Rantara SS Pyaar Ka Ikrar Updated pg 44 :) - Page 29

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hayakhan5

honey great update...
Raghu antara love birds love to play hide and seek...
Hahahhah ayan kay help ka bhi koi faida nhn...
hahhahhah...
good one
thanx for the pm...
Update soon and pm me...

thnks haya
yep hide and seek
will do
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PurpleSunset

Awww...such a sweet update..
I loved it Hinu!
Some parts were just mindblowing 👏
Precap is making me worry.
Pls do update soon.
Happy writing. 😊

thnks purple
thnks
will try to
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice update . Loved .
Thxs for the PM .
Continue
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: liana2304

Very nice update . Loved .

Thxs for the PM .
Continue

thank you liliana
will do
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG i havent udpated this in ages, bad news guys, i have started writing the next chap so updating soon look out:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey yediss I am back with another update of PKI, it is seriously a crap one so please read at your own risk. I hope you don't fall asleep half way through.
This update is dedicated to RI my Parooo for writing GAG and now writing the end of it, I love you for that RI and also not forgetting my BFF Ifz who is always after me for updates don't worry I will update milege soon so hang in there.
I hope you enjoy and not fall asleep
let me stop here and let you read!
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"lagta hai abhi time agaya hai in dono ko ek karne ka" ayaan spoke in his mind and went outside to execute his plan.

Inside Antara was walking around the house really hell bored."kya karu yaar?? Itni bore ho rahi hu. Cooking karti hu nai agar Raghu meherban ne dekh liya to pata nai kya karega" Antara said to herself and sat back down on her bed. Raghu had given her strict orders and to the caretaker as well and Ayaan to take special care of his miss call when he is not around.

Antara was lost in her own train of imagination of non other than her Raghu. Raghu had gone out of the room to get her medicine, because Antara ruined the other one by stepping on it numerous times. Raghu gave her a punishment, she will have to take the medicine and stay locked inside the room so locking the door from outside Raghu went to the kitchen to get her medicine.

Raghu walked in after a few minuets, locking the door again from inside he headed towards Antara who seemed to be in some dreamland. "chal miss call abhi apna mu khol or ye khale" raghu said sitting beside her and handing her the medicine, but Antara was still lost in her dreamland, raghu tried everything clicking his fingers in front of her even clapping but nothing seemed to work, finally when raghu had enough he leaned in and kissed her cheek near her lips, taking in half of her lips.

Antara immediately came from her dreamland and looked at raghu with wide eyes "raghu ye kya tha??" Antara said glaring at him ,raghu just smirked "wo kya hai na miss call tu meri dreamland mei thi to tujhe bhaar leke ayah u or ab medicine khale"raghu said handing her the medicine, Antara again made a *yucky* face making raghu slap his forehead in frustration. Raghu fell back on the bed frustrated making Antara look at him sadly "sowie" she said feebly holding her ears and closed her eyes. Suddenly she heard a camera click, she opened her eyes only to see raghu smirking with his phone towards her, she knew exactly what he did. "raghu use delete karo abhi" Antara said trying to snatch the phone from him "bilkul nai raghu said raising his hands higher.

Antara moved closer and tried again but failed "ek shart par" raghu said looking at Antara who wouldn't stop her *give me the phone* acts "kya?" Antara spoke "tu phele apni medicine khayge" raghu said and Antara jumped up high to grab the phone but raghu pulled her down and both kanded on the bed rolling voer each other, raghu on top and Antara as usual at the bottom.

"miss call abhi teri saaza or bhi zadya hogai" raghu said bringing the medicine near her mouth and forced it in, Antara made a yucky face and quickly drank water to get the taste out of her mouth. Raghu sighed in relief and rested his head on her chest breathing calmly, suddenly something clicked his mind.

"miss call abhi teri dusre saaza baki hai" he said smirking and faced her. Antara knew what it was already so she slowly wrapped her arms around his neck and pulled him closer, in no time she sealed her lips with his shocking him. They kissed passionately licking each others lips,nibbling and biting. After a prolonged kiss both parted for air "kya re miss call tu to bari shaani nikli ek dam kiss dar diya" raghu said slightly cleaning his cleaning his lips with his tongue, Antara saw that and was finding hard to control, even her lips went dry so she licked them as well, raghu couldn't control seeing her tongue coming over her lips.

"hayee miss call maar dala" raghu said and before Antara could reply, raghu slammed his lips on hers again kissing her passionately, he bit her upper lip making it bleed but raghu licked the blood off going deeper inside her sweet mouth.

After another 5min of kissing both parted for air, Antara couldn't literally breathe while raghu wanted to kiss her even more.

"raghu mujhe garden mei jana hai" Antara said innocently playing around with his shirt button, raghu didn't want to ruin her happiness "chal theek hai par dehan se acha?" raghu said. Antaras face lit up making raghu smile she nodded and he poked her nose gently.

Antara went out in the garden, it was nice and slow wind was blowing. Antara loved the farmhouse, she wanted to stay there forever and ever "jab raghu se shaadi karoge na to fir yaha ake rahuge uske saath" Antara said to herself and blushed hard.

Someone was eyeing Antara from far away and smirking evilly at her.

Antara kept on walking in between the flowers and touched every one of them taking in their sweet scent and suddenly remembered what raghu once said to her "teri khusboo in flowers se bhi zadya achi or nashiliy hai miss call" Antara blushed at her flashback.

Antara was in the corner of the garden and a man with a mask was right behind her, Antara was unaware of this and continued smelling the flowers gently touching them.

Antara felt somebody behind her, she turned around to look but before she could get a clearer view of the person, they out a hankerchief on her mouth and started dragging her along the main gate.

Antara didn't know what to do she was struggling in his grip, she was trying to break free and bit his hand really hard and started running away "RAGHU!!!" she screamed on top of her voice.

Raghu who was working on a file was having a weird feeling about Antara, when he heard her scream he quickly ran outside on to the balcony.

The person was dragging Antara by her hair and Antara was unconscious because the person put chloroform on her mouth but she was still mumbling raghus name.

In no time raghu jumped off the balcony and was now running behind that person, the man was too quick and ran out of the gate and into the jungle still pulling Antara by her arms.

Raghu was angry as hell and the lion inside him was wide awake and ready to kill the person who dare touch his miss call right there and then.

The person threw Antara behind the bush and ran away seeing raghu so close to him. Raghu was about to catch him but he needed to see Antara first, he would deal with that person later and give him a good lesson.

Antara was bleeding badly and was unconscious, raghu was trying his best to wake her up but she wasn't moving at all. Raghu was crying trying to wake her up "miss call uth na yaar please" but Antara wasn't moving an inch. Raghu checked her pulse, it was undetectable.

Raghu was shocked, he couldn't feel her pulse beating, everyhthing came crashing down on him like a broken mirror and stabbing his heart "nai ye nai ho sakta bappa tu asia nai kar sakta NAHII!! Meri miss call to mujhse nai cheen sakta" raghu broke down and fell on his knees crying.

His hands were bleeding because of the thorns of his way behind that man, raghu slowly looked at Antara who was lying lifelessly on the floor pale, he gave a painful smile towards her face and leaning on her, he gently sealed her lips with his and put the finger which was bleeding in her maang. He filled her maang with his blood.

He turned around and suddenly Antara started coughing and moaned in pain, raghu looked back immediately and cupped her face "miss call tu theek hai" he said kissing her whole face.

Antara nodded slightly and tried to get up "raghu hum kaha hai" she said rubbing her temples, she had a really bad headache and fever was catching her as well "chup hoja miss call abhi tu theek nahi hai" raghu said and got up, he scooped her in his arms while she rested her head on his chest and started walking towards the farmhouse.

Raghu gently kissed Antaras forehead, thats when Antara felt something wet in her maang, she ran her finger through her maang and looked at her finger shocked, it was blood. She looked up at raghu who looked at her lovingly "ajj nai to kal tujhe officially mera to bana tha to abhi ku nai" raghu said kissing her forhead and Antaras pale face again went crimson red while blushing and she looked down embrassed.

Precap: Daadi nei maari entriyan, rantara ke baji ghantiyaan! Loads more romance on the way.

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I hope you didn't fall asleep half way through guys and m so sorry for this torture update

Please tell me if you liked it or not anything welcome shoes rotten eggs anything.

For now I will be concentrating on this story only because I need to finish all of my crap work so please bear with me for sometime...
I am expecting LONG comments from every one of you so please do give them as they make me really happyJ
Edited by honeybees22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
haye hinu ji kya update hain...😳
ek hi update mein itna kuch ho gaya😲😆
rantara ka romance.. hayla.. antu gave kiss... she had become quite bold😉😳😆
nahiii... antu ka kidnaap... raghu ki tadap...😭
and then yee kya.. shadi ho gayi... hayee...
jio meri romantic queen... love uu...🤗
sorry yaar for late in reply... bahut busy thi in dino,,,😊
Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice hinu. Tu kitna accha likhti hai yaar! Mind blowing. .superb..fabulous! I loved the maang bharwing part. Just beautiful! Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
antastic uodate hina ...
dat ws so cute as frst raghus medicine
khilao abhiyan 😆...
n dat romance part ❤️..
bt whos dat guy who hurt antu 😡.
thank god raghu ame in time 😉..
n dat filling of maang ws nice one...
on whole a vry gd update...
n yes precap seems much interesting one...
takecare dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
mind blowing update hina
u write so well now
i understand u r busy too
but your updates make up for it
keep writing dear

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