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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

it was really awsome...the way you excuted the story was briliant...i spacially like the last part...it was so beautifully described with such brilliance...

do write more..

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Naima K Ahmad

@FairyTale-Naima

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Woah, wasn't expecting that! That was rocking!

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Rehana Kazi

@Rehana86

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

wa...wai...wait *scrolls down*... WAIT!? *scrolls down*... WHAT??? That's IT ?!?!? ... Oye Bubbly! Bubbly Oye! 😡 ... you just left us on a cliffhanger and expect us to do WHAT? 😡 use our own imagination??? 😡... hang on! 🤔... that wouldn't be so bad though... hawww I can already imagine my bahu's flushed face and my betu's red cheek (of course he just bought another slap from her) ☺️...

Amazing yaar... to be honest, I was a little scared to read reading your note... thinking of whether to read it or not... what if I don't like it then what am I supposed to comment? ... but girl, you made me a proud reader 🤗... it was very natural, I had a constant grin on my face while reading it... and I am glad I didn't listen to my brain and gave it a shot😃... will be looking forward to read MORE from you 😊

luv

Rehana

PS: University of Toronto (UofT) 😊

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Kaay

@-.serendipity.-

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

wow that was an awesome update

but you left us with a cliffhanger :(

anyways it was amazing i loved it

i hope you write more on these two soon 😊

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zzinia2411

@zzinia2411

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

HOW COULD UUU?????!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CUTIE DONT END IT LIKE THAT!!! PLEASE OHMMMYYY I WAS ENJOINING UR STORY SOOO MUCH N U JUST DECIDE TO END IT LIKE THAT?! U BROKE MY HEART TO ZILLION PIECES! PLEASE DONT END IT LIKE THIS! I LOVED EACH & EVERY SINGLE PART, ESPECIALLY THIS PART BECAUSE IT WAS SOOO TOUCHING LIKE THAT KISS☺️ PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!

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@sonu-monu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

awww loved this part totally you balancing so well first one & this one part loved lokking forward for next part 😳

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856040

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

OMG and you stopped write one more

but it was so cute antara shouting for raghu and raghu kissing her

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JalebiHearts

@JalebiHearts

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: ifians
it was really awsome...the way you excuted the story was briliant...i spacially like the last part...it was so beautifully described with such brilliance...
do write more..

Thank you sooo much!! :) x

Originally posted by: FairyTale-Naima
Woah, wasn't expecting that! That was rocking!

😆 Thanks :) x

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JalebiHearts

@JalebiHearts

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: zzinia2411
HOW COULD UUU?????!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CUTIE DONT END IT LIKE THAT!!! PLEASE OHMMMYYY I WAS ENJOINING UR STORY SOOO MUCH N U JUST DECIDE TO END IT LIKE THAT?! U BROKE MY HEART TO ZILLION PIECES! PLEASE DONT END IT LIKE THIS! I LOVED EACH & EVERY SINGLE PART, ESPECIALLY THIS PART BECAUSE IT WAS SOOO TOUCHING LIKE THAT KISS☺️ PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!

Hi Babes, Thanks for reading and im sorry but I can't continue it was only meant to be a weekend thing because Im not very good when it comes to writing fan fiction. I only updated everyday in the weekend because I know i will stop on monday otherwise im so lazy you lots would not even get one update per month😆 Im really sorry I hope you understand- but if I ever write one shots you lots will be the first people I PM

Thank you xx

Edited by JalebiHearts - 12 years ago

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JalebiHearts

@JalebiHearts

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: VirmanArhi4ever
wow that was an awesome update
but you left us with a cliffhanger :(

anyways it was amazing i loved it

i hope you write more on these two soon 😊

Thank you and yea I will try to- maybe next weekend I will write about next weeks precap

anyway big hugs!! :) xx