Gun and Guitar-a RANTARA ff(note at pg150) - Page 32

that was awesome dear ...i am having goosebumps in my heart now ...so the most crucial moment about to step in Antara's life ...Raghu is gonna step in again with a bang on ...oHHH Haaaiii ...plzzz Ria ...do cont soon ...i just cant wait after this ...u hv killed me ..plzz i want some oxygen plzzz😉 bring Raghu in front oF Antara...

oh no dr kaul died,,,

brilliant update!!

Janemann, aabi teri updates ka he intezaar hai yaar, missing Rantara in the show, at least teri updates mai mazza he aa raha hai, bilkulkhoob likka hai darling, you are so very talented and brilliantly written one.

wow really nicce ria

Dr Kaul is no more😭
Finally Antara is going to Mumbai where hr destiny is waiting fr hr.😃
U hv portrayed each nd every aspect of Antar's life vry beautifully nd d way u hv expressed hr feelings is just mind-blowing. 👏
Plzzz update d nxt part asap.

nice part ria

Chapter 15

They all were in jammu tawi station. Everyone came to bid antara good bye. "antara be carefull ok?! It's a very long journey." Geeta said hugging her. "I will momma!!" antara hugged her back. "antara pauch ne ke baad phone jarrur kar dena... nahi toh tu jaan ti hain na... didi kitni pareshan hongi..." noor apa said. "haan haan apa!! Momma toh pareshan hogi hi aur aap unse bhi jyada pareeshan hongey right?" antara teased. "chal chal... mujhe kya pari hain teri..." noor apa blushed. "will miss ur shofta and kashmiri polao so much!!" antara said with a smile. Ishan also hugged her good bye with a smile. Ruksana was also there with noor apa. Both antara and ruksana hugged each other dearly. Ruku was married to javed, but their friendship was still intact. Just like before. "so girlfriend you are leaving your boyfriend midway!!" Ruksana teased. "shut up ruksana!!" antara giggled. "really I am gonna miss you so much! I never told you but after my family you are the only person who understands me so much!!" ruku said. "after all it's all girlfriends duty to understand her boyfriend!" antara teased. "yaar I really pray to allah that someday you get your real boyfriend in your life and that's also soon..." ruksana said. "no way, don't forget I am all ready commited to ruksana begum!!" antara made a face. "chal jaa jhuti!!... late ho rahi hain train ke liye... and always be happy just like this!!" ruku give her another tight hug after saying this. "you too ruksana and keep im touch okk..." Antara hugged her back. "hey antara ... come here. Train is almost about to depart." Geeta said. Antara went inside the train. The train left the platform. Everyone waved their hand to antara. Antara also bid them goodbye and continued to look at them till the train left the platform.

At the late night at a basti situated at a corner of a huge Mumbai city two people were on the roof. The whole basti was empty of people. Only two of them were there. one of them was drinking alcohol from a bottle and another one was just lying on the floor of the roof keeping his eyes closed. "ee bhai... So gaya kya?" the one who was having alcohol asked in stumbled voice. "abbey mach mach ... Kaan ke samne kab se tera gaana baj raha hain... kaise souyunga??" another man said in irritated voice. MM's face grew lighter. "areee...eyyy... thankkk... youuu.. bhaiii... chalooo akhirrr kisi ne tohhh mere gane ki kaddarrr ki... bole tohhh... I ammm... kya bolta hain wohh angrezi mein... yes... I am hounured... Hickkk!!!..." MM let out a big hiccup at the end. He was totally intoxicated by the alcohol.. "bole to raghu bhai ki jay... Hickkk!!!..." again another hiccup by him. "oye mach mach ab kaan ke samna hichki ka gazal gana bandh kar... . kha toh raha hain mere paiso mein..." raghu said in an irritated voice looking at mach mach. "arey bhai tub hi pi na... aaj to aoun logon ka mauj hain... kya jamkar dhulayi ki anna aur uske gundo ki... Bechare ab basti ke pass bhi nahi ane wale..." MM said. Raghu slowly moved and shifted to sitting position. His eyes were somehow lost. "mai to aaj bahut khus thi humse... Unke ek dushman ka toh band baja guitar harmonium sab baja diya tune... pata nahi fir bhi aise devdas bane kyun baitha hain?! Hickkk!!!" MM continued in his stumbled voice. "kyun ki mere ko sona hain!!" raghu said indifferently. "par kaal se nahi so payega tu..." MM said with a huge grin. "kyun kaal bomb futne wala hain kya? Ya tsunami anew ala hain?" raghu asked in irritated tone. "arey nahi re bhai... Maine wo gali wale baba se puchne gaya tha ki mera future mein kya locha lapacha hone wala hain...toh baba ne kaha ki apun ke life mein to door door tak kuch nahi dikhta... par mere kisi dost... bole to mera bahut jigri kisi dost ka life mein bahut bara change ane wala hain... Aisa change jo uske raton ki nind haram kar dega...aur mera sab se jigri dost to tuhich hain bhai!!..." MM said with a huge grin. "tere baba ki bachan tere pass hi rakh... Nind urne wali hain... Arey ab sukun ki nind nahi ayi to kya kaam... mere ko to har raat lamba hoke sona hain..." raghu said in another irritating voice. Suddenly MM laughed loudly. "bhai mere se jhoot mat bol... Tera nind ek salon se ura huya hain... Jab se tu Kashmir se waps aya hain..." MM said. Raghu jerked in his word and snapped back to MM with wide eyes. He was laughing like hell. He was intoxicated by alcohol. Raghu slowly looked back to dark sky.Totally covered with cloud! Neither, the appearance of moon nor a single glint of stars. All pitch dark. That darkness always remind about him of that night when they both were walking side by side together on the mist covered lane of shrinagar. Those hazel eyes, that smile, everything was still crystal clear in his memory. Did she remember him a bit?! Raghu closed his eyes tightly in frustration. Why couldn't he forget that face, her name even if he tried hard?! She was just a random girl whom he met on pathway. Random?! He doubted. She was not just like random girls. But what did she actually mean to him? He could never find the answer in those long one year.

"mumy don't worry I will manage..." antara assured someone in phone. The train was about to reach in Mumbai. "u sure na antara?! I am really feeling bad. Govind had to go to baroda early morning today. I wanted to go to pick you from station but our fuse box was suddenly burned and electrician can come at any time. So I can't leave..." saroj said with a grieve voice. "mumy I told u na. I can go myself! Besides I am not a baby who can't take care of herself!" antara said. "but antara you never came to our new home before. U sure u can found the place?" saroj asked in worried voice. "mumy I have the address. And besides, I can ask the people on the way. Okk now I have to go. The station is coming and I have tol arrange my stuffs." Antara said. "okkk antara! But pls take care of yourself okk?" saroj said. "okk mumy..." antara cut the phone .

"naik basti?!!" the taxi driver frowned looking at the address on the paper which antara gave him. "yeah that's the place." Antara nodded. Driver looked to her face with an odd expression. It really made her uncomfortable. "okk madam..." the driver said sheepishly. Antara sighed and got inside the taxi with her luggage. After almost 1 hour suddenly driver stopped the car at a random roadside. Antara jerked up and looked forward. "now what?!..." she asked. "arey madam, hum se mat puchiye samne dekhiye kya chal raha hain..." Driver said. Antara suddenly heard the sound of huge chaos and she looked at front. The road was totally blocked as ther was a huge chaos at the front. Some of the people are dangerously fighting with each other. No car or people could pass that space. Those goons were breaking the glasses of shops and houses, the roadside vendors stall, throwing glass, broken stuffs and bottles to each other. On the whole, the sight was of a huge mess. " what is this?!!" antara asked with wide eyes. "arey madam aap lagta hain iss area mein naye ho... Ye toh naik basti ka roj ka kissa hain... Har din yahan pe maara piti lagi reheti hain... chahein din ho ya raat aap ko yahan har din live action seq dekhneko milega... Mumbai ka bahut khatarnaak area hain ye...kaha jata hain naik basti mein jis din tamasha na ho na uss din suraj paschim se ugta hain..!!" driver informed him. "kya kahe rahe ho aap bhaiya?!" antara asked in a quite scared voice. "madam issi liye main chauk gayi thi jab aap ne kaha aap ko yahan ana hain!!... madam yahan aye din police ki red lagi reheti hain... kabhi kabhi toh deadbody bhi milta hain yahan ke galion aur dustbin se... iss area mein bahut locha hain mam... police ati hain aur khali hath laut jati hain... kuch nahi kar pata..." driver continued his blabbers which increased her fear more. "madam aap yahan utar jaiye jo address aap puch rahe the wo pass mein hi hain... main iss se agey gari nahi le ja sakti...!!" driver informed. "kya?! Aisa kaise ho sakta hain? Main akeli wahan par kaise jaongi!!" antara said in a fearfull tone looking at the scene which had became more savage. "madam mere ko meri jaan pyari hain.,.. aap ke liye main naik basti ki gundo se panga nahi le sakta...mere baal bache hain ghar mein...chaliye utriye!!" driver said. "kya zabardasti hain bhaiya..." antara fumed and opened the door of the taxi to go outside. Suddenly an ugly looking man came at her front startling her. "ey larki chal hath..." he pushed her inside showing her the big dagger in his hand. Antara was so scared. The goon got inside the car forcefully and locked the door. "mar gaye...!!" The driver said with a fearfull voice. "what is this man!! Get out of the car..." antara managed to say in a loud voice to the goon. "abbey ohh mahtarma... Aona angrezi pathsala yahan mat kholo... " the goon warned him in a dangerous voice showing him the dagger and then looked towards the driver. "abbey oye chikne... chup chap gari chala... aur mere ko nikal yahan se!!" he ordered. "Madam aap ke wajah se aaj phas gaya main..." The driver said looking at antara. "zuban pe break laga aur gari start kar..." the goonb again said in a high speech. The driver just kept his hand on the key at that moment suddenly the car's window got broken with a huge bang. Antara could only saw the shower of several broken glasses in front. Her face became bloodless in fear. she never felt that much afraid before. Not just her but the driver and goon were also froze at the spot. And at the next moment when the shower of glasses came to end a hand swiftly moved inside the car through broken window and opened the lock of door. Antara could the hand only, cause the feature was covered by the goon's huge feature. The goon's all air seemed gone and he was also shaking heavily. Before the door of the car got opened fully the goon jumped in frustration. "bachao.. mere ko kuch nahi pata...!!" He almost begged. "raghu bhai ab toh full toh gaye kaam se.." the driver whispered in a low scared voice. Suddenly the goon jumped at the other side of the door of the taxi startling antara. The obstacle got away from her front. Antara's eyes got stuck with his black angry orbs and she just froze. No not him, Again!!! After almost one year. That bitter memory she suppressed forcefully inside her deep dense heart. The memory again surfaced. Their first meet in gulag, the time spend with each other, their last meet in that function when she came to know his very truth, each and everything flashed in front of her eyes like lightning strike and she hrounded to the spot looking at his face like a lifeless statue. RAGHUNATH NAIK!! again that name hurt his mind badly. Raghu's angry gaze was fixed on car's door. He still didn't noticed her. he was anout to jump beside that goon when suddenly he sensed her. He twitched his head slowly towards her to meet her shocked gaze. And he seemed flattered! The anger started to changed into tenderness slowly and his eyes again caught that same intense expression which antara observed after so long. Looking dumbly towards each other for almost fifteen mins suddenly he said in a low voice... "tu yahan...!!!!" . raghu's voice caused antara to come back to reality. "idhar kaise ayi tu?!!" his voice suddenly seemed excited and happy somehow. There was suddenly a new glow in his eyes. But antara was shaking heavily in front of him. "arey woh sheetty ke chamche ne tujhe kuch kiya toh nahi?!!" he asked ina concerned voice. Anatara was looking here and there to avoid his gaze. She slowly moved towards the door. "arey huya kya?! Muh kyun sil liya?!! Mere ko pehechana nahi kya?!" he was almost smiling at that moment. Strange! Why was he so happy seeing her?! "arey main woh..." But before he could finish the word antara jumped from the taxi and rushed like blind. She had to run away from that person. Anyhow!! "arey sunn!!!... oye..." his voice followed her but she didn't bothered to look back...

Precap: "I am sorry mama ji but I can't live here." Antara said with a low voice. "what?!!" saroj spoke out in shock.

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thx for eading...🤗

Yaar i don't have much time to type a long review but that was a very nice update! Yaar Raghu and MachMach drunk was so funny haha ROFL 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 But i felt bad for Raghu he was so happy to see her and she just ran away from him!