra?"
with a disgusting look she said " Hum... tum ek hi badhe rahoge na? tho ek kamra kafi hi hoga. Aur waise bhi idhar ye ek hi kamra khali hai. Rs.3,000 per month. Upar se balcony bhi hai "
Jee tho karta hai isse thok daalu..
"Acha tho main nahaunga kidhar?"
"Tumhare darwje ke samne jho bathroom hai udhar"
Arshad asked "pasand nahi aaya tho hum kahi aur dhek lete hai"
"nahi thik hai wasse bhi aajh kahi tho rehenahi hoga na"
signing some paper and giving deposit amount he got the room.
After setting up some furniture he thought to go to the balcony. He was amazed to see two rooms (his room and next room sharing the same balcony)
Meanwhile, a middle aged lady came out from the next door and talked with him and even invited for dinner.
It was dinner time, Raghu went to his padoshi (neighbour) for dinner. He entered their room it was a living room with door towards balcony and three other room were there just by it's side.
He was asked to join them in dinning table. And so did he. But he heard
"Tum??"
raising his eyebrow he saw the same scooty girl. They lady asked her "Have you met before?"
Yeh lo muft me mila hua ghar ka khana chala gaya
"No. not at all"
Her answer shocked him. yeh kyun nahi bata rahi hai??
serving meal the lady said "yeh Antara h aur wo Ishan" Raghu managed to make a fake smile.
He was busy looking her beauty than her intro.
she added "By the way, Antara tum aaj bata rahi thi ki tume Shiveshswori mandir se aate waqt Koi aakdoo gunda milatha?"
She coughed...
Raghu raised his head listening to it...
She continued "tume pata h Antara bata rahi thi bada badtameez tha. Aur kya khe rahi thi... ha.. gundagiri kar raha tha. aab mandir aate jaate bhi yese log milne lage"
Shiveswori mandir? yeh tho Aaj main jaha tha uske opposite direction par h bohot door h"
She gestured him not to say anything and being obedient hs didn't.
After dinner, he pulled her out of the room catching her arms and asked "what was that?"
she tried hard to hide but in vain ...
Finally she said "I had been to the live concert today lying my mom."
"jhut bhi bol leti ho? Aur kya kaha tha tumne... akkdoo, badtameez, gunda.."
"nahi wo... mai..."
"now i'll show what a real badtameez is"
He placed his hand on her waiste and pulled her close towards her. She couldn't resist.. His every touch was even driving her crazy. They have an eye-lock. Raghu was mesmerized with her beauty. He pulled her more close to him so that their chest could feel each others. Then slowly, he ran his hand towards her back. She couldn't get herself out from Raghu's magical spell.
"Antara where are you?"
Her mom's word welcomed them towards conciousness. She just made herself free and went back to her room.Raghu could still feel her touch.
It was night time Raghu was in his room. But her every touch was still fresh to him. Now, he want to hug her... Hug her tighter so that even air couldn't pass between them.
He listened a sound from balcony.. Like someone was there. Hoping it's her scooty girl he went out. And yes it was her. They had an eye-lock.
"O so you hadn't sleep till now" Raghu started to break the awkward silence.
"Nahi.. Wo mai.."
This 'nahi wo mai' reminded Raghu of their closeness.
"Ha.. bol" Raghu said.
"wo... Mai.. Wo.."
"Are bol na"
Showing abit anger finally she said fast "tumhari himmat kese hui mujhe us tara se pakadne ki?"
"acha tho mujhe kis tara se pakadna chahiye tha? Tu hi bata de"
" kya? Yeh kesa sawal h? Tumne mere saath wo sab kiya hi kese?"
acha chance h chodonga nahi ise
Then he suddenly hugged her and said "aise"
She was shocked.."yeh tum kya kar rahe ho?"
"tujhe dikha raha hoo"
He tightened his hug. there was nothing Antara could do all she can do was blush... As though her mind didn't want it, her body wanted him.
Slowly she hugged him back.. "Ra..gh..u.." she murmured in pleasure.. Pleasure given by Raghu's body.
Raghu hugged her more tightly that he could feel her every body parts... Slowly without breaking the hug, he placed a warm kiss on her neck. Antara hugged him more tightly this time.
Slowly they broke their hug, Raghu kissed her pink cheeks and said " you are beautiful"
Blushing.."and u r hot" saying this she ran into her room.
That night Raghu had his first hug ever with most beautiful girl. He waited for next day when he could again meet her.
are nahi 10 baj gaya aur mai ab uthraha ho.
He couldn't meet her coz she had already moved out. Raghu went Arshad's bakery.
"Raghu bhai ghar kesa h?"
"mast h"
Suddenly there someone came and informed that accountant left the job.
"waise me kuch madat karoo?"
"iski kya jarurat h"
"nahi khali betne se tho acha h na"
That night Raghu stayed in Bakery and next day,
he returned home at 8 p.m. He entered his room and begun to change. Meanwhile there was a knock on the front door. He changed his pant and being shirtless he opened the door and was surprized to see Antara there.
She looked him up to bottom and blushed "Take this mom has sent" she said showing tiffin box. Then she turned away and was about to move that Raghu stopped her saying "hey.. Miss kaul.. Thodi der baat balcony me aaja na. Kal baat adhuri rehe gayi thi"
Blushing she said "agar na aau tho?"
"tho mai gundagiri karoonga"
She smirked and went to her room. Antara was thinking at her room how wil she react today if he hugged her as she couldn't control herself. She decided to make Raghu uncontrolable and picked up her pink lenga choli.
It was 10 Raghu was waiting her out in the balcony. Just then the door opened.. He was amazed to see Antara there with Lenga choli with a transparent dupatta and small sleeveless choli just enough to cover her private part. She tured around and locked her door from out. Meanwhile Raghu noticed her back which was just covered with one inch piece of cloth.
She turned towards him and asked "how am i looking?"
"Amazing" he said drooling her. He noticed her perfect body curve... And her attractive cleavage. She waited for him to hug her but was surprized as he came and brushed her lips and gave her a tounge kiss. At first she didn't know how to react as kiss was beyond her expectation but when he placed his hand on her bear waist she begun to positively react his kissn they made their way on each others mouth and kissed for long. Raghu moved his hand across her back and Antara moved her hand inside his T-shirt to touch his bare back.
After a long wild kiss, to explore her more, he kissed her front neck and pulled her towards his room. They entered the room through balcony's door. He placed her on his bed and kissed her neck and slowly her cleavage and her pert breast. She tried to regain consciousness but his touch didn't let her. He pulled one side of her choli down and kissed every coner of her body visible to him. He pulled next side side of choli and did the same then he turned her around and placed a hot kiss on her back. Again, he made her face him kissed her lips intensly and meanwhile with his hand, he touch her pert breast and played with them...squeezing he wanted to explore them completely. He was about to remove her choli completely, to explore her.. suddenly his phone rung. The ringtone clearly told that is was Machmach. He left his work imcomplete and picked the phone..
"Bhai wo.. Aaji .. Tu jaldi aaja"
"kya hua aaji ko?" he screamed.
"wo aaji city hospital me h... Bas tu jaldi aaja"
Looking at his girl, Raghu said "abhi mujhe jana padhega"
"mujhe yese chod kar?.. Aapna kam tho pura karo" flirting she said.
Smirling he said "ha .. Jarur... kal pura karoonga... Wo bhi bohot ache se.. Bas tu tayar rehena "
Getting up and dressing herself properly she said "aacha? Kal kitne baje?"
He smirked and walked out.
p.s. thank u ❤️
here's second part link :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/94083139