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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Lovely update ria
Precap se mujhs vh rantara ki kashmir wali pic yad agaye
Continue soon

thx nikki...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nazi786

Lovey update
Thanks for the pm

thank u so much...

Originally posted by: richurachna

wow I love it lot.

rantara was luking like kids...
now feeling sry for beera. hope DM make him to meet her daughter.
precap make me feeling of ice fight...lol
please update soon

thx richu...😊

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

nice update ria!😊

raghu is so stubborn...apni baat manva leta hai...😆
DM the evil lady...😡
thanks fr pm😊

thx for the reply suchi...😳

Originally posted by: hayakhan5

Amazing ria...
Mast update ...
S**i daya mai... Iska kuch nahin ho sakta...
RaNtara were perfect...
Precap is inintresting...
Thanx for the pm...
Update soon and pm me..

DM to hain hi aisi yaar...😡.. par kya karoon usske wagar story compleete nahi ho sakti na..😆
thx a lot..

Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nichuss

Rantara was playing like small kids...
Somewere in her mind antu realising the attraction of raghu..
But she dnt want to accpt it.
Felt poor for beera...
Will he nvr see his daughter?

thx a lot nichuuu😊
Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: harshita1996

Ria amzing update really..!!

Rantara playing was wonderful der sweet moments
Were amazing..!!
Raghu's feelings r growing up..
Antara is attracted bt she would nt admit so soon..
Dm i hate her..feel sorry fr beera..
Precap eagerly waiting..:)
Thanks fr pm update soon keep writing..<3

thx harshita... urs comments are always so enthusiastic..🤗
Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gargi21

Lovely update dear ria...

Enjoyed raghu n antara's sweet moments...
As i said earlier u have a perfect way to describe things...it was amazing...
But now i think u should take raghu n antara's relationship to next level...the story will become more interesting...
Plzzz start showing their romance...
We all r dying to read it in your way...u describe emotions sooo beautifully...
Just an advice if u like...!!😊

well i am actually wworking on that... and love realization is not so far..😉
Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pampz

this update boring n dragged???? okk toh sun Pampu ko tera yeh boring n dragged update se pyar ho gaya...😉😳 😆

it was mindblowing yaar ... Rantara playing lik a kid ... ohh i enjoyed it so much ...so much innocense is there ... u described them so beautifully ...n now they r heading towards gulmarg ...wow ..
So Dm's face is getting revealed slowly ...
waiting for more
tujhe crown [pasand nahi isliye sending you a diamond bracelet ...abh khush ???😆😉

thik hain agar tujhe mera boring aur drag update se itna pyar hain to main humesha boring and dragged update hi doongi... khuss??🤣
aww thax...😳

aww diamond bracelet... thanku thanku... muahhh...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago


Chapter 30

The huge range of pirpanjal could be seen from the time when the bus crossed the bridge of river jhilam. The huge wavy peaks of the ranges were totally covered with pure white snow glistening in the sun. Two pairs of black and hazel amused eyes were fixed to the view finder of bus from where the huge range could be seen. "ee miscall!! Ye..." antra heard raghu's slow voice near her ear. The bus was full so both of them were standing between the rows of seats. Raghu was standing just behind antara. "haan wohi hain... Gulmarg ki pahari!" antara answered in a unconscious voice. Both were engrossed by the beautiful scenic beauty. As the time passed they came closer to huge white Himalayan range and at last the bus stopped near a huge snow covered ground which was stretched in a very huge far area. And at the end of the ground there stood the huge pirpanjal range with all it's glory, stretching horizontally throughout the skyline. The place was not liketulip garden. Not vibrant and colorfull. But the only single color of white snow makes everyone dumbstruck with it's first look. There was such a peace and silence allover in the air which makes feel a pure bliss. And the small green and grey glint of alpine trees on the white snow looked like the green spot over the huge white curtain. It was hard to believe that the pure white color could also create such magic. The place was fulfilled with the cheerful sound of visitors who were playing on the snow and the continuous blabbers of horse owners who were calling the visitors to make a visit on their horse. But their chaos seemed nothing in front of the huge silence of the place. Leaving them behind, antara stood in front of the huge railings which were surrounding the huge golf course of gulmarg. The golf course is one of the largest in asia. It was covered by snow that time. She saw some kids playing at the snow, throwing snow balls to each other. Antara smiled remembering about her snow ball fight with ishan and papa. She as lost in those children's' play when a strange sound reached her ear. It was like the sound of rattling teeth. She looked at side and looking at the scene she couldn't afford to giggle. Raghu was standing at her side folding his hand on his chest, trying hard to control his shiver, which was causing by cold weather. Antara forgot that they were in formal cloths which were not enough to resist the cold weather of Gulmarg. Antara was habituated with the cold so it was not bothering her much but it was too much for raghu. "bahut hasi aa rahi hain na tere ko?!" he said in an irritated voice. "nahin...!!" Antara controlled her giggle, "it's okk. First time aisa hi hota hain.. dhire dhire adat ho jayegi. Waisey bhi baraf ka maidan hain to thand to paregi hi na..." she said. "arey thand apun ke Mumbai mein bhi parti hain... par ye too kuch jyada hi ho gaya..." he said quivering. "tum ek kaam karo, udhar shop mein garam kapre milte hain... wahan se bhare par le lo..." she advised. "naai mere ko nahi pahen na wo gorille ke jaise kapre... apun ekdum pappu kaisa dikhega... hachooo!!" he suddenly sniffed causing her to laugh again. "raghu yaad hain..." she said while giggling, "tumne mujhe ekbaar kaha tha ki Mumbai current maar ta hain?!!..." she asked. he remembered the moment when they were searching for ishan. "haan too?.." he asked in the same tone. Antara came a bit close to raghu and looked directly to his confused eyes. Her casual movement amused her a bit. Day by day she was becoming more casual and comfortable with him. She smiled a little, "baat ye hain ki..." she said in a slow but firm voice directly looking to his eyes, "sirf tumhara Mumbai nahin... meri Kashmir bhi current maarta hain... barfila current!!..." she laughed, "aur agar iss current se bachna ho na to thori der ke liye raghu se pappu ban jaon... nahi to tumhare manohar chacha ki tarah puri life chikna parega..." she said. Was that hazels had some hypnotizing power?! He couldn't even have the power to look away from those warm eyes. He just got drowned into them. "ab dekh kya rahe ho chalo..." she said and moved to the shop. Raghu looked at heer moving fig and took a deep breath. What affect that sweet innocent girl was causing him all the time?! He was steal uneable to understand but it was getting clearer that she had became so much important in his life that he couldn't imagine a single moment without her. "yeri!!.." he said slowly with a gentle smile and followed her.

"arey chacha thamba.. kitna pahenao ge? Puri dukan mere pe charane ka iradha hain kya?!!" ragh said in irritation fixing the chain of his huge jacket. He felt like a heavy load was put on him. "kar kya rahe ho yaar... hath pair bhi hilane layak nahi chora..." he said. The old man, who was the owner of the shop, smiled looking at his condition. At that moment antara came out from the attached room of the shop. She was wearing just a black cardigan and a white woolen hat which made her look so cute. She looked towards raghu for a while with confused look and then burst into laughter. "haan, hans le... jitna chahein hans le... jab apun ka time ayega na... tab apun bhi dekh lengey.." he said struggling with his huge dress. Still she didn't stop laughing. "abhi aise hi hans ti rahegi ya chalegi bhi?!" he asked. "haan chalo..." antara said holding her laugh. Soon they came out from the shop and went towards the cable car station. The cable cars were called gondola generally. That gondola leads the passenger to the highest point of gulmarg. After some moment both of them took the gondola ride and begun their journey. From the glass window of gondola both of their amused eyes were fixed outside. The huge snow covered ground and the alpine forests were flashing behind and they were heading towards the huge ice peak at front. After some moment the gondola reached at the highest station. They got out and moved forward. At last they were standing at the front of a huge white desert. Each and every where there was pure white snow without a single tress of other colors! A snow ground literally over which the sun rays were glowing and making blurring eyesights at a time. "ye wohi jagah hain jiske barein mein main ajji se keheti thi..." antara said looking towards the snow ground. Raghu didn't give any answer and looked at her huge cheerful innocent grin. Exactly like the girl of that photo frame. At last he brought back her. a satisfied smile appeared on his face. "haan sach kaha tha tune.. bole to ekdum superhit housefull jagah hain.." he said with a huge grin. "raghu ye gulmarg ka snow ground hain... Friday ka cinmema hall nahin!!" she said giggling. "arey ek hi baat hain... tareef karna hain to bas kardo... tere ko samajh aa gaya na?!! bass..." he said. "tum aur tumahatri language... Uff!!... main kahin apni language bhool na jaoon..." antara said giglling. "arey wo sab chor ye baat bata udhar kya ho raha hain?!" he indicated at far here some people were busy in various plays on snow. "arey wahan to skiing kar rahe hain sab..." She said. "arey mast hain... chal apun log bhi karte hain..." raghy dragged her hand in excitement. "ek min, ek min..." antara hold back his hand. "kya huya?!.." he asked. "tumhe skiing karna hain?!!" she rolled her eyes in utterly unbelievable look. "haan toh?!!.." he was confused. "tumhe ata hain skiing karna?!!" she asked in confused tone. "arey usme kaunsi bari baat hain... wo apun English film mein dekha hain... wo dono hath mein danda pakarke wo lamba machli kee par jaisa joota (skiing accessories) laga ke bas baraf pe slip maar na parta hain..." he said. Antara blinked a bit, "tumhe pata bhi hain skiing karna kitni muskil hain... tumse nahin hoga..." she said in unbelievable voice. "tere ko humesha aisa kyun lagta hain ki mere se nahin hoga... tere ko ata hain karna?" he asked. "haan par thora bahut, utna acha nahi atta..." she said. "to bas!! Tu sikha dena... ab chal na...!!' he dragged her hand. She understood that she couldn't stop him. After all he was always stubborn. He said that he would get whatever he wanted and here he was again. with a big sigh antara approved and followed her.

Both of them came at a quite corner of the snow ground a little bit away from people. "ee miscall idhar kayeko le ayya... mere ko uss uchayi se kudna tha..." raghu said indicating towards the higher place. Antara hold her laugh and said, "pahele iss choti si dhalan (slope) ko thik thak paar kar lophir jitna chahein tum uchayi se jump maron... main kuch nahin kahene wali..." she said. Both of them were wearing the accessories and costumes of skiing. Antara hold her stick with both hand and looked forward. "ready?!!" she asked. "arey apun to kab se ek taang pe khara hain... tu chal na.." raghu said. "haan par skiing ke liye apne dono legs ka use karna..." she teased. "arey tub hi na..." he said. Antara bended a bit and motioned her body on the slope. Then pushing the sticks back she slide on the slope her hairs flew behind. Ice cold wind rubbed her chicks and a pleasant smile appeared in her face. after a swift movement she landed perfectly at the end of slope and looked back to raghu with smile. Her swift movement proved that she was quite expert in that thing. "thik hain... ab tum aa jaoo.. aur haan samhal ke... apna balance thik rakhna!" she warned. "arey tu fikar mat kar dekh main kaise jhakass slip maar ke ata hoon...!!" he said with a grin. that's what I am afraid off that he is going to slip!' she thought inwardly. However he started to came down through slope. At first it was going good but at the middle of the slope he lost his balance. In front of antara's wide worried eyes, his stick fell down from his grip and with a stumbled zigzag moment he speadened directly towards her. before they both could understand the situation he slide on the slope and crushed on her. both of them hold each other to get balance but failed. Antara couldn't face raghu's weight and her back crushed on the ground spreading powdery snow at sides and after just a few nanoseconds raghu fell on her top. Due to the motion raghu and antara's body rolled on the snow. Both of them tried to hold each other to get their balance but failed. Raghu's hand touched her waist to hold on her and antara grabbed his jacket's collar tightly. Rolling all over down the slope over each other at last they reached at a plane portion and their rolling features got resisted. Antara's back hit the ground and raghu on top of her. Raghu took a deep breath and suddenly he noticed antara at his beneath. His breath stopped at the moment. He noticed her face. Just a mere inch beneath her! Her eyes were squeezed shut due to fear. Her hairs were ruffled badly on her necks and on the ground. Still it was looking marvelous. Snowflakes were scattered on her face, her hairs, her close eyelids and her chicks glorifying her pure innocent face. she was taking heavy breaths and her tender lips were trembling out of shakiness. Like a beautiful pure innocent beautiful snow angel fallen from the sky just for him. his eyes caught the most intense gaze. His expression became so much tender. His heart seemed dancing in some unknown joy. He never admitted but from the very first day when he saw her through that broken window he felt a chill in his spine which was he feeling exactly at that moment. Due to their initial fights and conflicts his subtle feeling was suppressed, but at that moment he wanted to admit that she was the most beautiful girl he ever saw in his whole lifetime!! Unknowingly he was slowly leaning closer to her, more prominently towards her lips. He badly wanted her to open her eyes. He wanted to c her warm hazels, his reflection in her eyes. Antara at last opened her eyes slowly which caused raghu to resist his motion. Antara gasped suddenly finding raghu's face that close!!! She felt her heart thudded loudly at his first sight. A chill ran don her whole feature which she never felt before. She slowly looked at his eyes and for the first time she got to notice the intensity which made her dumb. That eyes, so intent and there was a unknown hunger. She didn't know what was that, but it caught her totally. So many unspoken words, emotions were emanating from those eyes. Some of them are readable but so many unreadable words. Their eyes got locked with each other like a magnetic pull. Their heavy breath collided with each other. They were so close that they could feel each other all over. Their loud uneven heartbeats, their shivers, their excitement running through their nerves- their each and every slightest movement was so clear to each other. Antara was feeling Goosebumps all over her feature. She never felt so much intense feeling before. It was so new to her. Even there was so much cold she felt like she was burning in his intense gaze. The heat emanating from his strong feature was melting her all over. She couldn't say a single word rather than staring helplessly in his intense eyes. The time seemed stopped for them. it seemed like there was no one in the world rather than both of them. "hey... Come here!!..." suddenly someone's loud scream break their trance. It seemed like both of them came out of some beautiful dream with a jerk. Raghu looked to the source of sound and saw an aged man who was calling her daughter to come out of snow. Raghu slowly looked back to antara who was lowering her gaze with shy look. There was also a slight pink glow on her chicks which was looking so cute. Antara felt his gaze on her. for the first time she was feeling hesitant to look at his face directly. What was happening between them?! He was the same raghu with whom she used to fight before some days. Convincing herself somehow antara hesitantly lifted her eyelids and dared to look at him. she found him looking back to her with such a pleasant smile. Her hesitation was vanished at that instant and she smiled back sweetly. The heavy air became light again. raghu got up from her top and let her up. "chacha se kaha tha ki itna nahi charaneka apun pe..." He said irritatingly fixing his jacket. Antara laughed again looking at her condition. "maine kahan tha tumse nahin hoga..." She giggled. "oye chup kar..." he said in irritated voice brushing away snowflakes from his dress. Her giggle increased. Raghu looked at her face with a deep look. She was laughing like a kid again. but what just happened a moment ago?! It was not something normal. It was very strong and he desperately wanted to know what was happening to him. Not just him, even antara was responding weirdly to him. He wandered, did she also feel something towards him just like he was feeling for her.

Precap: she pushed the bell and joined her hand closing her eyes. A smile was playing on her face and slowly her lips were moving. Raghu wandered what she was praying to god with so much cheerful face.

ps: i don't know what i have written actually...😕... when i read it i felt like i again managed tyo write another crap... now i am totally confused about what it have come out...😕.. now upto u what i deserve... joota, chappal aur anda???😆

Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

wow beautiful update ri

loved the rantara monets and skiing omg he fell
unknown feeling is love hayee
abhi jaldi confession karde
pls cont asap
Edited by honeybees22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ria...it ws fab dear .i loved d rolling of rantara.
N dere visit to gulmarg hopes it brings dem close
Woww..im loving Rantara more n more...
Plz jldi se pyar ho jaye jldi dono ko..
Thanks dear fr d lovely update...
Happy writing dear..
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Posted: 11 years ago
woww!! so beautiful update yr...😳
ria...i must say that i am really enjoying whole Kashmir Track😛...thanks a lot dear🤗...and mujhe iss rolling se jungle wali rolling yaad aa gayi..😉😆
thanks fr pm😊
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