Hey! As i have seen there are many people starting to write OS on Rantara , 😃
and i do want to write one too but i know that i will not finish or do it on time...😭😭😭
but that doesn't stop me from writing one,
So i will start the story off and you will write the next bit of the story, and the next person will carry on from where the last person left off 👏👏👏
So here is the beginning of the story...
"Raghu" shouted a very concerned voice from behind. Raghu turned, and walked to end of the balcony to see what was happening...
There stood Antara,in the middle of the basti, surrounded by Ramya Shetty and his men, everyone in the basti watched in surprise.
"Dekho Mujhe yahan se jane do, main tumhari dushman nahi ho, dekho..."
"CHUP, Bilkul chup" Shouted Shetty " Tum meri dushman usi din ban gai thi jis din tune meri sir pe voh danda mara"
Raghu was watching all this from his balcony. His eyes red, he was fuming at the thought that, Ramya Shetty had the guts to come into his basti and threaten some one.
"Aye, Kutay ki jat, Bhains ki aulad, Boothneeka, (hope no-one took offence) Idar, upar dekh..."
shouted Raghu..
"Usay kya keh raha hai, ah mujse lar, a na...eik minute..."
Antara was staring at Raghu with her eyes wide open..."Ay Misscall, Tu aisay ghur kar kya dekh rahi hain"
Raghu asked..
"Ai Raghu" shouted Shetty
" Abhay, ai shetty, tumahri pechwari main kisi nay mirchi ka jonka lagaya, do minute ruk nahin saktay, dikta nahin hai, do log baat kar rahay, haan kahan that main..." Raghu said
"Tumhari himmat kaisi hui meray bhai kay samnay, nai sirf meri bhai kay nahin, basti kay bacho kay samne aisay lafz use karnay ki...
(sorry not too good with Hindi) tumay dikta nahi hain kya yaha par..."
"Ai, Jhansi ki rani.." Raghu interupted
"Ai jao maro use" Shetty interupted raghu.
"Ai abhay ruk, ma nai tameez sikai bhi hai ja nahin, baat ko katam karnay day..."
"haan jaisay kay tum main boht tameez hai" Antara said to herself, hoping he would hear.
"kya keh raha tha main... haan ai jansi ki rani, ab tu muje na sika kay mujehe kya kehna chahiye or kya nahin, or woh bi meri basti main"
"haan, haan, tum to is basti kay so-called bagwan ho na" Antara replied with sarcasm..
" Abhay mu band kar lay, agar ho pai,"
" Main kyun apna.."
" Chup.."
"Main kyun.."
" Chup "
" Main..."
"Abhay CHUP kar... ab bechara shetty kab ka wahan par karan hain, us ki to mehman nawazi karnay ka moka do, Chalo shetty, ao upar ao... eik minute... eik kaam karta hoon main neeche a jata hoon, seeriyon se upar ana, teri bas ki baat nahin.."
With this Raghu came down and confronted Shetty... Raghu slowly walked in front of Antara Guarding her from Shetty and his men...
This was the beginning of the story, now go wild with your thoughts and imagination...🤪 ur part of the story doesn't have to be long you can just write paragraph or less if you want...
P.S this is my first OS on any show... Please like... and do support me by writing the next bit of this story.
Edited by Rantara - 12 years ago