FF: Chalenge Hum Saath Saath Last part on pg 20 - Page 11

wt a drama sopau.but i liked it..it spiced up that scene...nice update soapu...sandy is great yo.

really waiting for naam karan function?

Yet another good update Sissy 👍🏼 Loved the twist in the tale with the bribe test 😉 Maybe such things don't happen in real life, but I'm sure in DABH it will happen 🤓 DABH CVs are masters at bringing twists and turns into the story 😳 Good job 👏

@ chintu Tankooo i like adding spice😉

i liked the interview part very much shobi

Originally posted by: UMDU

Well written Shobhana. One or two things I would like to point out. Sandhya cannot postpone her training by a year. She either accepts the offer or rejects it. Suraj cannot visit Sandhya twice a week in Mussoorie as it is almost a 12 hrs journey. These two things I found a bit unrealistic. Otherwise the story is quite on the track. Everything you have written is technically possible. In your next part keep one thing in mind Sandhya will not be able to see her kids frequently during the training period as it is from dawn to dusk and very strenuous. Otherwise you have done a good job.👍🏼

Originally posted by: UMDU

Shobhana you cannot fly from Pushkar to Mussoorie. You have to go by road to Jaipur, catch a flight to Delhi. From Delhi another flight to Dehradun. From there by road to Mussoorie as Mussoorie has no airport. That is why I said twice a week is difficult. Even if he has money there is no direct flight. Just a technical point. Please don't take offence.

Shobhana being in the teaching profession makes me view things with a hawk's eye which I know at times appears ridiculous. I understand it is a work of fiction and I should not delve too much into realism. Just forget about it and continue with your good work. Just ignore this Buddhi . 😆You are doing a great job.