My continuation of THE story 07/08/14

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--Jenelle--

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Posted: 11 years ago

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meanwhile Karan is drivng like a mad man. He has lost the tracks and there is not a vehicle insight. he is on a deserted street... suddenly the road starts to get thin. his car cannot fit in the narrow spot. then the road comes to an immediate end...

he gets out of his car and scan his surrounds. there are a few abandoned warehouses in the area.

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--Jenelle--

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Posted: 11 years ago

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He is going out of his mind. He would never forgive himself if anything happened to Ginny... He fell to knees and started to pray., "Baba,please show me the way. Help me find ginny." he is sobbing hard. and then suddenly its like a veil being lifted from his eyes. he says that he is in love with ginny. at first he questions his heart but the more questioned it the more he realized that it was love.

he had thought that he was in love with shivani but he realized now that it was just infatuation. Ginny made him smile. she made him laugh. she made him want to pull out his hair... she captivated him. he slowly realized that he was in love with her all along...

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rekrn

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Wow Jen 👏👏⭐️⭐️

Your updates are so gripping am enjoying it very much. Aww Karan is in love with Ginny so nice😳
Hope he finds her soon and that too unhurt.

So Shivani and Sumi both left their phones oh oh is something go to happen to them.😲

CV's should have learned from you and other members how to keep the viewers interest😉

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--Jenelle--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

now Karan has a determined looked. he gets up and he's like a raging bull. he searches the first warehouse for ginny. there is no sign of her anyhwere. he checks another warehouse. Raghu arrives at the spot where Karan told he he was at. Raghu see's karan's car and searches for him...

Meanwhile shivani and sumitra are also searching for ginny. but they are looking in the wrong direction...

Ginny is in the last warehouse bound and gagged. she is struggling to free herself. her captors are smiling cunningly...

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--Jenelle--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Shivani trips on her sari and sumitra helps her to get up. She is wounded. her leg is bleeding profusely.

karan is still searching a warehouse. a shadow comes up on him he turns to hit the person but is relieved to see it is raghu...

precap-----sumitra is searching for a place to let shivani rest. shivani falls unconscious. it starts raining...

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--Jenelle--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: rekrn
Wow Jen ⭐️

Your updates are so gripping am enjoying it very much. Aww Karan is in love with Ginny so nice😳
Hope he finds her soon and that too unhurt.

So Shivani and Sumi both left their phones oh oh is something go to happen to them.😲

CV's should have learned from you and other members how to keep the viewers interest😉

thanks reks😳

i'm glad you are enjoying...😊

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rekrn

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Fantastic Update Jen👏👏

So Raghu found Karan once they find Ginny they will have to go find Shivani and Sumi I think😆

Intriguing Precap: Hope Shivani will be ok, wonder in your story if Sumi has really changed or she is faking it.

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Gagori Chatterjee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Jen awesome updt 👏👏 ... I m glad Karan realised that Ginni only is his true love and Shivani was always a infatuation .. well this kidnap plan by his mother here worked as blessing in disguise 😆 ... ok with rain coming , I want RaShi to b together now and ahemm 😈 .. cant wait for next updt tomorrow 😳

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Agnes

@agbabe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Aww Jen it is a blessing to have you write all this TQ👏

The more i read the more i want RASHI back in our lives.😭

But this is so serene and it keeps my day sunnier.

Phew 1 week without Rashi is like ages...but your LUD is like a candle lit in the dark and gives bright light with the hope that one day we will see them again.

Please keep the flame on dear.

Edited by agbabe - 11 years ago