Rantara FF:~The Garage~ CHAPTER 8-10 +Link to Th2 - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago
Yayyy , finally updated :D

what a nice update ,

i loved raghu , Aiji and Mm convo :D

they light my mood :D

enjoyed everybit of it. cant wait when raghu finds out how she got in this condition :D

good job and update soon :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
Raghu is soo concerned & Antara is adamant on leaving widout listening to him..No wonder Raghu's having a problem controlling his "anger"...lol!..
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just found your FF, love it! Great job! Can't wait to see what you have in store next. I hope Raghu finds out soon what really happened at Antara's interview and punishes that guy. What a creep!

Poor Antara. I can totally sympathize with her fear after her traumatic experience. Raghu is being so sweet taking care of her and course, loaning his clothes ;)

Update soon!

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Posted: 11 years ago
AWWW CUTIE, NICE UPDATE! I LIKED IT! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! WILL BE WAITING FOR A LONG FULL OF RanTara MOMENTS!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Update karungi pehle tu bhi update kar phir mera bhi updaze millega😉
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Chapter 5:

But Raghu had made his mind nd he wouldn't let her go..not so easily...He closed the door jst infront of her...

Ra: Ek dafa kaha samajh nai lagi tere ko????!!!!...he said through gritted teeth...

An: D..dekho..mmmujhe..jjaane do...Mami Appa pareshan ho rahe honge..kya kahungi unse main? Sab tumhari wajah se hua hai...mujhe tumse koi baat nai karni..Hato mere raste se...she said trying to sound confident nd opening the door bt Raghu grabbed her by her hands nd pinned her to the door closing it again...

Ra: CHUP...YEDA samjha hai mere ko jo teri baaton ko sunta rahe ga?? Kal raat se sun raha hun ab bas...Khud ka to lagta hai dimag kaam nai karta saath mein mera bhi kharab kar rahi hai? Ek to itni dino se tu aapna dehaan nai rakh rahi hai upar se jab main madat kar raha hun tab bhi tu mujhe Tashan dikha rahi hai..:Itni Akkad kis baat ki hai tujh mein? Bol?
Kabse tujhe pyaar se samjha raha hu tujhe samajh hi nai lag raha

Antara had tears in her eyes as he was again yelling at her nd she started to struggle so tht he would leave her...

An: D..door raho mujhse...she sobbed...cluthcing her hands to her chest

Ra: Eh roh kyun rai hai tu...

An: Kyunki tum mujhe pe chilla rahe ho...kab ki tumne mujhse pyaar se baat?? she cried

Raghu let her hands nd stepped back: Eh..eh..woh..ehm..ki thi na...woh..

An: Rehne do...tumne kabhi pyaar se kya kabhi aram se bhi baat nai ki..har waqt mujh pe chillate rehte ho...Kal bhi tum mujh pe chillate rahe the...she cried harder...

Ra: Dekh wo main tujh se aram se hi baat kar raha tha tu hi nai..he stepped forward bt she closed her eyes stopping him there...Antara ankhe khol...he said in a calm voice...Antara slowly lifted her wet eyelashes to meet his eyes..
Tujhe jaana hai na? Jaane dunga, pehle beth kar khana kha le phir challi jayi...he said in a soft voice taking more steps back while forwarding his hand so tht she would grab it bt she jst looked at his hand nd then back at him...He wanted her to make a move to him...And she did...She slowly left the door nd walked with unsure steps eyeing his hand...Jst as she laid her hand in his she looked at him who also looked at her nd something went through her seeing him nd she quickly left his hand taking her steps again back bt he quickly grabbed her hand stopping her steps...
He felt her slightly shivering nd remembered tht she didn't had any energy left so he took his steps closer to her...For a sec he looked into her heavy eyes which indicated him tht she would faint any sec so he picked her in his arms...Antara's eyes shot up at this...

Ra: Darr mat...kuch nai karunga tujhe...Bhul gayi Limit Ka Gunda hun..he whispered nd she slowly relaxed in his arms resting her head on his shoulder...Raghu sighed seeing her relax...he took her back to the bed nd gently placed her there...before she could feel uncomfortable infront of him he covered her with the duvet...Antara jst stared at him...

Ra: Ab tu khana kha le..he said while placing her plate infront of her...

Antara made a face which didn't go unnoticed by Raghu:
Chup Chap yeh sab khale...he ordered her..

An: Mujhe bhook nai hai...aur waise bhi main yeh sab nai khati...she said nt looking at him...

Ra: Tujhe yeh sab khana padega...woh kya hai na iss ke baad tujhe kadha peena padega...

An: Kadha kyun??

Ra: Kyunki tu bimar hai aur kal bhi barish mein bheegti rahi hai...Bukhar hogaya tha tujhe..Iss liye...

Antara laid her hand on her forhead nd checked her temprature: Nai mera temprature bilkul theek hai aur..before she could speak more she began to sneeze...

Ra: Hmm samajh gaya...he said in a sarcastic manner...ab to tujhe do cup peene pardenge...he grinned making her angry..bt after some sec he also began to sneeze..This time Antara grinned raising her eyebrow...

Ra: Woh...woh kya hai na..apun ko kal time nai milla change karne mein..to issi liye..thora sa...he stopped seeing her eyeing him..

An: Maine puucha? Aur waise bhi tum saari raat kya karte rahe ho jo ek shirt nai change kar sakke...she asked in suspicious way...

Ra: Woh,,main...tere ko isse kya?? Dehan na bata..tu khana kha aur phir kadha pi..he didn't wanted her to knw tht he was thinking about her the whole night..

An: Ha..aur tum..agar mujhe peena padega to tumhe bhi...samjhe...she commanded..

Ra: Mere ko in sab ki zaroorat nai hai..yeh sab tum ladki log ko chahiye hota hai...

Antara had started her lunch bt was stopped by Raghu's comment so she stormed out of the bed to give him an answer...

An: Haan..jaise tum mard log insaan nai...oh ha main to bhul gayi tum to Raghu ho..Iss Basti ka bhagwan..tumhe kaise kuch ho sakta hai...Agar tum bhagwan ho to tumhe to sab pata hona chahiye hai phir tum kal raat ko mera dimag kharab karne kyun aye the...nd she went on and on..her talks didn't had any conection nd whenever he tried to stop her she didn't let him speak by showing him her hand...Inbetween she was eating her lunch which she had in her hand...He never saw her like this...bt it were all the things which she so wanted to say to him since she met him nd he never let her speak or misunderstood her...

Outside Aaji nd Mach Mach had their mouth wide open...they couldn't believe tht a girl would ever dare to stop Raghu frm speaking...Showing Mach Mach a signal Ajji nd he made their way out of there nt wanting to be a part of this war,..

When her lunch was done nd he almost scared of her avater she lowered her voice nd composed her herself by adjusting her hair...

An: Main jaake Kadha bhana ke lati hun..with tht she walked out of the room with her head high..

When he took a breath tht she finally went she came back nd warned him:
Don't You Dare...Yahan se hilna bhi mat..jab tak main nai aun tum yahin pe rahoge...before he could answer she left frm there locking the door frm outside...thts when Raghu recovered frm his shock nd banged the door..

Ra: Ey Miss Kaul..Drawaza khol...Lagta hai tu pagal ho gai hai..tere ko dimag ke doctor ki zaroorat hai..Antara...

An: Dimag ke doctor ki zaroorat mujhe nai tumhe hai..tum hi mujhe lock karke gaye the na take main bhag na jaun..issi liye maine bhi tumhe lock kar diya hai take tum bhag na jao..Ab chup karke beth jao..plate main khana hai wo khalo..with tht she went...

He heard her going away...getting angry wouldn't do anything so he laid on the bed while massaging his head...after a while he ate the food nd again laid on the bed to get some sleep...
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After some good 15-30 min Antara came back with the Kadha..she wanted him to see how it is to be locked in a room nd tht too for such a long time..when she opened the door she saw him sleeping on her place...he was looking like a small baby...she didn't want to wake him up bt then she had no other chance...so she went up to him...placing the cups nd the bedside she called him..

An: Raghu...Raghu uttoh...Raghu...when he didn't respond she moved forward nd touched his bare arm...she was shocked to see tht he had fever...
She quickly went back into the kitchen nd brought a cloth with cold water...jst as she placed the cold clothe on his forhead his eyes shot up nd he grabbed he by her hands nd pinned her beneath him on the bed..Antara was totally shocked...

Raghu looked at the cloth which fell on her neck nd then at her...

Ra: Kya kar rahi thi tu?? he askes in a serious manner...

An: Woh Woh...tum..tumhe bukhar tha to main..main wo thanda kapra rakh rahi thi...zyada tabiyyat kharab to nai??she said checking his forhead, cheeks nd neck to see if it was high or low...

Raghu jst lost himself seeing her concern for him...

An: Pehle batana chahiye tha na ke tumhe bhi bukhar hai to main tumhare liye 2 cups kehva ke bhana ke lati..she said looking straight into his lost eyes...

After a while she became conscious of their position nd looked away...She cleared her throat so he would get back nd he quickly got up frm the bed...Antara slowly sat up...Raghu tok his shirt and wore it nd quickly wanted to make an exit frm there bt her voice stopped him..

An: Kahan jah rahe ho?? she asked getting out of the bed..

Ra: Bahar...he said without turning around..

An: Bahar?? Kahan bahar??

Ra: Tere ko batana zarrori hai??

An: Woh..he didn't let her complete..

Raghu turned around and answered her: Tumhe koi haq nai banta mujhse puuchne ki ke main kahan ja raha hun, kiss se mil raha hun aur mere saath kya ho raha hai...he used exactly her words frm yesterday night which made her speechless...He gave her a last intense look nd again turned around to leave when she stopped him..

An: Rukko...she took the cup nd thrusted it in his hand...Yeh pi lena...with tht she made her way back bt stopped...aur haan tum sahi keh rahe ho mujhe koi haq nai hai AUR NA HI MUJHE FARAK PADTA HAI KE TUM KAHA JAATE HO, KIS SE MILTE HO AUR TUMHARE SAATH KYA HOTA HAI...

He turned around with angry eyes bt she continued: Main bhi yahan se chali jaungi...bas mere kapre mujhe dedo...

Without any further arguments Raghu opened his cupboard ns grabbed her clothes nd thrusted them into her hands..

They shared an angry eyelock after which Raghu left banging the door...
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OK FINALLY DONE!!!! I DIDN'T READ IT AGAIN SO SORRY FOR ANY BLOOPER OR MISTAKE😳

HOPE U LIKED IT :)😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
me first
omg
awesome as usual dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank god u updated...
i will comment after reading...
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved every bit of the convo bet Raghu and antra...n the best part is the last part ...plzzz continue soon ...ye dil mange more...👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

why do they have to fight every time??? god somebody tell them to stop being so difficult towards each other... good update dear. thanks for the pm... do update soon...

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