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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey guys..I'll continue..Writing a part now..Will Edit..
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Posted: 17 years ago
Sorry..Had to read all parts..From page 14 and then I went to eat mcdonalds...Lol..

Next Part:

A ray of light hit Anjali's face..She woke up only to see that she was in the front seat of a car..She opened the door and looked outside..Nobody was to be seen..

Anjali:Aman?..Hello..Koi hai..Lagta hai chala gaya...

She walked back to her car...But she saw somebody in there..When she looked closely..She saw Aman sleeping peaceully..She knocked on the car window..

Anjali:Aman..Utho..Hello..
Aman:Huh?!..(Looking confused for a second)..Oh sorry..(Comes out the car quickly)Main aapki gari main so gaya..Actually aap meri gari main so gayi thi..Tho main yahaan agaya..
Anjali:It's okay..Erm..We should find a mechanic..Mujhay hosptial bhi jaana hai..
Aman:Kyun..Koi bimar hai?..
Anjali:Nahi..I'm a doctor..
Aman:Oh Okay..Actually..Main bhi ek hospital main ja raha hoon..Sanjeevani..Heard of it?..
Anjali:Yaaa..That's where I work..Lekin aap wahaan..Aap bhi Dr. hai?..
Aman:Ji haan..I'm meant to be a new intern..
Anjali:Really..We weren't told..

Over at Armaan's house..

Riddhima woke up and sat on the bed with her head in her hands..She got up to go to the bathroom..But she hit into a wall..This made her realise she wasn't in her house..She looked around in shock and saw Armaan on the sofa beside the bed..

Riddhima:Armaan!..Main..Yahaan?..
She then had a flashback of yesterday and didn't know what to do..While she was thinking..Armaan awoke..
Armaan:Riddhima..Tum uthgayi..
Riddhima:Main ghar nahi gayi..Di kya soch rahi hogi?..Woh ithni pareshaan hogayi hogi..
Armaan:Woh tumhey leney aaney wali thi..Lekin nahi aayi..Mainey uska phone bohot try kiya..Tumharey ghar bhi phone kiya..Lekin kisi ne uthaya nahi..Mian usey raat ko dhoondney bhi gaya tha..Bas 1 hr pehley wapis aaya hoon..
Riddhima:Kya matlab..Di kahaan hai..Mujhay uney dhoondana hoga..(Getting all worried)..
Armaan:Calm down..Hum saath saath chaltey hai..Atul bhi gaya hai..Tum moon haath do aao..
Riddhima goes to the bathroom..
Suddenly Armaan's phone rings..
Armaan:Hey Anji..Kahaan ho tum..Pata hum log kithney pareshaan hai..
Anjali:Sorry...Woh meri gari kharab hogayi thi..Meray saath Aman hai..uski gari bhi kharab hogayi thi..
Armaan:Thank God..Tum theek ho..waysay kahaan ho tum?..Gha poncho..Atul ko bhi bata do..Mar jaye ga..
Anjali:Haan..Pehley main Ridz se baat karloon..
Armaan:Woh bathroom main hai..
Anjali:Acha usey bata dena..Main Atul ko phone karti hoon..
Armaan:Bye..

Atul's phone rings and he sees it Anjali..He is out on some random road..

Atul:Anjali..Kahaan ho tum..Main tumhey dhoond raha tha..
Anjali:I'm fine..Thanks for looking..Meri gar kharab hogayi thi..Main Aman ke saath arahi hoon..
Atul to himself:Yeh Aman kaun hai..Nahi nahi Atul..Anjali uski nahi ho sakti..Woh Aman hai..Anjali usk nahi hoti..Tho phir Rahul?!! Nahii..Is story main uski Muskaan hai..

Riddhima comes out from the bathroom quickly..
Riddhima:Armaan..Chalo..
Armaan:Anjali ka phone aaya tha..She's fine..(He narrates the whole story)..
Riddhima:Thank God..Main ithna darr gayi thi..
Riddhima noticed shes wearing the same white dress..But before she says anything..Armaan says..
Armaan:Riddhima...Mainney tumharey kaprey washing machine main dal diye they..Parsuram ne iron kar diye hai..Pehan lena..
Riddhima:Wow..Shaadi ke baad ki training le rahey ho kya?..Hehehehe(laughs)..
Armaan:Very funny..Waysay..Kal jo hua..Kuch yaad hai..Ya nahi..
Armaan turns around as he knows Riddhima remembers..But is expecting her to say no..As she won't accept her love for him again..
Riddhima:Haan Armaan..Mujhay sab yaad hai..Each and every word..
He turns around in a shock..But is pleasantly shocked..Riddhima then walks into the bathroom..And takes her clothes that were on the sofa..She comes out ready to go to her duty..After her..Armaan also gets dressed and all..

Now as they are walking out..Armaan feels cheeky..
Armaan:Kal raat ko kuch nahi hua..Aaj tumhey nahi choroon ga..Lekin pakroon kaysay..
He then grins and shouts loudly..
Armaan:AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH..
Riddhima:Kya hua..
Armaan:Dard hua..
Riddhima:Kahaan..
Armaan:Yahaan..
He points at his heart but Riddhima thinks it is seriously paining..
Riddhima:Kyun..Ek minute..
She puts her hand on his firm chest and he grabs it..
Riddhima:Armaan..Yeh sab nataak tha..
Armaan:Nahi tho..Wakai main dard hua tha..Aab chala gaya..
Riddhima:Tum doctor kaysay ban gaye..Tumhey tho actor hona chahiye tha..
Armaan:Haan..Lekin mainey us proffesion ko consider nahi kiya..How stupid..
Now they both are saying like 'yes yes' sarcastically..
Riddhima:Aab chaley..
Armaan:Nahi..Tumhey pata hai..Kal..Hamari pehli(doosri..I don't know how many times they have kissed in this FF..forgot..) honey wali thi..Tum tho sahi mood main thi..Main hi shareef sa bacha darr gaya..
Riddhima:Very funny..
Armaan:No it's not..Chalo na..Adhoora kam abhi poora kartey hai..Kal karey so aaj kar..Aaj karey so aab..
Riddhima:Heh?
Armaan:Whatever..
Riddhima:Armaan choro..
Armaan:Nahi..
He starts walking forward..And Ridz moves backwards..She hits a wall and is not able to move back..Armaan comes so close that she can feel each breath..And he can feel Ridz breath anyway..She breathed really loud Lol..She was all nervous..But he liked this nervousness..And moved closer..His waist and Riddhima's hips were level and touching now..Riddhima was looking down..She was melting..Armaan couldn't stop himself..He got closer..And now both their bodies were together..The could feel each inch of each other..Armaan was continuosly looking and her face up and down..He looked at her lips..And moved closer..Ridz closed her eyes..Something was different in his touch..It was so gentle but she would shake from inside as he touched her..Armaan was now 1cm away from her lips..He closed his eyes..

And the end..Someone else can continue!Lol..Hope ya'll liked it..I loved all other parts..d101...Your parts cracked me up..Andeverybody elses!Brilliant job..


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Posted: 17 years ago
woooaaaahhhh yaaaarr awesummm.......luvd it amnah(yipppeee i got ur name right!!!!!)luvd it yaar..it wwas so romantic..just one thing keep in mind

TO ALL THE FF WRITERS:AA ARE SUPPOSED TO BE TOGETHER...AMAN WILL JUST FIND A SUARE(I NOE THERE ISNT ANYTHING LIKE THAT)BUT DEBO ALREADY MAKES A TRIANGLE..SO AA ARE SUPPOSED TO BE SUARE!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
amazin
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz let armaana n ridhima kisss
plz don't let there be a knock on the dooor or a phone call
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ammyfan_pragati

woooaaaahhhh yaaaarr awesummm.......luvd it amnah(yipppeee i got ur name right!!!!!)luvd it yaar..it wwas so romantic..just one thing keep in mind

TO ALL THE FF WRITERS:AA ARE SUPPOSED TO BE TOGETHER...AMAN WILL JUST FIND A SUARE(I NOE THERE ISNT ANYTHING LIKE THAT)BUT DEBO ALREADY MAKES A TRIANGLE..SO AA ARE SUPPOSED TO BE SUARE!!




Thanks! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
😆
👏 👏 👏 awsome work!!!

arre kiss karke chhodti na.,,,
ab i m soo tired palying badminton all day with my bf that i cant even write...no kidding.. 😆

luv ya all
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Posted: 17 years ago

omg u guyzz rock...

rihana..awsm 👏 ,pragati..amazn 👏 , geet....man im ur biggest fan..great twist..love da aman angle, dhruvnved4eva (sorry dont know ur name sweety??)..yaar u got me waitin very very impatiently...kiss to karana tha yaar..amazn part 😉 😉

kat n pragati thanx sooo much😳😳

Edited by d101 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

All the parts of the FF are so beautifully written. DMG forum is full of Talented people.. Awesome Awesome ...
Keep up the good work. I thought, may be I should try and write a few lines and all I could think of was medicines and diseases ( Side effect of being a doctor)... But you Guys Rock ...waiting for someone to continue ....
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: hot_diva

hey rehanna awesome prt and pragati worst or best part???? 😉

thanks a lot glad u liked it😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: yachna

hey guys
rihaana- ur prt ws awesom yaar vryyyyy nce prt atul to bhai kuch nahi ho sakta uska to ar ki yaad aa rahi hai sambhalne ke liye omg...........fabulous vodka idea dam gooooooood
pragati-my deer pragati now ths is d lst tme yaar agar fir se tumne apne prts ko worst bola to main keh rahi hu sayi ein yaha war ho jayga so its bettr 2 not say tht again is tht clear yaar ur i lvd ur prts or tum ho ki bas.it ws so gooooooooooood ..........poor armaan fir se nd her confession ws absolutly rckng yaar

geet-yaar kya twist laya hai poor atul akela na reh jaye ab.......to gooooood kahani mein kya mod laya ...........

luv yachna

thanks glad u liekd it😃

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