Gun and Guitar-a RANTARA ff(note at pg150)

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Hina Kamran

@honeybees22

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#221

omg just read both of them and loved them

cont soon

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Woww! Dear it was too good and interesting!let it be long and it's alwright for emotinal atyachar ..isse jyada to hum show mein seh rahe hain...i really enjoy ur all updates...pls carry on..great work!

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#223

mind blowing update!!

great work as usual!1

ty for the pm.

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swagata

@sweetieswagata

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#224

just read both the parts...😊

it was amazing...great job👍🏼

thanks for the PM😳

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Ritu_Divan

@Ritu_Divan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#225

amazing ria,, loved it .. cont soon

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pampz

@pampz

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#226

i can well understand how badly u wanna get over this ... but i must say its superrrb ...if i say i loved it ...it wd not express my entire feelings ... i just got absorbed by ur story ... it was beyond beautiful ...carry on soon ...as its hard to wait u know ...

n thanx for the pm

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harshita gangwani

@harshita1996

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Hey firstly thanks fr d pm

I read both d parts i swear its amazing..:)

Its perfectly nice..

Keep writing loved it..<3

Update soon will be waiting..:D

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Nisha

@Nichuss

Elite

+ 33

Posted: 11 years ago

#228

awww part1 full of raghu... then rantara...

raghu gave confidence to antara...

antu n team played the song...

the lines of jannat...tat was really nice darls...👍🏼

antu trapped aman without his knowledge...

ruku got the mobile...

now y mai called raghu???????

precap..confused...

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Sushmitha

@.sushmitha.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#229

Chapter 10 ki baath karu toh, yeh bakwaas nahi tha... Tum kuch bhi bolthi ho... Infact it was like film scene, A Patriotic film,😃 jisme antara, ruksana, Javed, aur kahi actors hai aur woh log kathil ko pakadne main lage hue hai... 🤔

Yaar ek request hai tumhare liye... Plz, koi bhi update ho, Ek baar hamare Raghu ke naam likh do, hum sab ko sukoon mehsoos hogi... Plz...😃

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Sushmitha

@.sushmitha.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#230

Aur Chapter11 main, mujhe Part-1 se jyaada Part-2 bahut accha laga...

"Ae rab jane tu kab apne kadam rahein Kashmir se mor liye. Ae rab bite zamane, abto tune iss zaen par raveya lagane hi chor diye!" she became silent for a while, "Kashmir, himalay ke choti pe bani ye khubsurat si wadiyan. Iske tareef mein toh koi bhi labs fike par jate hain, khuda ne apni sari daulat, sari khubsurti uzar di hain iss choti si zameen mein. Issi liye to kaha jata hain issey... JANNAT!! Is duniya ka ek lauta jannat, jaha khuda baste hain."

N i luved the above lines... Sach main, kashmir is evrything... Itz ma fav place...

Luved ua update...❤️