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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesum... Lovely... fantastic update... ❤️ed it alot alot alot...
Jz i wanna say that Ur updates will always be so Rhetoric... Luv the way u write...⭐️

Update the next part asap...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Both updates are Awesome...Super like..
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Chapter 10

Antara was seating on the ground with wide eyes. She still couldn't belive the thoughts came into her mind. Sometimes she thought that her brain was thinking insane. But again she matched the photo with the stranger person. There was no doubt some match in them. That chiseled jaw line, that sharp nose and mostly the cut on his forehead! That was exact match. After all those things how could she ignore the fact? Antara's eyes fell on the store room. That man came out from the store room. That mean... Suddenly a horrible thought flashed into her mind. She took a huge breath. No she couldn't be weak at that moment. She hold herself at first and quickly plotted in her brain that what should she do at next. She rushed towards the auditorium. She felt her heart was running faster than ever. She reached at the crowded hall and looked here and there. Bur she couldn't found the person for whom she was searching. She rushed among crowded seats. Some of the peoples got annoyed by her mad rush cause, they were being disturbed. At last she saw ruksana. She rushed towards her. "ruksana!!" antara called her. "arey antara!!" ruku was startled to c her. "tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?" she asked. "ruksana! Javed ji kahan hain?!" antara asked quickly. "wo to mujhe yahan baithake chale gaye. Unko security dekhna tha..."she said "ruksana unhe dhondna hoga jaldi!!" antara said catching her breath. "haan par kyun?! Tum aise haaf kyun rahi ho?"ruksana asked in worried voice. "sawal mat karo ruksana time nahi hain!!" antara almost screamed in hyper. "ok ok, chal mere sath." Ruku said. She understood that the problem is serious. "chal!!" ruku said. Antara followed her. After some time they found javd at a side of stage talking with some other security guards. "javed ji!!" ruku screamed. Javed looked towards them. "excuse me!!" javed said to them and came near antara and ruksana. "arey aap dono yahan?" he asked with a smile. "javed ji!! Aman, He is here!!" Antara said in a shaky voice. "what?! Aman?" javed seemed confused. "aman!! The terrorist!!" antara said in a low voice. Javed and ruksana's eyes became wide in shock. "what?!! Aman?!" javed couldn't believe his ears. "antara ye kya kahe rahi hain tu?!" ruksana was startled. Antara explained the whole thing in a nutshell. "antara are u sure that u saw aman?" javed asked. "not 100% but he had quite a match with aman and also his behavior was too strange. Like, he was trying to hide himself from crowd. Just think javed ji. Why should he go to our collage's store room while he is not even any member of the institute, I am studying here for almost two years and I never saw him" Antara explained. "u saw him coming out of store room right?" javed asked. "yes!!" antara said. Javed turned back and called his companions. They rushed there. "tell narendra to come at the collage storeroom immediately with bomb detector and call the bomb squad as soon as possible!" javed ordered. "ok sir..." the security guard said. "and don't spread the news right now. We have to keep it secret. A terrorist may be hiding in audience. Keep close eyes on defense minister always." Javed said. "right sir!!" he said and all of them rushed. "lets go, I want to check the collage store right now." Javed said. "ok!" antara said. All three of them rushed to collage store with worried face. "javed ji apne bomb squad ko kyun bulaya?! Aap ko sach mein lagta hain ki..." ruku asked while they were going towards store room. "I don't know ruksana! Agar aman sach mein yahan hain to kuch bhi ho sakta hain!!" javed said with an worried voice.

They felt too many problems finding the bomb. Cause, metal detector couldn't detect anything. Javed understood that no metal detector could find the bomb. It was somehow protected from detectors. At last they started to find themselves and at last they found that. It was kept inside a box at the corner of storeroom. It was just a small pocket size tabloid type thing on which a box was attached and some infrared lights were blinking. "god!" both javed and narendra gasped looking towards each other. "what happened?" antara asked in an worried voice. "we never saw this kind of bomb before. So much advanced technique. I wonder how those terrorist found these gadgets! They must have purchased them from outside country!!" javed said. "look at the shield over the bomb. That's why our detector couldn't sense it. We checked each and every person who came inside. But we couldn't found a single tress of bomb or explosive." Narendra said. "but you know narendra the worst thing is that, I don't think our bomb squad could defuse that bomb!" javes said. "what are you saying?" narendra became worried. "trust me narendra, I have deled with so many explosives and bombs in my life. But, I have never seen anything, like this. The knowledge I have about gadgets and electronic things, I can assume that even our bomb squad people is not aware about this technology." Javed said. Everyone's face became horror stuck as they heard his words. "so are you saying that there is no way to stop this bomb?" antaran asked. She couldn't keep quite anymore. "as I know small thing that this types of bombs have some triggers. Or you can say something remote control like thing. Someone press the trigger from distance and the bomb explodes. And now aman has that trigger with him." Javed said. "so u are trying to say..." antara said. "yes you are right..." he interrupted her. ": "antara somehow we have to snatch the trigger from him. Otherwise we can't deactivate the bomb!" javed said. "damn it!! We don't even know that when he will press the trigger and everything will be finished." Narendra said. "javed jee, when aman was coming out from the store room I saw a mobile phone on his hand. Can it be that..." antara said. "mobile phone!! May be that mobile is the trigger!! Yes he matched bombs freq with mob freq. I am right narendra. I understood now. We have no other way rather than to find that trigger. Aman's mobile." Javed said. "but we don't even know how does he look like now. He changed his whole get up. May be e can get help from cctv camera." Narendra said. At that moment a man came and informed that bomb squad people had reached. Two people got inside the store room wearing protective shield and with their gadgets. "sir, I think they have used freq matching technique. Can you confirm me." Javed asked bomb squad peoples. They chqd the bomb. "you are right sir. They indeed used freq matching technique in a very complicated way. We have to find the control unit as soon as possible." The people announced. "ok so narendra now listen carefully. We have to find aman! Anyhow!!" javed said. "why don't we alert the people about bomb? And we should also take minister away from hear." Narendra said, "no way narendra! If aman came to know that we found the bomb he will immediately press the trigger. We have to do everything carefully." Javed turned back to the man standing at the door. "what's about cctv footage?" he asked. "Sir!" he dropped his gaze. "the guard on the the computer room was all unconscious and someone had deleted all the footage from computer." He said. "damn it!! He was prepared." Narendra said in disgust. "javed ji I saw him. I can tell you how exactly he looks." Antara said suddenly. "u saw him. Good! Tell us." Narendra said. Antara gave them exact details of aman. "thank u antara. Now u two go back and join ur companions. And don't tell anything to anyone! We don't want to create chaos!" narendra said to antara and ruksana. "sjaved ji.." antara suddenly said in a shaky voice. "yes!!" javed looked at her. "I don't know what's going to happen to me. But please my little brother ishan, nargis's two little sister has come to c our performance. Not just them. A group of kids had come from orphanage to enjoy our program. Pls, I beg you don't turn their cheer full smile into screams. Please u have to stop the bomb for them." Antara's voice were breaking. Everyone was looking at her with wide eyes. "antara trust us, we will find aman!!" javed said. "okk!!" antara said in a low voice. Both of them gone out leaving bomb exparts and one officer near bomb. Antara's phone rang. She composed herself and took the phone. "antu yaar where are you?! Come on our program is about to start." Nargis said from other side. "ya coming!!" antara said trying to keep her voice normal. "Hurry up and come soon." Nargis said. Antara cut the phone and came out from the store room with worried eyes. Ruksana followed her.

Precap: Antara indiacated towards the man at her behind. Ruksana quickly understood her indication and nodded her head.

sorry guyzz it was boaring one...even mere bhi dimag ka korma ban gaya likhte likhete...pls ek aur baar jhel lo meri bakwas... fir se bakwas nahi karoongi..😭

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Posted: 11 years ago
KYA? No Raghu?? 😭
OMG yaar ye kya?? tune sajda mein nahi daraya to yahan double dara diya??


OMG ab kya???

it was a good update keeps u at the edge!
Edited by alishamerchant - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Ria i stopped watching DDEJ for past 3 weeks

i really dont feel like even discussing abt the show ...
i cant believe that once DDEJ was my super fav show ...and i stopped watching it
but its only for ur fan fic ...i am commenting on this forum
ok i will read ur fan fic ...and will comment
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was nice
liked it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
ekdum jhakaas hai re ria😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
no no it was very nice as usual ...n full of tention ...i was waiting whn Raghu wll come on scene ...but i hope he wd come in ur next update ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ria it was a nicely written scene
as i missed ur previous updates so i hv no idea who is Javed but i loved ur superbly written screen play
ur doing such an awesome job
Nautanki ppl shd keep writers like u in their production house
becaz the current writers of DDEJ are doing a pathetic job ...the current writers of DDEJ hv actually ruined the show ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow loved it soo much
cont soon

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