SurYa FF-Pyaar Ka Dard Hai Part 5 updated on bottom of Page 5

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SurYa FF-Pyaar Ka Dard Hai

Note-Readers here the narrator is Sandhya. This love story has no link with DABH storyline

After many days, it is decided to send me (Sandhya) to my in-laws house. Now my age is already 18 years, but I have not got the luck to stay in my in-laws house because my father Arvind Kothari was a very big industrialist. My FIL Arun Rathi sends his men to take me in every month, but my father refused to send me. This time he said to the men," Tell to Arun, first damadji (Sooraj) should know how to earn lively hood the he can take Sandhya". After hearing these words Sooraj ji went to Jaipur to earn livelihood without anyone's knowledge. In short period of time, he became a big industrialist.
After his leaving, no one come to take me or ask about me.

Due to anger, sadness and pride broken I was mentally and physically not well. I was angry with my parents. I always say them," why you told to my husband to earn the money? Is money big from my happiness?"

Like this time goes on. That incident is know past I said. I have heard that Sooraj ji is doing hotel business and know owner of million rupees and had returned home know. My FIL had sent a mail that," Due to your blessings Sooraj has become matured and able that he can make Sandhya live happily. We have sent car as we want our Bahu to have a safe and sound journey."

My father entered my room with my Ankur Bhaiya. He smiling said," Sandhya its time for your leave. Get ready you have to go to your in-laws as they were eagerly waiting to see you."

Then my youngest cousin Kavya entered,"Sandhya Zizi! Sandhya Zizi! When will you come?" Then I pressed her checks. Kavya innocently asked me," Do you know something about in-laws?"

Shyly, I said," In-Laws house is like Nadanban where Parijata (The flower of Gods) blossoms. When a woman put her legs on that place she becomes fairy. The birds' songs are fond to be heard, in winter season, from south the heartwarming wind blows. In Amavasya, there will be full moon light."

Hearing this Kavya says," I think the place must be a haunted place, isn't it?"

Precap-Sandhya leaving Kothari Mansion

Credit-My elder sister rosyammy(DMG fan)

Links for parts-

Part 1:-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/diya-aur-baati-hum/4071305/surya-ff-pyaar-ka-dard-hai-part-5-updated-on-bottom-of-page-5

Part 2:-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/diya-aur-baati-hum/4071305/surya-ff-pyaar-ka-dard-hai-part-5-updated-on-bottom-of-page-5?pn=2

Part 3:-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/diya-aur-baati-hum/4071305/surya-ff-pyaar-ka-dard-hai-part-5-updated-on-bottom-of-page-5?pn=4

Part4:-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/diya-aur-baati-hum/4071305/surya-ff-pyaar-ka-dard-hai-part-5-updated-on-bottom-of-page-5?pn=4

Part 5-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/diya-aur-baati-hum/4071305/surya-ff-pyaar-ka-dard-hai-part-5-updated-on-bottom-of-page-5

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pasurYa thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good Start Kiran...
waiting for the next part
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ok I will try to update next part within this weekend as I my free but from next month updates will be on Saturday night or Sunday
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new ff storry started ..!! vry nyc.. 👍🏼
All d best..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start
Waiting fr next part
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Nice ff...👍🏼do update soon
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thanks a lot friends I will update the next parrt tommorrow afternooh
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Part 2

All ready a week passed, now time came Sandhya has to leave. Sandhya's mother and aunts made her ready before leave. Her sasural is in Ajmer. At least 3 days journey, it will take them to reach Ajmer (3 days journey, it's an imagination). Sandhya lost in thoughts of her sasural, thinking how her Sooraj ji looked, how many members in that family etc. Suddenly

Sandhya feels something strange about the place where the car was passing. An uncanny feeling was arousing and increasing with each passing moment. Suddenly the car stopped near a lonely place. Sandhya asked the driver about the problem. Someone enters, its Parmeet.

**Flashback

P-"Sandhya, will you marry me? I love you. I can do anything to achieve you. Please be agree to my proposal."

S-"Parmeet for your information let me inform you that I am married, my husband is a demanded candidate in Ajmer. After, my studies I am going to him forever. I can't marry you. I wish any girl more deserving than me comes to your life soon."

End**

Sandhya shockingly says,"Parmeet, what are doing here"."Sandhya, Sandhya I have told you before that I can do anything to get you as my wife. I will not let be any others' if you can't be mine." Parmeet said.

Sandhya panics. She didn't know what to do. Parmeet eyes at her with evil smile

Precap-Sandhya running away from the car. Parmeet unaware of it.

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plz forgive me for some mistakes lol comment as it motivates writter to write more

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Go ahead Pragnya. Stalking is a nice theme

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