A FUNNY FANFICTION imp note pg 1 - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
hey guys im updating the ff.

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recap:MI:abe chod na inhe kaha kuch samajh aata hai....accha ye bata teri padma ke saath setting hui kya

SH:nahi yaar wo to mujhe ghaas hi nahi deti



MI:arre maine to socha tha ki tu usse shaadi karna chahta hai.....mujhe nahi pata tha ki tu usse ghaas kareedne ke liye use itna bhaav de raha hai
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den shash leaves and there is only tulsi and mihir in the ward[:[: [: [: [:

TU:pata hai mihir main kitna darr gayi thi
MI: 😡
TU:kya hua mihir tum iss tarah mujhe kyun dekh rahe ho???

MI:iss tarah nahi to kis tarah dekhun tumhe???
TU:
MI:aur kya??kya zaroorat thi wapas aane ki tumhe??? 😡 😡
TU:ye tum............. 😭
MI:ei ye rona dhona bamnd karo???jab dekho rone lagti ho??sahi to keh raha hoon main ..itne muskil se mujhe ek dubli patli biwi mili thi[juhi thakral].....aur pata nahi achanak se tum kaha se dhamak padi 😡
tumhare saath to bahar bhi jata hoon na to log mujhe tumhara pati kam aur beta zyada samjhte hai 😡 😡
dekha hai kabhi khud ko mataji lagti ho mataji...itna dieting karti ho uske baad jakar to yeh figure mili hai tumko agar dieting na karti to pata nahi kya hota...

TU:bas mihir bas ...aaj tumne mere sabra ka intehaan le liya...aaj tumhe wo nayi tulsi itni acchi lag gayi ki tumne mujhe thukra diya.....bas yehi tha wo pyaar..yehi the wo kasme jo tumne khai thi agni ke samne saat phere lete waqt.....

MI:haan uss manhoos din ke baad se to bas kasma kha kha kar hi to zinda hoon....khana to deti nahi hoo......ghar ka ek kaam nahi karti ho bas baithe baithe jab dekho saand ki tarah khati rehti hoo aur bechare bachon ko pravachan de dekar paka dalti ho... 😡

TU: 😭


in the meanwhile parvati enters

PA:arre arre tulsi ye kya kar rahi hoo???
TU:kyun tumhe dikh nahi raha hai kya????
PA:arre mera matlab hai itna saaara glycerine kyun waste kar rahi ho..abhi mujhe bhi rona hai 2 ghante baad aur ab to market mein glycerine milna bhi band ho gaya hai.....akal pad gaya hai glycerine ka pata nahi kya tumko???

TU:par main kya karu behaaan mera pati mujhe chodna chahta hai
PA:chill maar yaar mera wala to kitni baar mujhe chod kar jaa chuka hai....lekin kutte ki dum ko wapas mere hi paas aana padta hai........u know second hand cheezon ko zyaada log nahi khareedna chahte..... 😎
Edited by coolgal04 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32

soorry guys pata nahi itni saari postings kaise ho gayi...

Edited by coolgal04 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
hope u guys lyk it😊
Edited by coolgal04 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
your FF is very very funny. i became mad laughing. this is the funniest thing i have ever read. 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
hey guys i think u all r nt liking my ff... 😭

tht's why so less comments 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
itna bura hai??? okk then im stopping here ...wont update nymore😕
Edited by coolgal04 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
h3y coolgal 04...its osum ff...why are yew loosing ur hope han...itssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss osummmm ff and i mean it...plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon.,,,
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38

😊

Edited by coolgal04 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39

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scene shifts to the virani parivaar with armaan,rahul and atul being harassed


TU:[to the boys]bhagwaaan tum logo ka bhala kare......tumne mere pati ki aur baa ki jaan bachahi iske liye bahut bahut bahut sukriya 😊

AR:ur welcum...[to himself].....aaj sirf teen lino mein hi speech khatam...quite strange

TU:thakur ji tum sab ki raksha kare...harr musibat se bachaye...musibat tum logo ko chu bhi na paye......

RA:dont worry hum aap ki tarah tragedy king and queens nahi hai...humm sab normal hai........hum logo par musibatein bhi normal hi aati hai

AT:aur haan aap log humse koi purana rishta bhi nahi nikal sakte kyunki humara aur aapka to shayad hi koi scene raha ho... 😈 😈

TU:[in her typical tulsian style and the latest tulsi song being played in the background"aaj ki tulsi........."]haan beta bahut khushnaseeb ho jo inn sab cheezon se dur rahe ho...ye to tum logo ke peechle janmo ka fal hai.....zaroor tumne kuch accha karm kiya hoga jo thakur jee ne.........

AT,AR,RA:[to each other]oh no ye to fir se shuru ho gayi ...bhaag yahan se.......

TU:hey thakur jee inhe maaf karna ye nahi jaante ki ye kya kar rahe hai......

WARD BOY:oh madam chaliye aagey badiye ho gaya

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parvati is walking along the corridor and shashank is cmng frm the opposite direction..both collide and suddenly both face each other

PA:vikram aap???

SH:[turns back to look if sumbody else is also dere but nobody is dere so he asks]:wat????

PA:vikram aap zinda hai???[looking at him in a total maa kali style and the title track of the serial "devi" is being played in the backgraound]


SH:jee lagta hai aapko koi galat fehmi hui hai..main vikram nahi shashank hu!!

PA:naam badal lene se kisiki haivaniyat nahi badalti 😡

SH:lekin main vikram nahi shashank hu yahan senior incharge

PA:senior incharge!!! tumko to koi chaprasi bhi na rakhe...senior incharge to duur ki baat hai 😡


SH:dekhiye aap meri beijjaati kar rahi hai
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sorry guys will cnt later...im very discouraged.......i ll b able to write only wen i get a handsome no. of comments
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Posted: 17 years ago
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934 views and not a single reply 😭 😭

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