Rantara FF:~The Garage~ CHAPTER 8-10 +Link to Th2 - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome dear read it today n i hav become a fan of it..
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Posted: 12 years ago

oh.. that was a bit touchy!!! poor antara... hope raghu finds the truth soon... thanks for the pm dear... waiting for more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
CUTIE, THIS WAS LOVELY!!! U REALLY ARE AN AMAZING WRITER! AWWW MY POOR ANTARA!!! BUT I WANT HER TO KNOW THAT RAGHU WAS SIMPLY CARING ABOUT HER & WANTED TO HELP HER THAT IS WHY HE WAS ACTING THAT WAY! & I LOVVVEEE HOW SHE'S WEARING HIS CLOTHES NOW! ☺️ THIS IS TOOO CUTTEEE! BUT I WANT RAGHU TO FIGURE OUT THE TRUTH ASAP! I LOVE THIS STORY SO PLEASE CONTINUE ASAP! WILL BE WAITING!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing Update!!..
Raghu is soo concerned about Antara but wat would be her reaction wen she awakes??...
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh my meri sweet antara ko jaldhi theek karna uski yeh haal dekhi nahi jaa rahi hai.
machmach is very brilliant he decided 2 join aajii yay!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow dear itz juz superb
bchari antara ( she iz unconscious now ) aab toh raghu sure uss boss ko nahi chodega ..
now mach mach also decided to team up to aaji .. soo he constantly teasin raghu :-$
u hav written it soo beautifully dear .. plz nxt part update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved rantara FF and SS by pampz cz both of u know the meaning of romance and plx dn't turn it into vulgarity plz


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Posted: 12 years ago
Just found this FF and am all caught up. Love the concept and the scene in which you started it. Really a great job and I hope you continue soon! You described Raghu's anxiety while waiting for Antara so late into the night perfectly. And then that transition from anxiety to anger was just perfect. Will be waiting for your next update.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 4:

Raghu was feeling frustated...One hand in his hair nd the other on his mouth...:
Yeh Yedi ki itni dino se halat kharab hai aur mere ko pata hi na challa...Itni Tension isko thi kisso ko pata bhi nai tha...Mere ko aisa nai karna chahiye tha..Kabhi maine kissi ladki ke saath aisa nai kiya aur aise to main kabhi bhi nai aapni Basti mein chillaya to phir yeh to bas ek ladki hai...
Sab iski wajah se hua hai, agar yeh bata deti ti to yeh mere ko itna darrana na parta...Nai yeh Miss Kaul ne Kasam kahi hai ke jo bhi Raghu ke saamne sherni bhan na hai aur meri madat bhi nai lene ka...
Itna sab kuch suna diya phir bhi nai bataya ke hua kya, ab mere ko hi dekhna pardega...

All the thought were making him crazy nd getting tired he finally slept nd uncomfortable sleep in his wet clothes...
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Morning 7 a.m:

Raghu woke up nd saw tht Antara was still sleeping afterall she slept after midnight nd she needed rest so he let her sleep nd quitely left the room making sure tht he locked the door frm outside jst in case she tried to run away...

Jst as he turned around he saw two faces...One of them was the serious face, of his Ajji nd the other one was the grinning face of Mach Mach...He jst looked at both of them nt wanting to start the conversation bt it looked like they were waiting for him to start..

After some min were nobody talked nd Ajji had blocked Raghu's way he sighed nd closed his eyes...

Ra: Ajji yeh kya subhe subhe shuru hogayi tu?

Aj: Main to ab shuru hui hu tu bata aisi konsi baat thi ke tu raat ko hi shuru ho gaya tha?

Ra: Matlab..he asked nt getting her point..

Aj: Tu Antara se baat karne ke liye subhe tak ruk sakta tha..to phir itna hungama kyu kiya...Dekh uski tabiyyat kitni kharab hogi teri wajah se...

Raghu jst glared at Mach Mach knowing tht it was him who told Ajji everything..in return Mach Mach jst pleaded with his eyes as he himself was blackmailed by Ajji to tell her the truth...

Ra: Ajji tu nai samjhegi...

Aj: Tu samjhayega to main samajh jaungi...

Ra: Ajji..kaha na...tu nai samjhegi...

Aj: Hmm samajh gayi...tu mujhe na bata... she knws tht he won't tell her anything...so she tried another way...Main Antara se khud puch lungi...Wo uth gayi?

Mach Mach nd Raghu screamed at the same time: NAI...

Ajji jumped back: Kyun?? Mere ko milna hai usse..

Ra: Woh abhi so rahi hai...

M.M: Ehh..Ajji challo apun ko iss ke ghar jage bata dena chahiye hai ke yahan hai...wo pareshan ho rahe honge...

Aj: Haan...Chal Mach Mach...they were about to go when she turned around to Raghu nd gave him a serious look: Eh Raghunat Naik tere ko to main baad mein dekh lungi...

Raghu sighed when he saw them leave...It would only create mess if Ajji would see Antara in Raghu's clothes...

Ra: Ajji ko to sambhal liya..ab woh yedi uthe gi to usse bhi sambhal na padega mere ko...he made a face nd went up to the terrace to get a shower still with the clothes frm last night which was a sleevless Shirt...

Ra: Bahar nahane ka mazza hi aur hai...he was relaxing his tensed muscles under the cold water nd cool breeze..

After some good 15-30 min he began to sneeze...nd this is when his eyes moved to the balcony...HER BALCONY...And all the moments frm yesterday came rushing back...

Ra: Arre yaar usse to bhul bhi gaya...he quickly closed the tap nd rushed downstairs with a towel around his neck...
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Raghu quickly entered the room only to find it empty...Raghu was shocked seeing no one in the room he looked right nd left bt didn't saw her...

Ra: Taala toh mara tha, to phir yeh Miss Kaul gayi kaha?

He went near the bed nd saw her lying unconcious there...he quickly bent down nd turned her to him...Her nose was bleeding nd her trouser had also red marks...he quickly picked her up nd made her sit on the bed with her back resting against the headboard so the blood wouldn't go back...with one hand aroung her neck holding her in place he took his phone to call the doc...

In some min the doc was present...Till then Raghu had already cleaned the blood on her face nd some cuts on her legs..he didn't had the courage to go further up then her knees...

The doc checked her nd went to Raghu who was waiting patiently...

Ra: Doc kya hua usse? Bata na bolti kyun nai?

Doc: Bhai, woh lagta hai usse hosh ayi thi aur woh uthi bhi thi...Energy nai thi to glass tut gaya jiss pe woh gir gayi aur usse choot lag gi...

Ra: Behsosh kaise hogi woh?

Doc: Anjaan kamre mein akele thi to darr gi hogi...

Ra: Haan wo taala mara tha darwaaze ko ke bhag na jaye...

Doc: Kya? Raghu bhai kaha tha na ke darrana mat...khai ab wo thodi derr mein uth jayegi to usse heatly food or fresh juice dena...

Ra: Chal theek hai...

As the doc went Raghu went back into the room...this time he waited till she would wake up...

It was already 12 a.m. nd she didn't wake up...Her family was also there bt seeing her sleeping they went back as Raghu assured them tht he would talke care of her nd tht he had to talk to her when she wakes up...Ajji glared at him bt he didn't said anything coz she knw her Chintu...thinking tht it would be lunch time nd she hadn't had her breakfast he tried to wake her up...

Ra: Ehm ey Miss Kaul..uth na...khana kha le...Ehy Miss Kaul..Antara...he shook her slightly nd finally she came back to her senses...

Antara slowly opened her eyes mumbling something...Raghu bent down to hear wht she was saying bt instead of tht he saw her staring at him...slowly everything of yesterday came back to her nd she blinked her eyes 4-5 times confusing him...she jumped up in a sitting position hitting her head with his head making both of them scream in pain...she clutched the duvet closer to her chest...

An: T..Tum?? Tum ya kya kar rahe ho? she askes stammering nd getting back frm him..

Ra: Woh..ab teri tabiyyat kaisi hai??..he asked while streching his hand to touch her forehead but
Antara jumped up frm the bed now standing infront of him nd pointing her finger at him..

An: De..Dekho m..mujhse..door raho..sssamjhe...

Raghu jst stared at her nd after some min he stood infront of her...Antara jst looked left right to see a way to escape nd looking over his shoulder she saw the door...she looked back at him nd then back at the door...she quickly went around him nd made a quick run to the door bt Raghu held her hand to stop her...he felt her shivering with her touch nd loosened his grip...he gently turned her around nd spoke in a calm voice:

Ra: Aise jayegi tu bahar? pointing at her attire...she looked at herself and her mouth formed in a prefect O shape seeing herself in a loose sleevless loose shirt nd a losse pyjama which reached her calves..She looked back at him for answeres...

Ra: Woh tere kapre gile the na to tere kapre badalne the...tere kapre yahan the nai to maine mere dediye aur waise bhi sab tere kapre ki wajah se hua hai...tu kuch aur nai pehan sakti thi...ghar ake badal bhi to sakti thi na..nd he went on and on..

Antara was totally shocked: HUH???? was the only thing which she got out of her mouth...T..Tumne m..mere..k..kapre??? Mere kapre kahan hai??? she asked looking here nd there for her clothes...

Ra: Eh..Miss Kaul tu pehle bet ja...yeh sab baad mein bhi ho sakta hai...bt his words were in vain

An: Nai mujhe..abhi jaana hai...bohat saara kaam hai mujhe...Job dhundi hai...Ishu ko parhana hai...Maama Maami ki madat karni hai...now she went on and on listing all her works reminding herself wht all she had to do bt she was loud enough tht he could hear her...

Raghu's anger was on its peak as she wasn't hearing him:
BAS...he yelled making her stop...Tu kahin nai jayegi...he commanded...Chup Chap bet ja aur yeh kha le...

Antara was scared as he again yelled at her nd he saw it...he gulped his anger bt she didn't:
Nai mujhe bhuk nai hai aur mujhe abhi jaana hai!!!! Bohat kaam hai mujhe...Main jah rahi hun..

With tht she made her way out of his room...
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OK A BIG SORRY FOR THE LATE UPDATE...BT I AHD MY REASONS...TAKE THIS UPDATE AS A INDEPENDENCE DAY GIDT AS I COULDN'T WISH U ALL FOR RAMDAN ND EID😃

ok guys is update mein abhi improvements karni hai bt ab main nai kar sakti so issi se kaam chala lo plzzz

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for pm's comment saying so 😛
Edited by MyAnastasia18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG
i am first
cant believe it


Just Awesome dear👏
plz conrtinue soo

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