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Nice update ...Dd are in bad condition. Hope they recover soon. Rakshit did not what is mom's to come to doctor room he was Angry with her.

That was really impactful.. nicely written again. Along with rakshit I was wondering what would be the mind set and condition of shikhar, he might not be as affectionate to divya as rakshiis to drishti but we've seen that he do cares for her. I would really appreciate if you could add something about the second lead too.😄

Till far the story is fabulous and anticipation is rising with each update. Please update soon😊

Superb update

Love it

Continue soon

looking forward to more, wondering how Rakshit will react when truth comes out in front of him

First of all loved it and soo wish to c something like this

Both sis in pain aww dri in serious condition nd poor raks 💔

Waiting for next part update soooooon

Great job 👍

Wow! And I thought the first part was beautiful. This one tops it without a doubt 👏

This part was so brilliantly written. The worry that Rakshit felt, his frustrations and desperation were well described. I could almost feel what the characters were going through. And my favourite part was Rakshit silently shutting his mother. That look is all that matters. All in all, I loved it ❤️

Are you a medical student or a doctor? Those terms and medical procedures were very accurate. And I'm glad that there is a relation to real word and this story in some sense.

Even though I loved the entire chapter, it was the last paragraph that stole my heart. Rakshit begging Drishti to be fine, yet not saying a single word. So beautiful ❤️

Thanks a lot for the PM. Please update the next part soon

Originally posted by: Arshukaurkhushi

Very nice update

To Mr shergill ko fark padta hai

Thanks dear! :)

Of course! Use fark padta hai.

Originally posted by: zyrah17

Ohh thank you very much for this lovely Eid gift🤗Eid Mubarak

Awesome update 👏very excited for next part

You're welcome dear! 🤗

I'm late, but hope you had a great Eid.

Thank you so much! 😳

Nice Story..loved the way Rakshit stopped his mom and answered back to both of them in the first part. They needed to know their place ..

Hope both of them recover soon.. Continue next.

Hey when u will updt next part..updt soon😒