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Posted: 17 years ago
wow..man..kya twist hain!! 👏 👏

ok..i'll conitnue..
in the fire escape...armaan backs ridzi against the wall..while ridzi is saying his name...no.,murmering...
armaan places a hand on her lips to stop her from saying anything...

armaan:bas riddhima..agar tumne ek aur baar phir bola mera naam...itne pyar se toh..toh main pyar se marr hi jaaunga....

riddhima without thinking places her hand on his lips...so basically they r both standing with one of their hands on each other lips..

armaan slowly kisses riddhima's hand on his lips and riddhima closes her eyes.

armaan removes his hand and she removes hers..

ridzi:aaj bol diya hai...khabar daar phir aisa bola..nahi toh main...

armaan further backs her up against the wall

armaan:nahi toh tum?

ridzi:nahin...nahin toh main..main tumhe ...thappad marungi

armaan:thappad...theek hai biwi ji..ap toh abhi se apne patidev ko ek patni vrata pati banane ki practice karva rahi hain...ok..cool.mujjhe koi problem nahi hai..aur koi hukm,mallika?

ridzi:haan..(coming closer to him now and armaan can bearly think)kya hum...

armaan:KISS kar sakte hain?

ridzi:shut up..(pushes him and runs) 😆

armaan:oie hoi..maar dalegi ek din mujjhe yeh apni adaaon se..

chalo thts it..mujjhe batan kaisa laga..ok?
luv ya
Pragzie thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
katy di-woooowww yaar!!!!keerti shubh scenes rwally nice yaar...awesum as usual

geet-what do i say??ur parts are always so gud!!!!!!luvd it yaar....the AR scenes waah waahhh waaahhh!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
good going guys.... all part is simply amazing.... pls continue asap....
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey great going geet ur part was wonderful
try to continue soon
rihanaa thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow great geet n catwomen u guys r amazing 👏 all my superstars rock 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Catwoman

wow geet 👏 👏 👏

right back atcha..😃

why dont u continue?

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Posted: 17 years ago
ok guys as noones continuing ill try

a: umber bhai apne armaan ko dheka kya
um:nahi dr atul main toh unhe fire escape ke yahan dheka tha par ab main jab unhe yeh file dene gaya toh woh wahan se chale gaye the
a:theek hai woh mile toh use khena ki main unhe dhoon raha hoon....yeh armaaan fire escape ke yahan aakhir karta kya yeh .ridzsss ke agge peche hi hoga dhekta hoon
r: hiii atulll kya hua itne pareshaan kyun ho
a:kuch nahi yeh armaaaan............
an: hey ridzss plss yahaan aao muje tumse kuch kehna hai
r:sorry atul bus main di se baat karke tumse milte hoon
a:haan ok bye
ar: kisss kisss ka hai yeh mujko intzaar aao na
a: yaar armaaan tu yahaaan gane ga raha hai aur mere yahaan pura band bajgaya hai .
ar: ab tuje kya hua hai champ koi poudha murjha gaya kya
a: arry yaar yahaan mere aur anjeli ki loev story abhi atk chalo bhi nahi hui hai aur yaahhan kahani ka villian bhi peda hogaya hai
ar:kya kya kya jara us bhasha main baat karega jo normal logon ko samaj atti ho
a: array yaar armaan main us aman ki baat kar raha hoon
ar:oooooooo accha toh problem kya hai .dhek champ ab tune already bohot late kardi hai anjeli ko apne dil kil baat batane main ab bus bol de yaar
a: armaaan jab tu ridzss ki duniya se bahar aaega toh tuje pata chalega ki main saat maheno main anjeli se saat hazar saat sow satra baar kaha hai ki woh muje pasand hai
DR ARMAAAN JALDI HI DR SHASHANK KE OFFICE MAIN AEEYE
ar:champ teri is problem ka koi solution toh ajj nikal hi lenge ajj duty ke baad mere ghar ajana main ridzs ko bhi bhula doonga
a: armaaannnnn
ar: dhek atul ab thank u vanku baad main khena its ok
a: main tuje yeh keh raha tha ki tu ridzs ke saath rehne ka ek bhi chance nahi chood ta na
ARMAAN BLUSHES N LEAVES
ar:gudmorning dr shashank sorry main late hogaya.
no reply
ar: dr shashank m really sorry main late
the chair is still facing the wall n theres no reply armaan goes to check if dr shashanks really siting on the chair
ar:tummmmmmmmmmmmm
r: haaan main maine tumhe bulaya muje pata tha tum break par ho toh maine bhi jaldi apna kaam kardiya aur break leli
ar:oye hoyeee kya baat hai ajj apne muje bulaya hai.waise toh muje hi tumhare peche bhagna padta hai
r: woh main sooch rahi thi ki tume de hi doon
ar: kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
r: haaan dene main kya hai ab itni bar toh tune muje diya hai toh ajj main de deti hoon wiase bhi papa toh bahar gaye hain
ar:wow ridzs dher se hi sahi tumne mere saath rehkar kuch toh sekha hai
r:hmmm chalo apni aankhe band karo
ar: hummmmmmmmmm karli
r:lo armaaan
ar:armaan opens one eye yeh kya haiiiiii fileeeeeeeeeee
r:humm toh tumhe kya laga main tumhe( she goes near him keeps her hand on his chest n kisses him on his lips they both r sooo lost in the pool of their love tht they never wanna be seperated) tume laga main tumhe yeh doongi
armaaans stillll shockeddd
ar: i love u ridhima
r:love u too armaaaan 😳 😳
DR RIDHIMA DR ARMAAAN DR ATUL DR ANJELI JALDI HI DR KEERTI KO REPORT KAREn
kr: toh docs jaisa ki maine kaha tha ki ajj race ki wajah se hum busy honge toh main chati hoon ki app charoon thodi rest karlain kyunki apki ajj night shift hai jo kal shamm ko hi khatam hogi jab tak apki duties main dr muskan or dr rahul aur haan dr aman karlenge
ar:wow chalo sab meer ghar chalo
an:hey armaaan main toh ghar jakar so rahi hoon tumlog jaoo
atul looked dissapointed
ar: champ chod na yaar waise bhi hame sochna hai na ki anjeli ko kaise confess kiya jaee


ok guys now sumone else continue n ya i ahve started my veryyyyyy first ff " FLAVOURS" if u get time plsss read tht too n plsssssssss i wnat comments from all my superstars thanksssss in advance n excuse me for my mistakes 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
..awesum awesum awesum rihaana...ridz is shashank?? 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey rihaana yaar vryy nce prt
wow ridz toshatir nikli omg she gave hm
soooo happpppy...........wow yaar fabulous..........thnks fr lttg know i'll read it.
lv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: yachna

hey rihaana yaar vryy nce prt
wow ridz toshatir nikli omg she gave hm
soooo happpppy...........wow yaar fabulous..........thnks fr lttg know i'll read it.
lv yachna

u no its 1.30 am in canada i culdnt sleep so came on IF tooo update 😆 really glad u liked it ill go n sleep now b4 my parents throw me out in the cold to shiver😆😉

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