my 1st SS..woh meri zindagi haii.. (prt 2 updated@ pg 6) - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww Cutie, i love it! u write really well! please continue asap! will be waiting!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nyc OS!!!
Update soon!!
When u update PM me!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SWEEBILLI

NIce SS Yaar..
aggression of Raghu punchin bag was so wow..
Yaar Rgahu ka aggessive face dekhe decade ho gaye


Thanks

Rashmii😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey dear

Wow a new story from you

Love the first part

Poor Rantara

Both are in so much pain

Waiting to read more

So do continue soon

Take care


Geet

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2 ... ok here next update.. first I was thinking pata nai pasand aye ga ya naii .. but thanks guysss u all are confidence booster. .. so here u go enjoy the next part . I wil promise u well enjoy this even more..hope u all like it more then 1st part..all comments and suggests are well
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Raghu in full aggression goes to antra place ..n hit to door bell..mami ji open the door..
Mami- raghuu.. tum.. kya sab theek to hai naa ..

Raghu- miss call . Mm woh antraaa.. kaha haii ..upar haii naa.. aunty jii . Woh mere ko us se baat karne ka haii.abhii

.mami- raghu lekin wah abhi kisi se baat nai karna chati akele rehna chati haii. Isliye plzz is waqt use akela chodoo .. rehne doo subaa baat karlenaa..

Raghu- naiii.. (Raghuu almost controlin himself n about to yell on mami ji but control himself).
Abhi baat karni haii mere dimag bhut garam hai is waqt mere ko bas sirf us se baat karne ka haii .
Aur koi beech main nai magta hai mere ko. To aap abhi apne kamre main jooo ..
N he straight way goes to her room.
Mami- ra.. rag.raghuu..suno to.. .
Hey bagwaan.. ab ..

Raghu enter n full angry mode in her room. N found antra was lieing on bed n cryin.. he lose his temper with in a sec but som where there somthing is buring Inside him and he didn't even knw what n y all this thing was happening to him. Y such incident effort him so much y can't be see her cryin lik this y can't he control himself when she said dobaar yeha ph mat karan . He want her to scold her fr telling this.. man main raghu was fighting with himself that miss call ki himat kase huyi yeh kahne ki ki woh mar gai aur mai dobara ph na karo woh hoti kon hai
. Us ne yeh fesla kase karliye..
All such things r going inside..

Raghu- .. malum tha mere ko.. jantaa tha main.. Roo rahi hogii.. To esa kaam karti kyu haii jis ki waja se yeh akho ka nal bahana padee.. yedii hai tu ek damm..

Antra is all shocked to c raghu n her bed room . Woh yeha kase agay maine to use keh diya ta na ki ab main kabhi us se baat nai karoo kii yeh ese kese aagaya..

Antra- tu..tummm?!!!.
RGhu- haaa main hi huu koi bhoot nai hai jo esaa reaction de rahi haiii...
Antra- jayoo yeh ase..maine tumhe kaha tha naa ki mujhe tum se koi baat nai karni haii humarii dosti katam aaj see.. abhi see. Isi waqt se...chale jyoo yeha see..
Jayooo.. (she shout ) n she turn her back towards him..

Raghu ko gusaa ata haii yeh sunke but use pata hai ki woh yeha theek se nai bat karpaye gaa so woh antra ki taraf badta haii bina kuch kahe bas gusse se dekgna hai n he grab her hand.

Antra- ra..raghu chodo mujhee .. raghu kyaa kar rahoo.. hath chodo mera .. dard horaha hii. Jane do mujhe.. kaha le ja rahe hoo jane. Do mujhee.. aaa..
Raghu in full aggressive form turn and held her frm shoulder. N said.. chup.. bilkul chuppp. Aur chal mere saath nai to uthake le jaoo gaa. Samjhii..

Antra raghu se hath chuda ti hai n said nai jayo gi bilkul nai jaoo gi. Jo karna hai kar loo. Har baar tumahri damkiya nai chale gi..
Raghu.- main damki vamki nai deta Aur hawa main bhi baat nai kartaa.. n he lift her up in his arm.. n take her to the library terrace...
Antra try hard to make herself free from his grip.but more she try the more she failed..
Terrace pe raghu antra ko niche utarta hai..

Antra- yeh kya hai raghu.. tum mere sath ese jabardasti nai kar sakte..tum mujhe yeha kyu laye hoo . Jayoo yeha see mujhe tum se koi baat nai karni hai. Yehi theek hai..
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Raghu- nai jayoo gaaa... jo karna hai karle.. chilan hai
Chila .. marna haii maar .. jo kar na haii kar par main yeh se nai jayoo.. aur na hi tujhe jane dugaa..
. Jab tak tu mere se baat nai kartii.. samjhii aur haa yeh meri mariji haii terii naii... tune apna fesla suna diya na . Ab tu meri. Sunn.. .
Raghu antra ki tarf badta hai slowly slowly. N antra is moving backwards. She knw that she can resist him if she allow her to com closed to her as som how she knew what she s feelin.

And raghu pinned her to the wall and held both her hand side wise..
Antra is looking soo furious. She is struggling .. but the more she struggle the more raghu tighten the grip..
Antra.- aaa.. ra..raghuu
. Mera haath chodo .. maine kaha meraa hath chodoo .. . N with full force she push him..

Antra- kyaaa.. kyaaa chate ho tum.. aaj jo huya woh kafi nai tha.. tumahre liye. abhi aur kyaa baki haii..(a tear rolls frm her eys to cheeks)
Raghu saw her cryin..
Antra- raghu plzzz main tumhare aage haath jodhti hui
Plzzz jaoo yeha see . Tum mere liye bhut kuch kar chuke hoo aur main dil se tumhe thanks bolti.lekin ab aur naii . .meri muskile meri prob ko sov karte kare dekho kya hogaya baat tum pe agayi aur yeh log nai samjhne wale.. aur sab se ladne ki himat ab main nai rakhtii main...
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Sayedh humari dosti yehi tak thi. .. jis riste ka koi ajam na ho koi naam na ho use ek koobsurat mod pe choddena hi acha hai..
Tum samjh lena ki main kbhi tum se mili hi nai. . Aur main bhi kosish karo gi .. janti hu muskil hoga
Par .. karna hoga. Yehi sahi hai yehi theek bhi rahe gaa. Tum jaoo yeha seee.. pplzz jaooo..

Eh sab sune ke baat raghu is all broken frm inside.. usne kabhi nai socha tha ki esa bhi din aye gaa jan uski miss call us se yeh sab kahe gii us se door jane ki baat kare gi par raghu samjh hi nai parah tha ki yeh kyu ho rah hii use itni takleef kyu horahi haii. Akhir esa kyaa hogay tha. Jo use andr hi andar kha raha tha .. use yeh bardaaht nai huya..
Aur ek volcano ki tarah fut pada..
He held her frm shoulder n again pinned her to wall .. itna gussa use sayedh kabhi nai ayaa yeh soch ke ki us ki miss call ne ye kese keh diya.

Raghu.- tere kehne se kya hota hai.. maine tujhe phele bhi kaha hai aur ek akhari baar bol raha hu kyu ki
Baar bar tape recorder ki tarah bat repeat karne ki aaadat nai hai mere ko. Ab tu meri baat sun tu chahe ya.. na chahe main hamesha Teri madaat karta rahu gaa fir beshak tu hi kyu na gussa rahe mujh se. Teri madat karne keiye mujhe kisi ki bhi permission ki jaoorat nai..kudh teri bhi naii. Samjhi tu . Miss call.

Antra raghu ko jatak ti hai aur gusse se bolti hai
Antra- kyaa mil raha hai yeh sab kar ke. Tumhe koi frk nai padta na koi kuch bhi kahe par...
MUJHE FARAK O
PADHTA HAII..MR.RAGHUNATH NAIK...
Mai nai chati ki log ese bate banyee.. aaj jo bhi huyaa. Woh sab..
Raghu- log...log.log.. kya bate kar te haii
. Sala kab se Tera tap recorder ek hi rag sunna raha haii..
And raghu hit his fist n wall in full anger..and blood comes out of his fist. n antar got scarred..
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Antra- aa.. kya kar rahe ho tu... kudh ko itni takleef kyuu. Kis liyee...tumhare kun (Blood) nikal raha haii. (The min antar held raghu hand to check
Woh ua ka hath jatak deta hai..)

Antra- mujhe dekhe doo chot lagihai ..

Raghu- kyu tujhe kyu itni chinta ho rahi hai mera . Mere ko chot lagi hai na.. tere ko kya.. tune to mujhse sab rista katam kardita naa. Dosti katam sab kalaas naa To fir
. Tere ko kyaaa..haa.

Antra- Raghuu. .
Raghu- bol na miss call ab kyu chup hai tuu..
Antra was feelin like what to say she was all speech less.

Antra- plzzz...
Is sab ko aur mat uljaoo.. .

Raghu- takleef ho rahi hain naa
Mujhe bhi huyi bhut huyii jab tu mere ko boli ki tu maar gai.. aur ph mat karnaa. (First tim n life it felt lik raghu is crying frm heart) par woh dekhna nai chahta tha.. he showed hia anger,

Antra- kyuuu...antra rote rote bolti haii..
Kyu rehti hai tumhe meri itni chinta
. Kyuu mere liyee ladne marne ko tayaar rehnte ho.. kyu mere kuch bhi kehne se tumhe itna fak padta hai.. kyuuu.
She held her collar and said all these words direct lookin into his eyes.. .. somwhere she was feelin somthin deep fr raghu which was defiantly more then frndship. But she wants to knw.. n raghuu who was all stunned. N frozen fr a moment . Coz he himself didn't knw y he did soo.. all what antra said to him was hitting him like som1 is pinching 100 needles at same time..

Antra- amm. nai hai naa jawab.. kuch nai na kahne koo.. to jab kuch nai kahne ko . To theek hai naa. Sab katam.. haa yehi theek rakhe gaa...

Antra waha se chali gayii n raghu wahi kara raha yeh soch ta raha ki kyu.. kyu hai esaa jo bhi antra ne kaha woh sabb.
Kyu aaj pheli baar us ke oaas antra ke sawalo ja jaab nai thaa.. he was alll stunned like statues...

Okkk guys this s 2nd installment of this.SS. hope u all enjoyed it..
N. Plzzz doo hit the lik button if u want me to send u pm fr it.. n I' ll wait fr ur comments. .
And next part will be coming soonnn...




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesme Neha bt Story Adhuri He Abhi
I Think Tumhe 3rd Part Banana Chahiye
Sachi Padhne Me Bahut Maza Aaya bt End Me Adhuri He Story
Edited by A_.R_.786 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb yaar bilkul abhi ke situation se chal raha hai khas aise hi kuch ho serial mein lovely waiting for next updation
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Posted: 11 years ago
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dammm...superb yaar...
its matching with current scenario...
i dont want the basti people questioning antu-raghu...
anyways waiting for next part
Edited by Nichuss - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: A_.R_.786

Awesme Neha bt Story Adhuri He Abhi
I Think Tumhe 3rd Part Banana Chahiye
Sachi Padhne Me Bahut Maza Aaya bt End Me Adhuri He Story


Thnkss..Haaa mujhe pat haii abhi. Puri nai huyii abhi bhut kuch baki haiii but kya karoo likhne lagi thi yeh akasy dogara wali news ne poora mood spoil kardiyaa.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: richurachna

superb yaar bilkul abhi ke situation se chal raha hai khas aise hi kuch ho serial mein lovely waiting for next updation


Thnks yaar tum sab ko pasand aya..next part will com soon

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