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~Simz~ thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: chhilt

how about...

we learn from disney about friendship and love (1)
how to have fun and enjoy ourselves too (2)
it teaches ambition, so we can ensure (3)
that we can do anything we want to do (4)
it's fun spending time with all our friends (5)
vanessa,miley and zac to name a few (6)
its romance, comedy, drama, cartoons
something old something new

Sorry guys...was busy with new work...couldn't log in. But frankly...i am not that good....i tried.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
Yay Simz! Thanks so much for coming. I love the new line. Great work!
we learn from disney about friendship and love (1)
how to have fun and enjoy ourselves too (2)
it teaches ambition, so we can ensure (3)
that we can do anything we want to do (4)
it's fun spending time with all our friends (5)
vanessa,miley and zac to name a few (6)
it's romance, comedy, drama, cartoons (7)
something old and something new (8)

the disney world is a world of dreams (9)
so come with us and join the crew (10)

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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
great going guys!

we learn from disney about friendship and love (1)
how to have fun and enjoy ourselves too (2)
it teaches ambition, so we can ensure (3)
that we can do anything we want to do (4)

it's fun spending time with all our friends (5)
vanessa,miley and zac to name a few (6)
it's romance, comedy, drama, cartoons (7)
something old and something new (8)
the disney world is a world of dreams (9)
so come with us and join the crew (10)

suhana, i think your two lines should be the chorus... what do you think? like this...

Our Disney song

hmmmmm...... yeahhhhh (single voice)

we learn from disney about friendship and love (1)
how to have fun and enjoy ourselves too (2)
it teaches ambition, so we can ensure (3)
that we can do anything we want to do (4)
Chorus: the disney world is a world of dreams (5)
so come with us and join the crew (6)

it's fun spending time with all our friends (7)
vanessa,miley and zac to name a few (8)
it's romance, comedy, drama, cartoons (9)
something old and something new (10)
Chorus: the disney world is a world of dreams (11)
so come with us and join the crew (12)

there's something there for all of us, (13)
be it high school musical or winnie the pooh (14)
it's such a great world that no one feels (15)
like saying goodbye or adieu (16)

Chorus:the disney world is a world of dreams (17)
so come with us and join the crew (18)

then why say goodbye, i'd like to know? (19)
it's a lot more fun than playing the kazoo (20)
we all love Disney and that's the truth (21)
And apart from all this, it's good for you! (22)

Chorus:the disney world is a world of dreams (23)
so come with us and join the crew (24)

yeahhhhhhhh.... woahhhhhhhh (single voice) (25)

chorus:the disney world is a world of dreams (26)
so come with us and join the crew (27)

come with us and join the crew... yeahhhhh... (single voice) (28)

hey guys... how's the ending? i think it's long enough... what do you think?
Edited by chhilt - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
oh and guys... we need a name for our song... how about The World of Disney by the Yellow Team?
SuhanaSafar thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: chhilt


Our Disney song

hmmmmm...... yeahhhhh (single voice)

we learn from disney about friendship and love (1)
how to have fun and enjoy ourselves too (2)
it teaches ambition, so we can ensure (3)
that we can do anything we want to do (4)

Chorus: the disney world is a world of dreams (5)
so come with us and join the crew (6)

it's fun spending time with all our friends (7)
vanessa,miley and zac to name a few (8)
it's romance, comedy, drama, cartoons (9)
something old and something new (10)
Chorus: the disney world is a world of dreams (11)
so come with us and join the crew (12)

there's something there for all of us, (13)
be it high school musical or winnie the pooh (14)
it's such a great world that no one feels (15)
like saying goodbye or even adieu (16)

Chorus:the disney world is a world of dreams (17)
so come with us and join the crew (18)

then why say goodbye, i'd like to know? (19)
it's a lot more fun than playing the kazoo (20)
we all love Disney and that's the truth (21)
And apart from all this, it's good for you! (22)

Chorus:the disney world is a world of dreams (23)
so come with us and join the crew (24)

yeahhhhhhhh.... woahhhhhhhh (single voice) (25)

chorus:the disney world is a world of dreams (26)
so come with us and join the crew (27)

come with us and join the crew... yeahhhhh... (single voice) (28)

hey guys... how's the ending? i think it's long enough... what do you think?

That sounds perfect hun! Great work. Totally lovin' it. I just added one word to line 16...the line seemed too short without it. It didn't meter correctly with the rest of the song. If you think of something better that will fix the meter problem, feel free to change it. And I think "World of Disney" is a good name too. We should definitely submit this.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: chhilt

great going guys!

we learn from disney about friendship and love (1)
how to have fun and enjoy ourselves too (2)
it teaches ambition, so we can ensure (3)
that we can do anything we want to do (4)

it's fun spending time with all our friends (5)
vanessa,miley and zac to name a few (6)
it's romance, comedy, drama, cartoons (7)
something old and something new (8)
the disney world is a world of dreams (9)
so come with us and join the crew (10)

suhana, i think your two lines should be the chorus... what do you think? like this...

Our Disney song

hmmmmm...... yeahhhhh (single voice)

we learn from disney about friendship and love (1)
how to have fun and enjoy ourselves too (2)
it teaches ambition, so we can ensure (3)
that we can do anything we want to do (4)
Chorus: the disney world is a world of dreams (5)
so come with us and join the crew (6)

it's fun spending time with all our friends (7)
vanessa,miley and zac to name a few (8)
it's romance, comedy, drama, cartoons (9)
something old and something new (10)
Chorus: the disney world is a world of dreams (11)
so come with us and join the crew (12)

there's something there for all of us, (13)
be it high school musical or winnie the pooh (14)
it's such a great world that no one feels (15)
like saying goodbye or bidding adieu (16)

Chorus:the disney world is a world of dreams (17)
so come with us and join the crew (18)

then why say goodbye, i'd like to know? (19)
it's a lot more fun than playing the kazoo (20)
we all love Disney and that's the truth (21)
And apart from all this, it's good for you! (22)

Chorus:the disney world is a world of dreams (23)
so come with us and join the crew (24)

yeahhhhhhhh.... woahhhhhhhh (single voice) (25)

chorus:the disney world is a world of dreams (26)
so come with us and join the crew (27)

come with us and join the crew... yeahhhhh... (single voice) (28)

hey guys... how's the ending? i think it's long enough... what do you think?

how about now, suhana? and thanks so much for the compliment! 😳
chhilt thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
hey should i go ahead and submit this?
~Simz~ thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
great going guys....i loved the chorus line and i loved the name too.
I thought of a name too......Disney Dreamland or Dreamland of Disney.
But honestly I love "World of Disney" so you guys should definetly go ahead and submit it.
chhilt thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39

well, i've sent it off to disney_contests.... let's just hope for the best now! *fingers crossed*

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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
Sorry for being missing in action, chhit...It's my first week of medical school and I had anatomy lab today. I was preparing for that yesterday.
Love your change...I think it's absolutely perfect. Glad you submitted it.

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