my 1st SS..woh meri zindagi haii.. (prt 2 updated@ pg 6)

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neha.angel

@neha.angel

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi jaanias, birdies , sweetheart how r u all guys.. I was thinking how would it be when raghu will realise his lov towards antra how will he react. What kind of emotions he will be going throu so

So I' v written my first SS on that hope you all like it.. plz do hit the like button if you like it n all comments are welcom.. so here u go

Antra was standing n center of basti where raghu, mach mach, mami, all are there and people are blaming antra that she is the one who mixed posion in sweets n that y all people has fallen sick

DM also standing with her chamchas (rasika n manohar )

Rashika- wha rasika kya plan tha jo socha tha yeh to ua se bhi bada damaka hoga more or less ab aye ga maja jab dayya mai is Kashmiri chori ko utake basti se bahar fek degii (in her mind givi evil smile and thinking how her plan got accomplished)

Raghu- chup ekdum ( raghu in aggressive angry mode)

Ab agar kisi ki bhi awaz nikli to apnu se bura koi na hogaa..

Miss call esa nai kar sakti. Mere ko us pe pura barosa hai aur who kye ko milaye gi apni hi banayi mitayi main jehar haa us ka dimag kya tel bechne gaya hai...

Random person- kya raghu bai is kal ki ayi ladki ke liye aap hum sab pe chila rahe hoo is ki waja se dekho kitne log bemar ho gaye hai..

Other guy- haa bai aur methai bhi to isne banayi ti naa to fir aur kon kar sakta hai yeh ..

All together- ha ha yeh is ka hi kam haii .. (all people angrily start busted on antra)

Antra was all sad, scarred, n cryin raghu come in front of her n warn every one to back off

Raghu- agar koi ek kadam bhi is ki tarf bada to mujh se bura koi nai hoga..

All of them again start pointing question on them

Random guys- wah raghu bai esa kya hogaa jo aap is ladki ke liye hum sab ko bhi marne ko utharu hogaye yeh to abhi abhi ayi hai hum to yeha barao se reh rahe haii aaj tak kabhi aap ne esa nai kiya esa kya ristaa bangaya aap ka is se ki aap puri basti se ladne ko tayar hogaye . Lagti kya hai yeh aap ki.

Mach mach all off sudden lose his control n step into the matter n said .

Ek tu hota kon hai bai se sawal karne wala haa baal ki dukan chal chal futle yeha se bai to bad main agar mujhe gusaa agay to jis mu se yeh chabar chabar kar raha hai na aaa bhi nai nikal paye ga..

Again basti wale log antra n raghu ki frndship pe allegation lagana suru kardete haii.

Mach mach baii bina aag ke duha nai uttaa.. aap kis kis ka mu band karo kee sab ke maan main yehi sawwal haii .. kal tak jo bai is ladki se itni nafart karta tha use utha ke basti se bhar fek dita wohi aaj bai ki itni kass dost hogi ki uske liye kya kya kar raha haii.. hum sab ande nai hai. Sab samjhte haii ki kya haii haii..

N all of sudden Dm step Into the matter n shout. .

DM- KHAAAOSH.. chup ho jayoo.. sabb..( n with her wide open extra kajal filled eyes she stair at raghu n antra n said..)

Jawab do raghunath puri basti tum se sawal kar rahi haii yeh sab jana chate hai ki esa kya hai is ladki main ki tum is keliye puri basti se ulaj rahe hoo kya lagti hai timarii..

Antra is all shocked n broken frm inside after heard all this allegation abut her n raghu friendship. She has just discovered last night when raghu huged her after the nigaha when he reached late that how much he is important fr her that she can't even imagine to take a single step with out him. She was still in that cconfusion that what's goin inside her n was enjoying that feelin but all of sudden this mess happen. She is still in shocked how evey one is pointing question on there friendship. That all of no way rasika pop in and said

Rasika- mai woh kya hai naa yeh Kashmiri churi mera matlab yeh antra aur raghu dost haii..

(The min rasika said these line manohar peep in n said n tonting way)

Mahonar- yeh kya baat huyi kabhi kisi ladka aur ladki ko dost bane dekga haa esa kahi hota hai (n he squeeze)(aaachii)

DM- Giving how dare u raghu kind of look to them.

Antra closed her eyes as she was not able to handle this anymore

Raghu gave one tight look to manohar rasika n all basti wale..

N then he turn to antra n saw her cryin with closed eyes. . With soo much off helpless.

As he can't able to see her crying he was abut to rore like a lion but antra held her hand n giv him a plzz do mess it more looks n runs to her room..

Raghu said in very low tone mis call..n crinch his teeth and left the place .. MM also felt bad fr both of them ..DM order every one to go as she will promise who so ever did this will be punished. .. and giv take a deep breath like what ever she want to happen. Happens. .

Rashika after listenin that take manohar n feel scared n went to naik.. sadan..

@ antra place. ..

Mamai- bas kar antra kab tak roti rahe gi is main teri galti nai hai bache tu dekhna sab theek hojaye gaa..

Antra- mami plz mujhe akela chod to mujhe kisi se baat nai karni yeh meri hi galti hai naa sab meri galti.. mujhe bas akela rehna haii..

Mami left the room as she knw antra s highly upset n she want to be alone.

@ raghu balcony

Raghu was pinching his bag harder and harder like a volcano is burin inside him and what ever incident happen today was all repeatin..

He wants to talk to her miss call he was looking at her balcony n found her door s closed he call antra to find out if she s fine but she didn't pick up the ph raghu n full aggression mode only n only what to see her at that particular moment. . He again call her up..

N this time she she picks up..

Raghu- miss calll... tu main. Kab se ... tujhe ph kar raha hu.. tu mera ph kyu nai utha rahi thi.. mujhe kitni chinta ho rahi ti terii.. (raghu was non-stop talking ) ek miss call tu chup kyu.. mooon wat rakha hai kya dekh tu jada mat soch yeh jo bhi loch a huya aaj ...

Antra- humari dosti sayedh yehi tak thi jo aaj katam hogayi.tumahri woh dost.. jis ki maadad ke liye tum kuch bhi karne ko tayar the Tumahri miss call maar gayii. Tu aaj ke baad yeha ph mat karnaa.. (n she cut the ph)

After listening to these words raghu was all broken.. he was angry yet broken he didn't knw how he will react as he will never ever thought this day will com he is still n dilemma . How to react. How can she said such thing to him..

Raghu- ese kese... mm ese.. kh

.khe.. keh sak ti hai .. wohhh.. .. (he was feeli something burning inside him n he trow his ph n anger)

Bass aabhi ke liye itna hii guyss. Meri ugliyaa pain karnelagii next part jaldi hi mile gaa ..

Now u can throw ur sade huye tomato, eggs n chapples .. all r welcome bt plzz do comments n tell me how it u like it or not so that I can post next part...

Enjoooyy...

Part 1 -@page 1

Part 2 -@ page 6

Edited by neha.angel - 11 years ago