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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
I really like the 1st chapter <3
U stunned, :p the title is so attractive.
Contrast between Gun n Guitar. Fabbulous<3
Will read the 2nd one later!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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updateed after so long.😆...hope it seems at leadt bearable...😆

Chapter 3

"moma pls,how could I know that there would be firing at the spot…"antara made a puppy face who was now moving behind a very angry faced geeta.all around the kitchen.when she just got back from gulmarg she was all amazed to find her all family members were waiting for her with all worried face.cause nasima,there collage friend informed them that she,nargis and afreen all were in gulmarg and at that moment the news of firing has been telecasted on the tv.after that antara was having a huge problem convince her mother geeta."antara,how many times I have to tell you…"geeta said in a angry tone while moving to and fro in the kitchen with a cooking spoon in her hand and poor antara was facing her anger with a puppy face."you are not a child anymore…you know what is kashmir's condition now a days.anything can happen anywhere……"geeta's voice rose."I know moma,but nargis told us that she wanted to go.how could we deny her moma?she was feeling happy after so long time."antara said.geeta melted a bit hearing about nargis."how is she now?"geeta asked."well…a bit normal than before.reyaz's death really shook all of them…."antara said in a sad tune."that's why I got afraid.you know antara from the time you,ishu and your papa get outside from house,u don't know how each and erytime I spend in worry that am I be eable to c all of u safe and sound again.i can't describe how much insecure it felt…"geeta's face got sad.antara smilled and kept one hand on geeta's shoulder giving her a hopeful look."I know moma I understand…."she assured."but u know mama..it's not only the matter of Kashmir or any other place.you can't find a place in the world which is free from any kind of danger.but if we all time just think about those fears then how can we lead our life moma?did u forget what papa said?"antara smilled."what ?"geeta asked in confusion.at that time a male voice approached from the door of kitchen."yahi ki…..dar ke agey defeat hain…."both antara and geeta turned towards the door and immeadiately smilled looking at middle aged all smiling guy standing there."yup….aur dark e piche sab sweet hain…right papa?"antara said with a smile looking at the person."arey aap?why did u came hear?u were not well…"geeta said in a worried voice."arey chodiye bhi mrs kaul…you are teaching a doctor that what he should do in a light fever?"antara's papa smilled and came inside."bhai hum to bas yahin dekhne aye the ki ma aur beti mein sulah huya ki nahi?"he asked with a questioning yet funny look."why not papa?at last I am your daughter right…doc ashok kaul.and I really know well that how to treat my mom when she is in high temper."antara teased with a smile."waisey….kitne kilo ka temper?"ashok asked."hmm yahin kahi 50 kilos…"antara said,"baap re itna…"ashok made a amused look."uff aap dono…"geta said nodding her face.antara let out her beautiful childish grin.at that moment suddenly ashok's phone rang."yes hello…"ashok said.from the other side someone told something."ok ok,no need to worry.you will get that…"ashok assured and cut the ph."what happened?"geeta asked."wo siddiqui called me…"ashol informed."nargis's dad?!what hapeened?"antara asked worriedly."he just informed me.rehana,nargis's sister has high fever from the evening.she needs medicine but you know familliy's condition.they can't afforad those high price medicine.so he was asking me that if I can provide him….so I have to go."ashok informed."but how can you go.."geeta said worriedly,"you yourself is not well.god,even noor is not hear.then we could easily….."suddenly antara interrupted,"papa give me the medicine I'll go."antara said.geeta looked at her in a way like she was out of her mind."antara you…."she promped."now moma pls don't stop me.it's not that late that I can't go outside and I know nargis's house quite well.that road is quite and free of problems."antara said."but how can I let you go beta.you know what happened in gulmarg today and you again…"antara again interrupted."I know moma,but just think..what will be rehana's condition if we can't do anything?they just lost their one child and if something happened again…."antara said in a low voice.geeta was till hesitating."but antara you…."again she mumbed geeta."or do you want papa to go their in this state?you know na if I won't go there papa will surely go.."antara informed."hmm no one can defeat you right?"geeta smilled."bhai ye hunar to use aap se hi mila hain…."ashok said from side."ok ok….beta take care of urself and come back as quickly as possible….."geeta said."okkk mam…."antara said.she quickly changed her dress and wrapped herself in a warm shawl.

"ok,auntie I am going now.otherwise moma will get worried."antara said."bahut sukriya beta.pata nahi tum dawai nahi late to humara kya hota…"nargis's mother said."it's ok auntie…rehana is my sister too…ok bye."antara said and was about to step out from the door and switched on her torch.but it didn't give a single flash."damn it.now what happened to it?"antara said in irritation."hey antu what happened?"nargis asked."don't know nargis this torh is not…."antara jerked the torch several times but it didn't get on."shit..i think it's damaged…now what can I do…I can't even use my mobile.it doesn't have much charge stored."antara said worriedly."ruk ek min…."nargis said and rushed inside.after some moment sshe came out hanging an enlighted lanten in her hand."take it….it will help you for now…"nargis said."but what…"antara couldn't finish and nargis said,"just don't say no antu….it's too dark outside and the mist was getting dence…u can't get to ur house without light.."nargis rolled her eyes."ok meri amma….aap jaisa kahein…."antara took the lantern and got outside.nargis was right.the mist had started to cover the ground.the huge Himalayan renges which was surrounding the whole shrinagar couldn't be ditected anyhow.antara moved towards her house passing the houses and alpine trees.

On another place of Srinagar that guy,whom antara met on the evening at gulmarg was running through the narrow lanes between huge buildings.although raghu managed to got out from hulmarg but those polices didn't left his back.they were keeping their eyes at each and every corner of city and they caused him to run throughout the whole town for all day.he thought he would get to his place hiding himself at the darkness of night.but they were everywhere."s****e kutte ki tara piche pare huye hain….."he mumbed angrily hiding himself at the dark corner of the lane.his all sences were alerted.he heared the sound of polices boot passing by at a distant.even he heared the horn of their car.the night got darker.after some moment everything seemed quite.the police didn't seemed somewhere near.raghu had the extraordinary sense to dictate their presebce nearby.he didn't know how but like he could smell them in air when they were nearby and their stinky smell was nowhere there.he quietly get out of the lane with alerted feet.while he just got outside of the lane and was about to run suddenly due to his less concentration on the path rather than police he bumped into someone.god,who was their? Automatically his hand moved to get out his pistol hiding at the back and turned.but his hand resisted as he understood that the person with whom he collided was a girl.the girl seemed confused too.her face was not clear due to darkness and the shawl she wrapping around her head.but she seemed looking straightly at him.slowly she lifted the lantern in her hand and brought near her face.that small light was enough to enlight both of their faces in each other views.raghu's hand frozed at the spot.it seemed somehow the time had been stooped at the time.at that moment two shooting stars croosed each other in the sky of shrinagar.

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i know it's a very long one😆...but hope u like...waiting for ur replys...dedicated to my all ddej forum buddies juhi,nishu,piya,somu,kavz(just hope she is hear..sigh..)..and many more...😃

Edited by ifians - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

Yay!!!
me first! 😃
coming towards the update...
really very well written Ria! 👍🏼 👍🏼
the family love emotions were portrayed nicely..
looking forward to read it... 😊
continue soon..
thanx for the Pm!
Edited by ronnie30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Ria... itd was sooo beautiful. .. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Omgg Ria

I didn't new abt this😲
tumne batya yun nahi😭
just love the story
so waana read more
ab do continue soon
and mujhe bhi PM karna

lots of love
Geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
nicely written u r fab writer ria😊👏👏 loved it
Edited by shona14 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
reserved: plzz do me a favor, can u change the font, Its very irrating, I can't read like that. Would appreacite if u chnged the font ' 😳
Edited by ..Amira.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
ria the first page almost made me cry. i cant read this anymore . beyond beautiful ff though. dil ko chooti hai teri writing. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
wow itz awesome Ria
i lov how u show d family love emotion
i enjoy it while reading
soo continue soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
very very nice update ,
cant believe u called urself a crab writer , ur work is impressive

way to go ,

update fast

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