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Posted: 11 years ago
wow scray precap yaar cont soon
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Hi !!!!!
I'm new to dis forum.
I hv read all ur updates. They r exceptionally awesome.
Waiting eagerly fr d nxt update.
Plz PM me d nxt part.


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Originally posted by: KAJU10

Hi !!!!!
I'm new to dis forum.
I hv read all ur updates. They r exceptionally awesome.
Waiting eagerly fr d nxt update.
Plz PM me d nxt part.


thank you Kaju for liking my updates...n welcome to my ss jaan ...do continue reading n gv ur reviews ...as Rantarian readers' comments inspire me to write down the next part ...
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Guys i think i have gone totally mad while writting this update ...anyways ...my madness is increasing day by day ...n u guys need to bear me at any cost LOLLZZZ...
so here goes my story ...don know how u all r going to react after reading this ...plzz let me know so that i can write down the next part ...
PART 22:
Satya's beach cottage was no doubt a beautiful place but with a strange creepy feeling hovering on it. It had a backdrop of a beautiful greenery n it was faced towards the sea surrounded with hard wire fence lined with palm n coconut trees. It had a large nice garden in front of it ...n the colossal fort like main gate had a conceited golden name plate on it proclaiming the owner of that cottage ..." Satya Naik".
The beach cottage no way had any similarity with any simple cottage...actually it was a huge bunglow with huge doors and windows all made of crystal clear glasses which were covered with heavy curtains. It could be easily imagined with the sight of the bunglow that it was loaded with precious furnitures n luxurious stuffs.
When Satya reached his beach cottage along with Antara ...it was around 9 pm. A monster like guard and a black bloodhound welcomed his car.
The bloodcurdling bark n sight of the huge dog made Antara gasp n cringe in fear. Satya gaped at her ...n gave a weired smile ...: tum darti hui ...ghabrati hui aur bhi zyada khubsurat lagti ho Antara ...I like that ...I mean I love that...yesss!!! Waise his name is Sheru... my ferocious doggy...mere ishare par kisiko bhi kaat kha sakta hai ...
Antara turned her face towards the window opposite him...it just flashed into her mind how Raghu always appeased her fear whenever she got scared of anything ...it was him only after her father on whom she could rely completely n rest in his arms forgetting her fear. Tears rolled down her face as she knew those arms were a killer's arms...killer of her own beloved father ...where she found herself most safe n secured always. And the irony of destiny was that ...her family n she had moved here in this weired place with even a more weired person Satya... to keep a safe distance from him ...so that his arms could never reach her.
Satya got down from his car n asked the guard something ...the guard whistled once and around fifteen gun men came out of their hidden positions...the guard informed that there were more fifteen gun men in the back portion of the bunglow. He also informed that Ajji along with Antara's family had already reached and there were more eight security men within the house. That meant total thirty nine security men including him covered the whole bunglow and its surrounding area...he further assured Satya that not even a fly could enter the bunglow without his permission n none could escape either from the house. Satya was happy to see the arrangements and got into the car n moved towards the bunglow. The giant gate was closed making a loud creeking noise confirming the incarceration of Antara in Satya's fatal grip.
Antara was scared even more after seeing the security arrangements...she couldn't figure out clearly... what could Raghu do with her more after breaking her heart so brutally into pieces... fearing which her mamaji agreed to Satya n allowed him to bring her here. Antara was totally unaware that she was brought here purposely to get married with Satya on that very night...neither Satya disclosed it to her nor her own mamaji as mamaji was totally driven by Satya then.
Satya didn't let Antara meet her family n Ajji. He pulled her alone to a room in the second floor just adjacent to his suhag raat special room. it was a huge luxuriously decorated room with a balcony facing the sea . Satya entered the room along with Antara n asked her to stay there. Antara wanted to meet her mom n mamaji but Satya said that she had to wait more to meet her family... Leaving her perplexed in the room alone Satya left locking the door from outside.
Antara went to the bed n collapsed on it closing her eyes...too many thoughts were coming into her mind like a flood...she was being unable to control them. All the happy moments with Raghu came on rushing in front of her eyes as if she was visualizing them all at once ...along with these the screams n the agony that she had gone through just few hours back on her wedding hour ...she could see n hear them again ...she again went through how Raghu himself had accepted that he was responsible for her father's death...all came into a chaotic motion ...her own house at Kashmeer ...her papa...her mamma ..her lil brother ...Nur Apa...all came live in front of her laughing running ...talking happily around her ...she smiled seeing them ...n at the same time she could see the horrifying bombblust ...her papa's burnt body in front of her ...she covered her ear and shut her eyes tightly to avoid that horror ...she felt like all the happy and unhappy moments of her life were just fighting crushing and jumbling with each other in her brain to come in front of her eyes all at once ...making her limbs almost numb.
Satya came to Ajji n Antara's family n said Antara is taking rest n she didn't wanna meet anyone before marriage. Ajji bickered : kyun ???? mereko meri pote ki dulhan se milna hai ...
Satya: Ajji plz do understand ...she is not in a mood to talk to u ...aur panch minute me shadi suru bhi ho jaigi ..tab use dekh lena ...
Ajji pushed Satya aside n said in a low voice : tu apni dulhan ko naya jora pahnayga nahi kya? Wo Antara to abhi bhi wo Raghu ka diya hua jora hi pahni hui hogi ...matlap abhi bhi wo Raghu ki hi dulhan bani hui hai...ja kisiko bhej teri dulhan ka mast jora laneko ...phir shadi karneka soch...
Satya rolled his eyes n said in a cruel voice: yeh to main notice hi nahi kiya tha Ajji... thnx...wo Raghu ka diya hua jora pahni hui hai matlap jaise ke abhi bhi Raghu use chu raha hai ...
Satya left Ajji n called up some of his men n asked to get a wedding dress for Antara. He rushed upstairs n reached Antara's room.
Eighty kilometers away from Beach cottage... on the road:
Machmach n Rukhsana were with Raghu in his jeep who was driving in a wild speed to reach Satya's beach cottage in time. Raghu's jeep was followed by a black Bolero and a white car. In the black Bolero Pakiya was there with nine men all having gun, hockey sticks n chains. The white car was driven by Chotu along with six more men all primed with their guns , knives ,chains n etc.
Raghu was hell worried n scared for his misskaul ...he knew Satya could do any bloody thing with her as she was Raghu's love. He remembered how Satya was always keen to destroy beautiful things as it gave him immence pleasure to do so...and Raghu knew ...Raghu's love was beautiful indeed. Satya would get double pleasure to destroy Raghu's love brutally. Raghu restlessly ran his fingers through his hair to calm his mind n prayed to his Bappa to keep safe his misscall. He looked at his watch n it showed it was nine thirty at night. He turned to Rukhsana n asked: Rukhu tujhe yaad hai kitne baje Satya ne misskaul ko drugs diya tha...?
Rukhu: han kuch aat baje ke aas paas...hum kab tak pohchenge Raghu?
Raghu: hum shahar se nikal chuke hain...aur bis ya pachhis minute...
Raghu said to his jaan in his mind ...: misskaul plzz tu apna khayal rakh... bas aur kuch der ke liye ...drugs ka asar khudpe hone mat dena ...kuch der ke liye rok ke rakh ...main aaraha hun ...
At Beach cottage :
Antara was lying on her back on the bed like a lifeless bride...with her eyes closed. She was feeling very much awake but numb as the complex thought process in her mind was creating a havoc. She was totally getting engrossed more n more into the commotion between the contented n discontented events that had taken place in her life. She became a bit careless about her body. She didn't perceive that her dupatta didn't cover her choli fully n it also revealed a part of her bare smooth waist. Her flair of lahenga fell from the bed n touched the floor. She kept her one hand on her tummy n the other was laying beside her head. Satya entered the room n freezed his eyes on her. He was gawking at her beauty top to bottom like a hungry man n moved towards her ...he bent very close to her face n took a deep breath n Antara jerked open her eyes. Satya gave a wicked smile to her n said in a nasty voice: Aaahhh...u smell so good Antara...is it your perfume or its your own body aroma?
Antara widened her eyes in shock n tried to move away from him on the bed but Satya held her upper arms n stopped her forcefully n said showing off his concern to her ...: Antara ...r u ok ??? tum kuch thik nahi lagrahi ho ...I wanna do something to you...trust me ...tum achcha feel karogi ...he started trailing his hands on her arms ...
Antara didn't resist him but distorted her face by his touch n said in a feeble voice: nnahi...main thik hun...tum jao...jao yehanse...chodo..hhh
Satya was about to touch her clothes as well ...Suddenly Ajji entered the room n called him by his name loudly : SATYAAA!!!!!!...and Satya stopped what he was doing n looked angrily to his Ajji n said :aap yehan kya karrahi ho Ajji ..Antara kisise milna nahi chahti ...aap jao ...
Antara managed to shove off his hands from her n cried out helplessly: nnahi Ajji...aap mat jao ...yeh Satya mujhe mamma se bhi milne nahi diya...
Ajji guessed everything n she was sure Antara could never agree to marry Satya unless she was trapped very badly...Ajji was definite that it was Satya who somehow manipulated Antara's whole family n her. Ajji doubted this n that was the reason why she intentionally came here with Satya's men n then convinced him to bring a new wedding dress for Antara so that she could get some more time and call her dearest Chintu here to save his jaan Antara.
Ajji smiled at Satya n said : kya re? ... abhi se apni honewali par rok jama raha hai ...pahle shadi to ho jane de ...abh tu ja yehanse aur shadi ka jora la iske liye ...main iska khayal rakhti hun ...
Somehow Ajji convinced Satya n managed to be with Antara. Satya realized that it would be difficult to get close to her before that so called marriage as Ajji was hovering on them...he repented that it would have been better if he didn't bring this old lady in his beach cottage and now he would have to tolerate her as there was no other option left...he could not compel his Ajji to stay behind like Antara's family as he knew Ajji could call her daughter Daya n make some nuisense here. Satya hadn't tell his Maai about his marriage as he was sure that his maai would not support him as usual. Therefore he decided to bring the jora in next to no time n get married as soon as possible by hook or crook n move to his special room with Antara where no one would dare to disturb him. Satya left Antara along with Ajji n locked the door from outside.
Ajji noticed Antara n soon felt that she was not ok ...she asked Antara to lie down n close her eyes peacefully as she was there to take care of her n then moved towards the balcony. Ajji tried to call someone from her phone... but to her illluck she saw her phone had no charge...she cried to her Bappa n prayed: Bappa sab tere hath mein hai abh ...kisi bhi tarah mere chintu ko yehan bhej do ...wo aa jayega to sab sahi kar dega ...warna bohot galat ho jaiga is masum bachhi ke sath ...
Around 10.00 pm Outside Beach Cottage :
Raghu's jeep and the bolero and white car stopped around half kilometer away from Satya's beach cottage beside the greenary. There were no lights on the road and it was thoroughly dark then. They all got down from their jeep and car and Raghu asked Ruku to wait on the white car there.
He instructed Pakiya to take the bolero to the backward keeping a distance from the beach cottage and he himself would be taking his jeep to the left of the cottage crossing the front gate.
Raghu knew that Satya would be arranging high end securities to keep safe himself on the whole area...therefore he asked his men to make small groups of three or four n attack one gun man at a time breaking the wire fence. He himself would be entering the cottage from the left side...Raghu declaired that they should not take more than fifteen to twenty minutes all total to curb down all the security men along the fence area...Raghu n machmach would be entering the cottage at first n hence rest of them .
Once Raghu gets Antara ...he wd be taking her away from the cottage n pakiya n chotu wd be taking care of Antara's family n after finishing the operation they wd take them to the basti safely.
Accordingly Raghu's expert men started knocking down one by one Satya's security men silently who were on duty around the fence area outside the cottage .
Raghu, Machmach and Pakiya three of them slowly entered the left portion of the cottage area breaking the wire fence...which was near the main gate. Raghu put his iron grip on one security man's neck from behind n gave a perfect pressure on the right point n the man lost his sense n collapsed on the ground...Pakiya tied him immediately within seconds. They did this to more three security men within few minutes.
Suddenly the bloodhound Sheru sensed something and got impatient. He barked and wanted to run towards the left...the monster guard felt something wrong n loosened Sheru's chain ...the moment Sheru was free he ran to the left direction ...the monster also ran behind him doubting something wrong.
Pakiya got frozen and whispered: Bhai ...abh kya hoga ...hamare piche kutta chod diya ...yeh sala kutta to hume kaat khayega ...
Machmach and Raghu too became worried... And soon within a minute a blackish brown huge bloodhound seen coming running towards them ...n a monster like man was also seen behind the bloodhound.
Raghu abruptly stopped moving and said : yeh agar Sheru hai to chinta ki koi baat nahi warna ...he signaled Machmach with his eyes...
Machmach smiled revealing his shining 32 n said : haan bhai ...apun ready hai ...khatarnaak doggy ko sulaneka biscuits yeh dekho ...
Machmach apna daant dikhana bandh kar aur packet se biscuits nikaaal ...nahito mereko shoot karna padega...:Raghu gritted his teeths...
But before Machmach could open the packet Sheru jumped upon Raghu n put his front legs on his shoulders showing his huge tounge to him and shaking his tail robustly...
Raghu was taken aback for few seconds then he smiled back n caressed Sheru's head with affection n said : meri misscall ko wapas lene aya hun ...terese baad me baat karunga Sheru ...aur haan tere sath wo Ravan kaun hai ?? usko idhar leke aa ...usko sulaneka hai ..
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Sheru removed his legs from Raghu and ran back towards the monster guard ...and within a minute the monster was seen coming holding Sheru's chain huffing violently and muttering ..: kya hai ...kya dikhana chahta hai ...idhar to kuch bhi nahi hai...Bhao ko agar pata chala apun main gate pe nahi hai to mereko mar dalega ...chal wapas chal ...
Raghu gave a grave punch on the face of the monster and then next second kicked hard on the back of his knees. The monster was not at all ready for this ...he collasped on ground on his knees but he managed to grab Pakiya's leg and made him fall on the ground badly. Machmach by then was able to open the packet of biscuits and he said : Ohh terri ... abbey motu tu to bara shana nikla ...mera Raghu Bhai ka punch hajam karta hai ...zara yeh hajam karke dikha...saying this he thrusted few biscuits into the mouth of that monster ...n covered his mouth...
The monster swallowed the biscuits but took out his gun from his waist and pointed towards him ... Raghu within a fraction of a second jumped up and gave a vigorous dribble on his hand breaking his wrist...the monster's gun propelled out from his hand n Pakiya caught it . After this Pakiya and Machmach punched the monster n beat him with hockey sticks till he lost his senses and then tied him up so tightly that he would not be able to move an inch even after gaining back his sense.
Three of them moved more near the huge bunglow. In the second floor in a balcony Ajji was seen standing there alone and wiping her tears. Raghu looked up at his Ajji n muttered : ho na ho meri misscall Ajji ke sath hi hogi ... apun Ajji ke balcony pe chadta hun ...Machmach tu bajuwala dusra balcony me chad ja ...aur Pakiya tu bunglow ke ander ghus ...phn silent mode vibration me hai na sabki ...?
The two of them noded back to Raghu. Misscall miltehi apun tumdono ko khabar kar dunga ...misscall ki family aur Ajji ko lekar pakiya tu basti lot jana aur Machmach tu mere sath lotega samjha...:Raghu gave them the final instructions...
Inside Beach Cottage:
Satya unlocked Antara's room n entered with a well-off packet in his hand...Ajji was in the balcony alone praying to her Bappa...and Antara ...she was still lying on the bed closing her eyes ...
Antara's brain was a bit calm now. The torturous commotion between the happy n unhappy incidents of her life that was going on in her brain ...seemed to be getting milder now...scenes were still coming live in front of her eyes but in a tolerable manner...they were not fighting n jumbling with each other to come in front of her eyes all at once. She was feeling a bit lighter n better.
Satya moved near Antara n jerked her harshly..: bohot rest karli tumne Antara...abh apni aankhe kholo aur jag jao ...dekho tumhara honewala pati tumhare liye kya laya hai ...
Antara gasped opened her eyes n weakly raised n sat on the bed. Ajji came in held her hand n said :tu pani piyegi beta? Satya tu iske liye pani leke aa...
Satya ignored Ajji n pulled Antara's hand strongly n made her raise from the bed n stand in front of him ...he opened the packet n revealed a golden bridal lahenga choli...
This is for u my love...mumbai ka sabse posh designer boutique se khas tumhare liye laya hun ...ye tum apni shadi me pahnogi ...chalo abh yeh sara hua dress utaro and yeh bridal lahenga pahenlo ...:Satya said with an arrogance
Antara tried to free her hand from him n asked casually: kiski shadi ?
Satya twitched her hand giving her pain n smiled at her cunningly :hamari shadi Antara...us khuni Raghu se apne aap ko hamesha ke liye azad kar lo Antara...tum mujhse shadi kar rahi ho abhi isi waqt ...phir hum humesha ke liye ek ho jayenge...
Antara winced in pain n said in a weak voice: hamari shadi ?...nnahi ...mujhe abhi koi shadi nahi karni ...mujhe mamma ke pas jana hai ...mamma pareshan hogi mere liye...chodo mujhe ...
Satya gazed at her n said: Antaraaa...tum mamma ke pas jana chahti ho na ????
Antara noded eagerly.
To phir pahle tumhe mujhse shadi karni padegi ...:Satya smirked at her slyly...korogi na tum mujhse shadi???
Antara looked at him impassively n said: haan...hhh ...
Ajji was shocked seeing her evil grandson n said fumingly: galat tarike se shadi kar raha hai tu Satya ...tu kabhi khush nahi rah payega ...kyun tu is masum ladki ko itna dard deraha hai ...?
Satya glared at his Ajji n pushed Antara harshly making her fall on the bed n threw the lahenga on her ... N said furiously: Aajji ise taiyar kar dijiye ...das minute me main wapas ayunga ise shadi ke mandap le jane ke liye ...WARNA ...apki Antara ke liye achha nahi hoga ...
In this chaos Ajji and Satya didn't heard a mild alert thud on the balcony. Antara heard the thud ...she didn't know why her heart skipped a bit with that sound...it was very familier with the sound that she was used to hear in her Mama's house ...in her balcony adjacent to her own room... was that Raghu??? She thought once...but again she thought :NO... how he could be...i have come here so far with Satya to stay safe from him ...but if it was Raghu only???...if he had teared down Satya's security and came here for ME??? To harm me more? So Mamaji and Satya were correct that Raghu would be more happy to hurt me further...damage me more...So finally Raghu is here to fulfill his intention...
Satya left the room and closed the door with a bang and locked it from outside. The sound of bang destructed Antara's thought...she disregarded the thud sound that she heard from the balcony just few seconds before and looked down the bridal dress that Satya had thrown at her.
Antara was not getting at all why Ajji was in tears...why she was so upset with her grandson Satya ...Antara's mind only hammered her that Satya would let her meet her mom once she gets married to him...n for that she needed to change her dress...
Antara weakly left the bed n stood up with the dress that Satya had given her...she needed to change her dress...she stepped towards the wash room...but someone came n stood in front of her blocking her way...
She looked up at the person n she froze...her eyes got wide opened . It was Raghu standing in front of her ...with his stern deep eyes ...looking intensely at her...his entire corpse ...his attitude...his sigh... everything conveyed only one thing that he had finally reached her ...n now none could save her from him.
Antara looked at Raghu n unknowingly the bridal dress fell from her hand. She kept on looking at him with a severe fear of getting hurt by him again ... forgetting the rest of the world.
She stood like a statue in front of him ...Raghu was looking at her ...her eyes were swollen and her kajal got smudged ...he could imagine how she had been crying for long after knowing his truth...her face had gone pale due to the torment she was going through ...n she was looking like she had lost her strengths in her limbs. Raghu's heart wrenched in pain seeing her like that...he felt she was in this condition because of him only. he was surprised to see that Antara's eyes were not expressing her rage hatered pain loss or torment against Raghu ...but there was only fear...acute fear for him.
Raghu didn't move his eyes from hers n slowly took a matchbox out from his pocket n flickered a match stick n dropped it on the bridal dress that was laying on the floor. Soon the dress caught fire. Raghu held her arms n moved her away from the burning bridal dress...he caressed her hair n asked lovingly: tu thik hai ?
Antara didn't gv any answer to him but shook her head faintly.
Raghu took her in his arms n found her stiff but he pressed her face on his shoulder caressing her hair n said: mereko pata hai tu thik nahi hai misscall ...par abh main sab thik kar dunga ...main agaya hun na...tu chal mere sath ...abh ek pal bhi tu yehan nahi rukegi...Antara's heart felt herself safe n secured again in his arms but her brain was signaling else to her.
Raghu looked at Ajji who was smiling at them with satisfaction then :Ajji main janta hun aap mera hi intezaar kar rahi thi ...main ise lekar jaraha hun ... mera aadmi aapko aur Antara ki family ko basti pohcha dega ...
Ajji was in tears but was smiling at her Chintu with a great relief...she said : bohot mushkil se abh tak ise bachakar rakha Satya se ...tu jaldi se ise lekar chala ja yehan se ...kabhi bhi wo Satya yehaan aa sakta hai ...Antara ko shadi ke mandap le jane ke liye ...aur haan yeh rakh ...mera asirvaad... She gave him a small jewellery box in his hand ...
Raghu opened the box still helding Antara in his arms n said : Ajji yeh to ...
Ajji : haan Chintu main yehi chahti hun ...abh tum dono jao yehaan se...
Antara jerked suddenly n pushed Raghu from her and ran to Ajji n hugged her tightly: Ajii...hh...mujhe nahi jana Raghu ke sath...isne mere papa ko mara hai... Ajji ...mujhe bachalo aap ...ise bohot khushi milti hai mujhe dard dekar...mamaji aur Satya sahi hain ...Raghu mujhe aur dard dena chahta hai isiliye yehan aya hai...she sobbed.
Raghu and Ajji both got stunned hearing her.
Ajji was hurt seeing Antara like that n tried to console her: nahi beta Aisa nahi hai ...Raghu tujhse pyar karta hai...but all in vain ...Antara was neither listening to her nor she was in any condition to realize anything...she was just panicking. Ajji wiped her tears n looked at Raghu : Raghunath der mat kar... ise le ja yehanse ...Antara hosh me nahi hai ...
Raghu noded at his Ajji n caught Antara's hand n tried to pull her from Ajji...but Antara shrieked in fear n shoved his hand off her. She seized Ajji's hand like a last hope and pleaded her to save her from Raghu. Raghu understood Antara was going through a panick attack ...might be a side effect of Ecstasy drug which was stimulated more by Satya and her own mamaji.
Raghu didn't want to bully her then n make her more frightened but he didn't have any extra time to sooth her n he knew it might not work also...n any time Satya could come there with his armed men and that would be more harmful for Antara.
Raghu this time held her hands n broke her grip on Ajji applying his strength and pulled her away vehemently from Ajji and dragged her near the bed. Antara was sobbing bitterly and squirming hard in his strong grip. Raghu made her lie on bed forcefully and tied down her hands n legs within seconds. He calmly took out a tape from his jeans n cut it by his teeth and stuck it on her mouth.
He wiped her tears n cupped her face and said in a dangerously calm n loving voice: chup ...bilkul chup ...dar mat ...itna daregi to mere sath gundagardi kaise karegi?
Saying this he pulled her a bit from bed n placed her on his shoulder n moved to the balcony. He waved his hand once to his Ajji n swiftly started to climb down the balcony railing n then a pillar holding carefully Antara's squirming body. Within few seconds his feet touched the ground.
At that very moment Satya thrusted open the door n yelled: AJJIII...Antara taiyar hui ki nahi ???? MERI DI HUI DULHAN KI JORA ...his words just lost in his mouth when he eyes caught the sight of the golden bridal dress given by him to Antara was burning to ash on the floor.
The sight and the burning smell of the bridal dress made Satya go mad. He understood Raghu had already reached to Antara. He searched for Antara the whole room pushing away Ajji like a mad man n then ran towards the balcony but couldn't see anyone ...neither Raghu nor Antara.
He howled like a mad animal taking Raghu and Antara's name repeatedly ...he screamed his heart out : Raghu tu nahi jeet sakta ...Antara sirf meri hai ...is beach cottage se tu nahi bhag sakta...this is Satya's den damn it !!!...yehanse Satya ke marzi ke bina koi bahar nahi ja sakta!!! ...
To bE Continued...
Edited by pampz - 11 years ago
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res me 1st yepiee...🥳
wow just dhamaka update.. i am so happy after reading these.. god if that happens in serial too
ajji rocks... wow raghu wjat can i say about him.. what an attitude.. whaty a style..👏..sattu tu toh gaya... ab kya karega..😆
gr8 yaar👏
Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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wow!
Loved it!
Ddej ki aise story hota kash!
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Wow its soo good i loved every moment
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow just wow i have no words for this update
the action the fear omg
i loved this update sooo much
raghu reached her yess
throughout the whole update i was at the end of my bed thinking what will happen
iam a big fan of u papmz
hatts off to you
pls cont asap dying to read more
precap jaldi dena pls
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Originally posted by: pampz

ohhh MY God ...it was a gr888 compliment dear ...am flattered ...😃😃😃 ...thnk u so much ...n welcome to my SS JAAN ...do read my updates n do comment as ur comments really means a lot to me ... n what evr confusion u hv i thnk it wd get cleared in part 22😉



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haha ROFL Pampz...think you didn't recognize me I am @alishamerchant but i have changed my username!


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Posted: 11 years ago
Pampz...Part 22 was brilliant yaar i can't express how much i loved this update...it kept me on the edge of my bed while reading it!
I just loved the end...i wonder what twist is gonna come next!

I hope Antara realizes soon that Raghu loves her a lot and whatever happened was unintentional!

I can't wait for the precap of the next part!!

PS.. Just to clear it off...its me Alisha! 😆

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Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".