Rantara SS Pyaar Ka Ikrar Updated pg 44 :)

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Pyaar ka ikrar

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Finally the wedding was over but antara was really sad one because nor had left them and raghu was not back yet and now she was getting restless to see him.

Raghu was still in the village doing some work for ajji and was getting restless to see antara in the lengha she was wearing at the nikah. This was all ajjis plan to make them confess their love for each other but she knew that this was not going to be easy so she took the harder way to do that by sending raghu to the village for 4 days to complete a task and took his phone off him.

Antars home:

Antara beta ja to ye nor appa ke ghar de a.

Said mami

Antara, antara kya hua tujhe

Han, han mami ji kya baat hai

Ja to ye nor ke ghar de a

Ji mamai abhi de ati hu.

It was evening when antara went to noors home and gave her the box. She said bye to them and started walking out of the house.

Raghu was finished with the task that ajji had given him and now was ready to go home to his miscall.

Mei araha hu miss call raghu said in his mind.

Antara was still looking for a rickshaw to take home but she was a van coming towards her so she moved back to save herself from getting hit.

Bhai vo larki to yahi hai said one of the men in the van

Chalo ab yaha se hi pakar le te hai is ko said shetty. It was shetty and his goons coming to kidnap antara for time she had saved raghu and hit him on the head.

Antara was still waiting when the van pulled up to her and the door opened, shetty said antara loud enough for others in the street to hear and run back home.

Raghu was about to leave when ajji called at the landline of the house,

Hello

Chintu kam ho gaya

Han ajji ho gaya ab mei ghar a jau

Han beta a ja

Acha ajji bye

And with that raghu left in his jeep to Mumbai

Shetty and his men came out of the jeep.

Antara was really scared and started crying, aye larki rona band kar apna, said one of the men

Us din bari shani ban rahi thin a said shetty rubbing his head in a weird way.

The only person antara could think of at that time was raghu.

Raghu still had to go a long way but he didn't care because he could meet miss call at her balcony as she didn't sleep without the music but to make her sleep while he was away he recorded it and set a time for it to play but today he would play it himself.

Antara was standing the the middle of the road surrounded by shetty and his men when suddenly shetty took her hand and twisted it till it was read and sore and you could see the hand marks on it.

Raghu was having a weird feeling that antara was not fine and in some kind of trouble. So he started to drive faster to get to her.

Shetty pushed antara into the van when machmach saw him and ran but shetty was quick and drove of.

Machmach wanted to tell raghu but he knew that he didn't have his phone so he went to ajji and told her about what happend and called the police.

In shettys van:

Antara was crying and saying

Please leave me i beg you please

Acha ab bata tujhe kis ke liye chore isilye ke tune bhai ki kopre m danda mara han said one of the men and put chloroform on her face and the last thing she could say was

Mujhe raghu ke pas jana hai and fainted.

Raghu finally reached the basti when machmach came running to him and hugged him crying. Raghu was shocked and surprised to see him like that but hugged him back and asked

Aye machmach kya hua?

Bhai bhai vo yedi..

KYA HUA MISS CALL KO raghu was shocked.

Raghu looked around to see police cars and ajji and some people standing their giving their statement but the person raghu was looking for was not there.

Shettys van:

Bhai ab ise kaha le ke jai

Jungle mei chal waha ja ke kal isko mar dale ge one of the men said

Nai ise mara to raghu hume mar de ga said shetty

Phir ise jungle mei le jai one of the men said

Han shetty said

Antara was unconscious but could hear slightly what they were talking about and started mumbling

Raghu, raghu tum kaha ho

In the basti:

Raghu was shocked and broke the hug and asked machmach

Machmach bol kya hu miss call ko

Bhai vo shetty or uske lok yedi ko utha ke le gai machmach spoke with a broken heart

This was enough for raghu

Shetty ki itne himmat ke vo mere miss call ko le ke jai

The police men came upto to raghu said said

Acha hua raghu bhai app a gai. Hum apni pure koshish kar rahe hai antara ko dondne mei app fikar mat kijei...

FIKAR MAT KARO HAN FIKAR MAT KARO!!

Raghu shouted at the police men

The police men jumped back and said

Bhai vo humne..

Raghu gestured him to shut up and asked machmach

Mm kab le kar gai vo miss call ko

Bhai 3hrs ho gai

KYA!!!

Han bhai mei unke piche bhi bhaga par unke pass van thi.

Raghu asked him if he noted the van number

Han bhai and gave him the number

Raghu looked at the police men and said

Mei apni miss call ko kudh dond lo ga and with that he sat in his jeep and drove away.

Antaras family was not informed about this because after antara went to noors house they had to leave for a wedding and antara was all alone.

Shettys van:

Bhai hum a gai said the driver

Ab ise nikalo hur ander ja ke kamre mei band kar do.

Raghu was driving at full speed looking for shettys van and was angry

Shetty ki itne himmat ke vo mere antara ko haat bhi lagai

Jungle:

The moon light hit the hut and antaras face she was injured because of the pulling around and had hurt her wrist which was now bleeding.

Raghu could feel antaras pain and started to cry he stopped the jeep when he was out out of Mumbai and saw one of shettys men driving away but he was all alone

Raghu quickly parked his jeep at a place where nobody could see it and ran inside the jugle screamimg antaras name.

Antara was still unconsisous but she could feel raghu looking for her.

Raghu could feel antaras presence in the jungle as well so he started running further when he saw one of the men coming from the front and hid behind a tree suddenly he heard the man talking on the phone

Bhai usko kamre mei band kar dia hai aur uske haat mei choot a gai hai.

Raghu was shocked and even more angry when he heard that antaras hand was injured.

The man went out of the jungle and sat into the van and drove away

Raghu saw his chance and ran insde the hut first he saw shetty and his men drinking and playing cards talking and laughing

Raghu was about to go there when he heard a little mumble calling his name and at that moment he knew that antara was really close to him so instead of going and beating up them first he went to look for antara.

One of the men had hit antara badly and now she was injured and bleeding but she knew raghu was close to her and started calling his name.

Raghu found a closed door and tried to open it but it looked like it was stuck. Raghu gave a a big push and it opned but when raghu looked inside the sight was not good.

Precap:

Raghu carrying antara over his shoulder and antara shouting and hitting him on the back a raghu just smiling.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow yaar loved it especially how they could feel each others presence! update soon!
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awesome update hina
love it
continue soon!!!!!!
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Originally posted by: alishamerchant

wow yaar loved it especially how they could feel each others presence! update soon!

thnks dear will cont soon btw i wrote this in 20 mins in the morning when i woke up
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Originally posted by: ayaazukideewani

awesome update hina

love it
continue soon!!!!!!

thnks dear will cont soon
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Lived it waiting fot next part!!
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superb yaar feel the presence. pls continue soon
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Originally posted by: richurachna

superb yaar feel the presence. pls continue soon

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thnks dear will cont soon btw i wrote this in 20 mins in the morning when i woke up






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