SOMETHING DIFFERENT - RANTARA OS

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello ppl i m harshita nt new to if..:) early seen at d3 forums bt ne at JAAN forums bcoz i m luv wid this...<3<3SmileBig smile i m nt a gud writer bt jst trying as monday seems too long n far away pls do intro urself...:)Smile
I m continuing frm precap.. sorry fr typos...LOL

SOMETHING DIFFERENT..

Antara was shocked as well as happy that Raghu allowed her to be the caretaker of aaji.. nd after all she said to him she was really sad she wanted to apologize to Raghu..

Next day Antara went to the temple were Raghu was already present😉

Antara - hey bappa pls aaj mai kuch galat naa karu aur aaji ka dhyan rakh saku aur Raghu se jo kaha uska liye mai bahut sad hu aur bs bappa itna karna ka woh mujhe maaf kar de..!!

This all was heard by none other than Raghu😳

Antara - bappa papa ka khyal rakhna pls.. aur raghu ki maa ka bhi.. pata nae kyu kah rahi hu par aap bs dhyan rakh na..(she opens her eyes nd prasad lekar she is abt to go wen she sees Raghu..)

Raghu-he was shocked that his miscall wuld ever pray fr him and she did fr his mother even a smile came on his face bt he didnt shw up.. the gunda look toh hona chahiye..😛

Antara was shocked bt happy she culd atleast see him smile..

Antara - Raghu mai tumse kuch kahna chahti hu..
woh mai kal mai kal woh .. she was feeling very guilty..

Raghu - aae miscall kya kal kal kar rahi hai.. kya bolna hai woh bol time khoti(waste) mat kar..

Antara - ek toh mai tumse pyaar se baat kar rahi hu aur tum esa baat karoga mujhse..😕

Raghu - aacha theek hai bs bol tu..

Antara - mach mach tumhara naam ho na chahiye tha kitna bolta ho tum.. pura time gussa hota hai chehra par emotions dekha do ga toh kya jaega...

Raghu - aaee miscall tu kya bol...

Antara - chup ekdum chup.. aaj mai bolugi tum chup..maine jo kal kaha uska liye i m sorry dil se kal maine jo kaha woh galat tha mujhe maaf kardo.. (mind talk bappa Raghu bs maaf kar de plss *fingers crossed...*)

Raghu - dekh mai usse barame kuch nae bol na chahta par haa maaf kiya tujhe. Tune tera bhai ka liye kiya jo bhi kiya.. par usse barame mai aur kuch nae bolna chahta.. n he walks away par woh prasad liye bigar chala jata hai...

Antara felt guilty fr saying those wrds hw culd she.. she saw hm gng n went behind hm..Antara behind him shouting Raghu ..

Antara - Raghu prasad liye bigar nae jata.. nd handing him the prasad..😊

Raghu - bappa ne kal hi mujhe mera prasand de diya aaji ka liye tujhe bhej kar..(bg*mahi tu*) l2h2..😆😉

Antara was the first to look away n she proceed towards her work..

The whole day she was wid aaji in btw some pairs of eyes were observing her.. her talks,her smile, her way of taking care of aaji.. her simplicity.. softness none other than Raghu... Antara would also smetimes sneek peak nd see him by any way bth feel an urge to see to cnnect widin them those feelings were still UNKNOWN...

Raghu - yeh misscall itni bhi yedi nae hai jitna mai samjhta hu ... aachi hai bs mujhse bhidna ki aadat hai par agar dost ho toh bahut pyaari ho..*yeh kya soch raha hai Raghu tu bhi yeda hogaya hai miscall ki tarah*😆
(and he den continues his wrk at the garage)

AT NIGHT WEN HER Work was dne she was abt to leave wen she saw hm wid aaji...

The way he was soft to them to her his aaji.. he is tough frm outside bt soft as a person frm inside he respects relations bt does nt like to show much.. bt he is gud at heart.. she remembered his smile at the temple.. Suddenly a smile came on her face...😊

THEY BOTH SMILED AT EACH OTHER. All this was noticed by aaji she was happy wid this scenario nd said there is "SOMETHING DIFFERENT" btw them that cant be expressed...😊


I knw really bad this is first one na fr this forums do pls like or cmment ... every suggestion is always welcum...😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow this is too cute...😳..loved this os...keep writting more..this os,ss and ffs are only thing we have in weekends..😭..btw gr8 os..⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow over 100 people read it and only 4 comments😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its nice dear...❤️

par keya tume lagtahe raghuu kabhi Antara ko itna lamba baat karne dega???... BTW temple wala scene achcha laga... show me bhi agar aisa hogii to bohut maja aayegiii...😳
Edited by tahrinanowrin77 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OHMYYY!!!! CUTIE, THIS IS A LOVELY OS! RanTara r simply adorable in here! I LOVED IT! Please write more! U r an amazing writer!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wah... I want this to happened in d show
Shimolina thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow...it ws 2 gud...hope mon ke epi me aisa hi ho
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Firt fo alll welcome to the RaNtara crazy world...nd your os totally amazing...very well writen.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good os..
keep writing more 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really nice script deat loved it👍🏼pls. continue weekend main ye sab to aur bhi jyada accha lagta hai😛

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