RaNtara FF||Lootera||Part 2-Pg 9 - Page 5

fab update. the convo betwn father n daughter was very well written, awesome. keep going😊

wow parin dear ..
love d first chaper soo much
u had explain beauty if kasmir n antara soo beautifully
i lov Dr.kaul n Antara convo .. it was emotional too ..
hope u will show raghu on nxt update
soo continue soon dear

Originally posted by: angel_anisha

yeah!! me the first one to comment!!

soo gud! love it di.. maza hi aa gaya!!

were those lines that antara wrote original di?? they were too awesum di!!

waiting for next upd...

u have made me restless...

pm me...[not now].. for rest of them..

thanks anisha..and dear the poem is actually a song which antara sang in the first episode of the show 😳

Originally posted by: VirmanArhi4ever

great beginning to a beautiful story!

can't wait for the next part!😊

thanks a lot 😛

Originally posted by: mjht_one

i am sure this ff is going to be awesome cause you are writing it:)

Originally posted by: _Jaan_

Nice Chapter! Loved the Aantra and Dr. Kaul convo! It was cute😳

thanx dear 😛

Originally posted by: neha.angel

Wooww seems ti be sooo interesting. . Plz dooo pm mee tooo..

thanx neha 😊

Originally posted by: ifians

it's amazing parin you made me remember about the first eps of ddej...i always love this father and daughter bond from begining...so happy as i can feel those beautiful moments again...thx a lot..🤗

awee thanx ria 😳

Originally posted by: zzinia2411

WOW great start! 👍🏼 lovely poem too! waiting for my Raghu's entry☺️ tho! update soon please! will be waiting!

thanx 😛