FF: Chalenge Hum Saath Saath Last part on pg 20

S Shobhana

@slodkagila

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

no i will not ignore ur buddhi coz it makes me think which is good for me. i always want someone to point out my mistakes to improve myself. And one morething uma ji i will continue this ff only upto part 15 but that too with a small condition ie. u should always comment like this pointing out the mistakes deal.😛

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thala

@thala

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

carry on shobi

the story is moving in a very good pace

i liked bhasan dialogues and the support from suraj

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Manju

@MJV2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Just read part 9 &10.
Wonderful analysis Shabhana ⭐️ For a non-reader(novels) your writing is amazing yaar 👍🏼
SurYaAA.. ..very nice touch.
Me too liked the way bhabo & Suraj supporting Sandhya.

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Diya_DB

@Diya_DB

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Sissy... I've been giving you my honest vies till now... So today also I'm going to do that...

Wish you hadn't separated Surya 😔 It was nice to see Bhasan bonding and all that... But for me it's always Surya in the forefront ⭐️

Rest of your FF was very good 👍🏼 Also loved the names you've chosen for Surya's kids... Very meaningful ⭐️

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S Shobhana

@slodkagila

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

@ rama akka - only five more updates to do. Thanks for liking it😊
@ sissy what to do they have chosen such a path to live I really want to do something realistic. Even separate life of Surya doesn't appeal to me😕
@ manjuu thank u😊

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nitish kumar

@nitish95

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

and di one thing I want to say
now if cv's comes to visit our forum and asks what do u want ?why u all r not satisfied
we can simply make them read ur ff

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Diya_DB

@Diya_DB

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: nitishkumar1995
and di one thing I want to say
now if cv's comes to visit our forum and asks what do u want ?why u all r not satisfied
we can simply make them read ur ff

👍🏼😳

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S Shobhana

@slodkagila

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: nitishkumar1995
and di one thing I want to say
now if cv's comes to visit our forum and asks what do u want ?why u all r not satisfied
we can simply make them read ur ff

Arey chote don say like that. Our cvs are the best. If they take my ff & do it we will not get this much TRP i'm sure. Saas bahu drama some nok jhok are really needed.😊

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nitish kumar

@nitish95

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: shobhana_dabh

Arey chote don say like that. Our cvs are the best. If they take my ff & do it we will not get this much TRP i'm sure. Saas bahu drama some nok jhok are really needed.😊

yes our cv's are best
and we will surely get trp
only problem is that it will end in few episodes only.

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