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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh ria superb . tune to brake ke baad jais elight cut gaya ho aise situation mein dal diya hai. jaldi se precap tak update karo pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
really loved it
That song
superb
Do continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of Love
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Posted: 11 years ago
I just love this FF..U wrote it So Beautiful Ria,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb Ria. . ..
love this FF...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
What a beautiful update ria...
And loved this song...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks fr such nice update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hayeee.... Reading this was lyk watching a film... It was really awesummm...😳

Thanx fo such fascinating update, infact it refreshed my mind yaar... From all these news of S A marriage in DDEJ...


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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
so afreen and nargis are teasing antara hahahhah
and raghu is lost in antara singing
and nw he is going back to mumbai or some twist will nt let him go
do update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow really nice ria
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 8

"yaar this tune is not coming right..." nargis said holding the guitrer. All girls were still in the garden and discussing about the song they would perform on stage. Antara was holding the papers where the musical notification was written. "ok lets try again..." antara suggested. They again stood in their position. Antara kept her paper at a side for just a sec but a heavy wind suddenly came and took away the paper. "oh no...!!" all of them said in unison as they saw the paper floating in wind and moving towards the old building situated at the end of garden. "now how can we do our reharsh without notification." Nargis said. "wait hear, I am bringing that back..." antara said and rushed towards the old building. Nargis and afreen stayed back to keep eye on their things. Antara reached at the building situated at the last corner of garden. She noticed the paper on the smooth floor. She went and took the paper on hand. Suddenly a voice came into his ear. Following the voice her eyes found a man standing behind the coloumns and talking to someone. From her position, antara could see him clearly but the man didn't notice her. What was he doing in that lonely place where rarely visitors came. His few words got into his ears. "yes, give the phone to chief..." The man said. After some pause she again heard his voice, "hello chief...yes chief ... I got the thing...okk chief I am coming." That man removed the phone from his ear. Antara was silently listening to all his convo. What ws he talking about?! The man seemed a bit worried. His alerted eyes were moving at every side. But he couldn't notice antara as a group of huge coloumns had hide her from him. antu why are you again being curious cat? Besides it's not good to spying on someone's private phone conversation.' She thought and slowly got out from the place. But the curious cat inside her didn't get quite. Something was bugging in her heard. She couldn't forget the face of that man.

In a dark living room, aman was seating in a couch in front of some strange people. The man who was seating at his front asked him, "aman, did you got the thing?". Aman took out the parcel and handed over to him. That guy unwrapped the paper and took out a small electronic instrument. "it was the last thing needed to fit on timer. Now we are ready to welcome the defence minister. Akhir unke swagat mein atasbaji to honi hi chahiye." The man let out a cruel smile looking at the small gadget. "aman do I need to remind you about your next step?" he said looking towards aman. "I remrember everything chief. After two days u will give me the big cracker in my hand and I have to place it on the very place." Aman said. "very good aman. That's why I rely on you so much. Tum mere sab se bharosemand sepahi ho." Chief said. "haan mujhe pata hain...aapko fikar kar ne ki zarurat nahin... kaal city collage ki function mein wo bomb pauch jayegi.." aman said in a cold voice.

"antara we are gonna rock our city collage's function tomorrow..." Afreen said so excitedly. They were all in afreen's car. The driver was driving and three of them were having fun at back seat. "yeah yeah I know afreen. But still we need to prepare more." Antara said to calm her down. "antu I am so much excited yaar. Defence minister is coming as chief guest in our function. I am so excited to meet him." Afreen again became excited. "even I want to meet him." Nargis said in a low voice. Antara and afreen sensed problem and quietly looked towards her. "I want to ask him that when our country's defence mechanism will be capable of destroying those demons who had changed our jannat into death valley! When the people will feel secure and other innocent child like riyaz won't loose their precious life." She resisted her tone. Antara observed fresh tears in nargis's eyes. "nargis..." antara called her slowly. " I'm fine yaar..." nargis ans with a sad smile. "Sometimes it bothers so much... yeah lets concentrate on our program..." she said in an assuring voice. They again started their discussion. Their car came at the crowded market area of Srinagar. Antara saw too many forces and militaries on the road. They were scattered everywhere, keeping their alerted glances at everywhere. "why so many militaries at road?! Are they putting high securities for defence minister's Srinagar visit?" antara asked. "I don't really know yaar. But yeah, when we were going to Shalimar bag at morning and militaries were checking our car I heared that they heard the news that terrorists are again set up to do bigger chaos . they didn't have any confirm news. And also since minister is visiting hear." Afreen informed. "not again..." antara whispered. They again became silent. When they were about to leave the market area antara said she had to do some shopping stuffs for mom. So afreen left her there. She bid adieu to nargis and afreen and went for shopping. On the way to shop she saw a poster on the wall. Another most wanted person on those days. Armies were searching for that terrorist. He was known as aman. A sketch of a face full of bared and black goggles in eyes. Antara suddenly stooped at front of the poster. She thought that she saw the face somewhere before but couldn't remember. Whatever!! She didn't have time for that. She hurried towards the shop.

At night, antara was seating at her room's balcony, playing the tunes of the song. Her hands were lazily moving on the chords and a huge smile was playing in her face. She was humming with the tune and catching the tones. Suddenly she heard some small footsteps at her behind. "didu..." she heard ishan's voice. "yup..." she turned back to find ishan standing there with a confused face. She had pen and paper in her hand. "hey didu.. help me na! teacher asked me to write a paragraph but I can't." ishan said with a poor face. "umm what's the topic?" antara asked. "RUBBER PLANTATION IN INDIA..." ishan said. As soon as ishan said the word plantation antara remembered that boy's face. That funny moments on Shalimar garden she spent with that stranger. A quite laugh escaped from her mouth. "hey didu what happened, why are u laughing?" ishan asked in confused tone. "nothing ishu... u go inside, I am coming in 5 mins." Antara said. "ok...!!" ishan got inside. Antara kept her chin over the corner of her guiter hugging the instrument and looked at the silent night outside. Her lost eyes had some unknown gleam. "pagal kahi ka... pata nahi kaun hain... kahan se aya hain..." antara said in a lost voice. Moonlight started to play on her smilling face.

"bhai, yahan mera dil toot raha hain aur tu hans raha hain..." mach mach said quite angrily looking at raghu's silent laugh. "ab maine kya kiya? Jo kiya wo to ruksana ne kiya..." raghu said suppressing his laugh. "haan dekh kya kiya ruku ne... bhaijaan bana diya mere ko..." mach mach said with apoor face. Raghu again laughed looking at other side. "keheti hain bhaijaan... aap jab jayengey aap kii bahut yaad ayegi..." mach mach imitated ruku's voice.. "aur kya kahe rtahi thi yeri?... haan... bhaijaan kash aap dono agle maine tak ruk jate to mere nikah bhi dekh jate... agle mahine uski nikah hain..." mach mach said. Raghu couldn't controle his laugh looking at his funny crying face. "has le has le... kabhi tujhe bhi na ye din dekhna pare..." mach macg said. "arey mereko kyun data raha hain aab... apun ne pehele hi kaha tha ki ye larki warki ke chakkar mein mat fas..." Ragu said. "arey tut toh..." Mach mach again started his sad story and raghu made a face. When suddenly he heard the sound calling bell. Someone opend the door. "arey antara..." he heared ruku's voice. But the thing got into noticed was the name she took. ANTARA!! Raghu suddenly rushed to the stairs leaving confused MM behind. Raghu peeped from the upper corner of stairs. A smile escaped his face when he saw the girl standing at the door facing ruksana.

Precap: antara suddenly remembered everything. The face on poster. The person on Shalimar garden talking to phone. Her eyes wided in fear.

Edited by ifians - 11 years ago

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