RaNtara FF ||Jeene Laga Hoon|| Ch. 6 Pg. 22

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ZainXAaliya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

First of all awesome story👏, second thnx for the PM😊, and lastly can't wait for the next update!!

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mariam42

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

The second chappie lived upto my expectations!
It was so wonderfully written, can't wait to see
What happened to Antara!
I've liked the character sketches so please do on me with updates!
Looking forward to the next update x

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taskutbimuff

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

hey there...amazing update!!!👏 just love how the story is progressing. thanks a bunch for the pm. keep up the good work!! hope u update the nxt chapter soon!😊

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mjht_one

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

chandni meri jaan...you are A.W.E.S.O.M.E...loved the update yaar...especially the scenes where i was in🤣

" "Of course not" Nikki said chuckling."

that is so me...i say stuff like that all the time😆

also the scene where raghu is like" i hate you " and natara wa sliek "i love you too" reminded me of my friends, we always do that, first we hardly every say hi ___...it usally hi b""ch, and also whenever one of us say i hate you the other always says aww i love you too🤣🤣

and OMFG raghu kissed antara on the nose then the eyes, then the lips😳...i was blushing just imagining that...seriously maar dala tune yaar

i liked how you started off with Rantara being in love scene and then showed flashbacks...you FF is getting interesting yaar...do update soon

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JalebiHearts

@JalebiHearts

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

How do I not know about this FF? I really enjoyed reading this and hope that you will continue soon. Its very well written and this romantic Antara is fun to picture. Overall amazing start!! :) xx

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zzinia2411

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

OHMYYY!!!!! CUTIE, I LOVE THIS FF! U R AN AMAZING WRITER! I LOVE HOW U PUT PAST N PRESENT OF RanTara! OHMYYY UR DESCRIPTIONS!!! IM LIKE DROOLING OVER MY LAPTOP SCREEN!😆 HONESTLY I LOVE THIS HIGH INTENSITY BETWEEN RanTara IN UR FF! THANKS CUTIE FOR THIS LOVELY FF 🤗PLEASE PLEASE DO UPDATE SOON! JUST CANT WAIT!

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suji

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Awesome writing Chandu👏👏👏...Me loved it😊

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GrilledCheese

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

wonderful start to the ff!

loved it!

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Onlyrantra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

super like..gr8 story..keep it up..nd update soon next part..egearly waiting..pm me plz..

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Chandni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Replies 😳

Originally posted by: gal.angel
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yaay chandni dear m first to comment 😃
i juz loved diz chapter soo much 😃
d main scene i love in diz part iz Rantara romance 😳
Raghu being soo romantic n Antara bhi kam nahi thi romance main 😆
on other part , bchari antara she wait for 2 hours but raghu was chilling wit machmach n girl
Antara ne again jhor ka jhappad diya raghu ko which he deserve
waiting for nxt part dear
enjoyed it soo much dear
thnx for pm 😃

Regards
Osina

Congrats for being the first 😃 Thanks so much for your wonderful comment! 🤗

Originally posted by: 22pundirabhi
awesome yr......thanks for the pm

Thanks yaar 🤗

Originally posted by: payalahuja98
This is sooo unfair yaar!!! I want to know what happens next! Update soon!

Haha sorry yaar! But you get to find out now 🤗

Originally posted by: ..Amira..
I just read the 1st chapter. Awwesomee, love the your describe raghuu n love the antara is. class wala scene achaa tha 😳 tnx for the pmm. Will read the 2nd one later.

Glad you like thr first chapter you hope you like the second and third also 🤗

Originally posted by: SONAL30
awesome part buddy...thanks for the pm

Thanks 🤗

Originally posted by: sonu-monu
Can i just say BIG WOWWW !!

i am having a hard time believing that u are writing this FF !

its awesome , the past and the future story ,
u mix so well :P

first i was like what the , they r kissing and then , i was like ahannn

nice way to kill ur readers with anxiety what cuircumtances bring them there
i love ur FF .

and now i think the name suits the ff as well
jeenay laga hoon , its from raghu Pov and how he will live freely without the malice for antara only ,

im dying to read more .

here is my ultimatum , i want another update this weekend .

cuz im going crazyyy what will happen next :D

way to goo !
love it :D

Yes you may! lol should I pinch you so you can believe it lol! 😆 Thanks so much for the lovely comment sonu 😃 Sorry i couldn't update sooner I was busy with finals 😭 Thanks again 🤗

Originally posted by: sweetdesire
Hey Chandni🤗..First of all toh thanks a lot for updating..I was waiting for this Story like anything😳...really loved it..Awwiiee I am loving the way u showing Rantra 's Past and present😊..Omg, Ab toh Raghu ki kahir nahi😆..Awwiiee Antara got fainted...waiting for next part so do continue soon...Thanks for the PM...Take care

Lots of Love

Geet

Yaar Geet! Tumhe toh main khirki se bahar ZARU phek dungi. Tune Thanks kaha😲 Yaar im glad you liked it! This next part is for you! Happy early Birthday lol :) 🤗

Originally posted by: RagXata
First of all awesome story👏, second thnx for the PM😊, and lastly can't wait for the next update!!

First thank you, second you are most welcome, third its here! lol 🤗

Originally posted by: mariam42
The second chappie lived upto my expectations!
It was so wonderfully written, can't wait to see
What happened to Antara!
I've liked the character sketches so please do on me with updates!
Looking forward to the next update x

Im so happy it did! Thanks for the wonderful comment!! 🤗

Originally posted by: taskutbimuff
hey there...amazing update!!!👏 just love how the story is progressing. thanks a bunch for the pm. keep up the good work!! hope u update the nxt chapter soon!😊

Thanks so much for the lovely comment 🤗

Originally posted by: mjht_one
chandni meri jaan...you are A.W.E.S.O.M.E...loved the update yaar...especially the scenes where i was in🤣

" "Of course not" Nikki said chuckling."
that is so me...i say stuff like that all the time😆

also the scene where raghu is like" i hate you " and natara wa sliek "i love you too" reminded me of my friends, we always do that, first we hardly every say hi ___...it usally hi b""ch, and also whenever one of us say i hate you the other always says aww i love you too🤣🤣

and OMFG raghu kissed antara on the nose then the eyes, then the lips😳...i was blushing just imagining that...seriously maar dala tune yaar

i liked how you started off with Rantara being in love scene and then showed flashbacks...you FF is getting interesting yaar...do update soon

Haha Niks you crack me up 🤣 of course you would love the scenes you are in loL! Aree I can't kill you with my FF what's gonna happen with this khirki???😆 Im super glad you enjoyed it! The wait is over 🤗

Originally posted by: JalebiHearts
How do I not know about this FF? I really enjoyed reading this and hope that you will continue soon. Its very well written and this romantic Antara is fun to picture. Overall amazing start!! :) xx

Im sorry you didnt know about it 😭 but now you do😃 thanks so much for the comment 🤗

Originally posted by: zzinia2411
OHMYYY!!!!! CUTIE, I LOVE THIS FF! U R AN AMAZING WRITER! I LOVE HOW U PUT PAST N PRESENT OF RanTara! OHMYYY UR DESCRIPTIONS!!! IM LIKE DROOLING OVER MY LAPTOP SCREEN!😆 HONESTLY I LOVE THIS HIGH INTENSITY BETWEEN RanTara IN UR FF! THANKS CUTIE FOR THIS LOVELY FF 🤗PLEASE PLEASE DO UPDATE SOON! JUST CANT WAIT!

I love that you call me cutie 😳 Thanks so much for the wonderful compliment uh oh drooling 😆 Thanks once again 🤗