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@SuhanaSafar

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

I have an idea...why don't we all play a game to write this song? The first person writes one line, then the second writes another that rhymes with the first. Then the third person thinks of a new line that goes with the theme, and the fourth person rhymes with the third person's line. As long as everyone sticks to the topic of friendship and makes sure it flows, I think it can work. What do you say?

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@chhilt

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

good idea suhanasafar... and i have some bad news..... adicoolnclassy has withdrawn from the contest so we're one member short.... so can someone start the song? then we'll all add to it

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Rabia

@SuhanaSafar

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 17 years ago

#13

Awww, that's too bad about adicoolnclassy....oh well, I think we can still handle it. Here, I'll start the poem. For the people writing the odd lines (1,3,5,7,etc) please remember to make sure that there ARE at least two or three words that rhyme with the last word in your line. That way the people who write the even lines will have more options. Here's a rhyming dictionary which should help: http://www.rhymezone.com/

By the way, if you don't like the way I'm starting off, you can feel free to change it.

"We learn from Disney about friendship and love"

Edited by SuhanaSafar - 17 years ago

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@chhilt

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#14

good beginning.... here's the next line... you can change it if it's not good....

we learn from disney about friendship and love

how to have fun and enjoy ourselves too

what do you think?

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Charleen

@bmtdloverr2050

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: chhilt
good beginning.... here's the next line... you can change it if it's not good....
we learn from disney about friendship and love
how to have fun and enjoy ourselves too

what do you think?

Thats realli good 👏
but do you think that we should add the too at the end?

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Rabia

@SuhanaSafar

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 17 years ago

#16

Chhit, it sounds good...but I thought the second line was supposed to rhyme with the first....oh well, now the 1st and 2nd lines can just be one long line...and so can the 3rd and 4th....Then the longer lines can rhyme with each other. I thought of a rhyme, so I added it. From now on, please make sure to rhyme (line 2 with line 4, line 6 with line 8, line 10 with line 12, and so on...). I hope you guys understand what I mean.

Let's keep track of lines from now on and bold the rhymes. Here's what we have so far.

we learn from disney about friendship and love (1)

how to have fun and enjoy ourselves too (2)

it teaches ambition, so we can ensure (3)

that we can do anything we want to do (4)

how is it?

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Heli

@Arlover1

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#17

one question

how many lines does it have to be

i mean like 20 or 25

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Just call me Chhilt :)

@chhilt

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#18

that's great suhana! and redi, i expect fifteen-sixteen lines should be enough... and by the way, since we're supposed to make a song, shouldn't we have a chorus too? otherwise it'll be like a poem, don't you think?

Edited by chhilt - 17 years ago

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Rabia

@SuhanaSafar

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 17 years ago

#19

^ Yeah, you're right. Something will have to be repeating....Hmm...I'm not sure what to do about that. But I'm sure we can come up with something as we go. Is it okay if we just try to continue this for now? If someone thinks of something for the chorus, they can add it.

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Just call me Chhilt :)

@chhilt

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#20

sure! that would be great! we still have ten days....

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