Thread 1 Rantara SS JAAN (UPDATE part 23 pg148) - Page 103

Originally posted by: shreya2748

Sorry I wasn't commenting all these days but I'll be back once I'm done with my exams
And u know na I love ur ff just wasn't getting time to comment properly
Plz don't stop sending pms :(

Originally posted by: shivam4387

wow!
Loved it!
Ddej ki aise story hota kash!

Bada maza aaya Satya ko ullu banaya. 😛
OMG!!!! dis Satya is really fattu. He is so over confident abt everything. I Iuved d part when Muchmuch forcefully puts d dog biscuits into Satya,s so called powerful bodyguard's mouth.
I luved d way u portrayed d fight scenes nd d RaNtara moments also.
I wish this shuld hv happened in the show.😕
Plz jaldi se nxt update de do. I'm vey much excited.
Can't wait anymore to read d nxt update.😃

omg loved it

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

omg loved it

oh ho toh raghu ko antara ko utha kar le gaya wah

and nw lets see wat happens wen antara will come in her senses

do update soon

Originally posted by: pampz

ohhh its u Alisha ...am sorry yaar mereko pata nahi tha-No worries yaar i was kidding..people that talk to me every single day couldn't recognise me and were asking me who i am 😆 ...dat u chanded ur id ...n thank u sooo much dear for loving d update ...i was pretty much confused ...n i was googling ecstasy drugs effects n side effects on a girl -awww so sweet you work so hard to give us such nice updates!😳...as i wanted to draw a true picture about how might Antara could behave after she was drugged... i hope my attempt was ok-it was not ok...it was awesome and trust me when i say that! ...thnx dear for appreciating me so highly ...

Hey dear super interesting update...
Da location of cottage ws super bbb...
Really i visualize da cottage nd i feel myslf dere in da gallery where aaji ws standin nd w8in 4 raghu 😉
I ws bit scared vn monster lyk raju or wtevr dogi cam 2 raghu
Ba wn he becm friendly thn 1 dialogue ov a unknown hero blast in my mind k
Jab do dil pyar krtay han tu poori kainaat means nature unhan 1 krny man lag jaati hy...
Nd thn i njoyed dat moment wn raghu put dat sick damn so called designers outfit on fire ...da flames from dat outfit calmx my temperament which ws lost wn dat idiot monster satya ws tryin to trap poor antu...
@ last njoyed da last blast wn raghu put antu on bed my guttermind activated nd thought yeh kya aaji k samnay hi...
Ba thnx God he just tied hr up nd picked hs responsibility nd xit...
1 suggestion 4 u hope other readers wll also agree
U shold gv audition 4 writer ov ddej nd hope u vll kick out da other experienced writers nd vll b selected...
Last request plx gv nxt update b4 weekend if it ix possible as i can't w8

Originally posted by: Rantaraolic

Originally posted by: KAJU10

Bada maza aaya Satya ko ullu banaya. 😛
OMG!!!! dis Satya is really fattu. He is so over confident abt everything. I Iuved d part when Muchmuch forcefully puts d dog biscuits into Satya,s so called powerful bodyguard's mouth.
I luved d way u portrayed d fight scenes nd d RaNtara moments also.
I wish this shuld hv happened in the show.😕
Plz jaldi se nxt update de do. I'm vey much excited.
Can't wait anymore to read d nxt update.😃

Oh teri ki raghu antu ko kidnap karke le gaya haye 😳 or maja to ab aaega phattu to gusse me lal peela hoga 😆 bs next part me us phattu ki dhulai karana kamina apni harkato se baz nae aaega 😡 bole to ek dum bindas rapchik mast dhasu update update soon 😉