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hey guyzz iloovee how this plot keeps twistn...im lovin it 😉 😉

kat.....keerti fallin on shubh...omg...never sw dat cmn...u didnt even leave "da senior doctors".. 😆 😆 😆
loved it

geet..their hands on each others lips....awwww...

rihanaa...i soo like ridz takin da intiative...file n kiss donno de dii 😳 😳

You guys are all awesome.....I just read the last parts, cos I don't have internet at home, I catch up in in teh office....I want to too join in this FF, but seeing you guys, I am so crazy to even have that thought, I guess I will sit back & enjoy the FF & thank you guys 👏

armaan, ridz, atul enter armaans place.....

armaan: yaar ridhima bahut bhook laagi hai...kuch khanne ko????
she turn to face him...eyes goin wide..
ridz: excuse me?? MEIN guest hoon.....
armaan: haan...apne dad ke ghar me 😉 😉
ridz: armaan..
armaan holds both her hands n slowly pulling her closer...
atul...jumps in the middle: bas had ho gaayii..ab tu meri baat sunn...jab tak ridz meri salli nahi banti...mein usse teri ghar waali nahi banne dooonga...n pulls ridz away...
armaan: oyye maali..haath choor...haan..ab apne dimag ke sarre bulb jalla..aur meri baat sunn..
u like angie rgt???
atul:wrong
armaan:huh??
atul: mein anjali se pyaar, ishq, muhobat karta hoon...
armaan: sab ussi se? 😉
ridz: armaan 😡
armaan: achchaa..achhaa..anyway to where was i?? haan ...tu angie se pyaar, ishq...wagera..wagera..karta hai...
...tu uske saath time spend karna chahta hai..par angie..aman ke saath time spend karna chaahti hai...
atul interrupts: abbe tu help kar raha ki meri zindagi ki mumbatti bujha raha hai...
armaan: hang on...hang on.. tu aissa kuch kar ki aman angie ke saath nahi..kissi aur ke saath time spend karre...
atul: par kaun??
ridz: ummmm..muskaan..
armaan: oye.hoyye..humari thinking kitni milti hai..dr ridhima mallik...achcha guess karo me ab kya sooch raha hoon???
ridz: blushin...armaan..
armaan: oye hoyye...

BACK AT SANJEEVANI
at da nurse station...atul, armaan there..armaan having coffee
aman enters
aman: arre tum logoo ne angie ko dekha???
atul: kya bola tuuu...angie...atul goin foward..armaan holds him back...whispers relax champ...
armaan: kyun kya hua???
aman:woh actually ek case discuss karna tha...
armaan nudges atul.
atul: to yaar muskaan se kar le..woh bahut achchee doctor hai..
aman: par woh to ghar gayyeee
atul: gets mervous..imagines..aman singing n dancing to "saajan jee ghar aaye..."( kuch kuch hota hai...) with angie, blurts out: to tu ridz se discuss kar le..
armaan:spits out his coffee...kyaaa??
mene tujhe raasta bataya aur tu meri hi gaadi patri se utar raha hai...
atul: yaar samajha kar...ridzz to agle saath janam teri hai...anjali ko meri hoone mein abhi bahut deeri hai...
atul: haan haan tum..ridz se puuchoo woh do bar intern of da month bhi reh chuuki hai..
armaan:..not missin a trick...
armaan: anjali barri hai..usse zyaada experience hai...tu usse puuch...
atul: arre barri hai to kya hua..join to donno ne ek saath keeya tha..tu ridz se hi puuch
armaan:ek saath join karne se kya hota hai...angie kitni mature he suljhi huyee..woh tuje aaram se samjhayee gi..ridhima to har baat pe bhadakti hai..
aman: guys...
atul: angie to binna baat ke sarri rehti hai...
aman: guys..
armaan: ridhima bhashan deti rehti hai..
atul: anjali ko to chilaane se phursat nahi milti...
armaan:case me koi bhi problem ho ridhima bokhlaa jaati hai..
atul: anjali andhere se ghabrati hai..

anjali n ridhima: tumhari yeh himmat... 😡 😡
u guys r disgusting...aman..chalo yahan se...angie takes his right arm while ridz takes his left..

armaan: ridhima...woh...
atul: anjali mein to bas...

anjali: save it guys...
ridz: get lost 😡 😡

ridz aman n angie walk off arm in arm

really a nice update

"Trying to forget someone U love is like trying to remember someone u've Never met"

Originally posted by: d101

okk guyzz me bac....

next day at sanjeevani....
locker room..ridzz standing infront of her locker reading a file concentrating really hard...
armaan comes in...stands right infront her..
armaan: goodmorning Dr RIDHIMA..kisses her left cheek..ARMAAN...kisses her forehead..MALLIK...kisses her right cheek
ridhima: in a playfull mood..with a naughty smile...pokes armaan in da chest.. : mera naam dr ridhima gupta hai...
armaan: stroking her cheek with da back of his hand...not for long...
ridhima: achchaa...mein kyun naam badloon tum ban jao..dr armaan ridhima gupta..
armaan: ok n walks offf
ridhima: shocked gives a weird look..

BRIEFING...
dr keerti: dr ridhima gupta...general ward..dr joshi..cancer ward..dr chadda..path lab..dr mallik..

armaan looking at ridzz
dr mallik..DR MALLIK...
armaan: huh...ohh..dr keerti its dr gupta 😊
keerti: WHAT???
armaan: mera naam aaj se... DR GUPTA
keerti: WHAT???
ridhima: huh..woh...dr keerti...actually..armaan..i mean dr. armaan dr shashank gupta ko apna role model mante hai naa..soo.. unhaee lagta hai ki agar log unhae dr gupta bulayenge..to woh jald hii dad jaise...i mean..dr gupta jaise ban jayenge....
angie: cant stop laughin
atul: kya phenkti hai baap...waah..
keerti:huh..whatever...get back to work
everyone leaves except...AR

ridz: armaan tum pagal to nahi..
armaan: nahi..mein dr gupta hoon...bhool gayyee..tumhari memory bahut weak hai..n hits her lightly on the head with a file..n walks off sayn..lagta hai tumhare leeyae baadaam laane padenge...
ridzz: 😡 😡 😡

in da general ward AR together..working..
atul enters...:armaaan...oh ...armaan
armaan looks da other way..
atul:yaar armaan sun to...armaaan turns away again..
atul stands infront of him :armaan...
armaan: abbe chup tu meri biwi hai kya jo armaan armaan kar raha hai...addab se puura naam le ke bulla...DR ARMAAN RIDHIMA GUPTA varna mae jawab nahi doonga..
atul:ohhh.. 😊 😊


in da evening dr keerti enters: dr armaan apne patient vikram ki report dikhayeeaye???
armaan: hands her da report..
ridz:dr keerti woh mujhe aapse kuch baat karni thi...ridz puts 1 file on da table..picks another n talkin to keerti
armaan...meanwhile picks up da FiLE n writes something in it.....

dr keerti:suddenly shouts DR ARMAAN YEH KYA HAI???
ridz standing next to her looks into da file where keertis pointing.....at da end of da page its signed.....DR armaan ridhima gupta... 😆 😆

ridhima: OMG...woh..woh..woh dr keerti..humne ek saath case handle keeya tha na....to usne doonoo ka naam likh deeya....bass COMMA lagaana bhool gayya...hai na armaan

armaan: just smiles
dr keerti gives a disgusted look n asks for da other reports..ridzz gives da other file

keerti: DR RIDHIMA...yeh case to aap akele handle kar rahi thi naa..to phir yeh kya hai...points to...DR ridhima armaan mallik????

armaan: 😉 😉
ridhima: woh..woh...dr keerti ..armaan ne is case me meri bahut help ki to mene socha ki......mae bass COMMA lagaana bhool gayyee
meanwhile atul enters..doesnt see keerti....remembera armaans words in da moring....screams..oye armaan ridhima gupta...n sees keerti...stops..

keerti:what did u say???
atul: woh ma'am..woh..
keerti: let me guess...aap bhi COMMA lagaana bhool gayye....
keerti:lagta hai kalse sanjeevani mein...adult litracy classes rakhni padengi..n walks off..

ridzz: armaan tum naa..haad karte hooo...n walks off

luv deepika 😃 hope u guyzz like it

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!

ireally loved this part...Dr armaan ridhhima gupta.............very original and very very interesting.hats off for such a different attempt

hey thanx ttimpy 😳 😳
k so i know iv already posted but me very bored n vella..so bear with me....

armaan turns towards atul..his face is red…all he can see is ridz hand on amans arm..
armaan: mein…mein…n before he even realizes what hes doing…
atul sees armaans hands coming towards his face……………n passing by
armaan: grabs hold of da plant behind atul….mein tere podhoon ko zinda nahi choorunga….starts tearing the plant apart n throwing up in da air…
atul: pehle anjali…ab mere bachche…nahiiiiiiii..
he catches hold of armaans collar…mein…mein
armaan: kya karegaa???
Atul: mein…mein..tere shirt ke saare button band kar doonga….

Shashank n shubhankar enter to see armaan throwing leaves in the air n atul closing his shirt buttons….some leaves n dirt lands on shashank

Shashank: DOCTORS
Armaan n atul both turn..shocked…they turn to statues…
Shashank: looks at his coat…kya aap mujhe bata sakte hain..MERE COAT PE PATTE KYUN HAI?
Shubhankar: arre yeh chorro..armaan tumhari DONNO shirt ke sab button band kyun hai???
Shashank: turns to shubhankar: WHAT?
Shashank: dr shubhankar, aap senior doctor hain…looks at his watch..now im really late…sees keerti passing by…dr keerti…
Keerti: yes sir…
Shashank: dr shubhankar will tell u what happened..i hope I can trust you to deal with these jungalees
Keerti: confused..but nods…
Shashank leaves..
Shubhankar:OMG
Keerti turns to see armaan n atul on da floor…clearly not able to breathe..
Keerti n shubhankar run to them..
Keerti leaning over atul: dr atul kya hua….
Atul: dr keerti….huh..huh..(trying to breath..)issne saare…saare padhoon ko mar deeyaa…uhh..uhh..oxygen ki kammi…..uhhh
Meanwhile…Shubhankar: armaan kya hua…tum …???
Armaan: sir…aisa pehle kabhi..uhh kabhi.. nahi hua…issne...mere..mere..collar ka button bandh kar deeya..oxygen..oxygen…
Before dr keerti can scream….
Shubhnakar: (not realizing da joke…yess hes dat dense) omg keerti mujhe lagta hai maamla serious hai..tum atul ko mouth to mouth do mein armaan ke kapare uttar ta hoon..then realizing what he just said…nahi..nahi..tum armaan ke kapare utaro me atul ko mouth to mouth deta hoon…umm..nahi
Keerti: SHUBHANKAR GET OUT…
Aur tum donno….....

omggggggggggggggggggggg deepika ur fabulous nd fabulous yaar why don't u strt ff yaar ur absolutly superb yaar realy it ws vryyyyyyyyyyyyyy vryyyyyyy wonderfull u mde me laugh soooo mch on ur prts it ws soooooooooooooo fnnnnnnnny armaan atul lad rahe the bcz of aman nd bth grls gt angry nd atul nd armaan srtrt fghtng nd shashank omggggg he ws scoldng poor bth of thm stnd lke statue...............nd shub.omggggg wht d heck yaar wht ws he tlkng it ws soooooo fnny i ws laughng nd keerti gt vryyyyy vryyyyy angry.............dammmmmmmmmmmmm gooooooooooood............
luv yachna

🤣 omg omg omg, D you are so funny, I am in the office & people around me think I am gonna crazy, I was laughing so hard, I cried, really too good, this is the best part.....I can imagine the whole sceanario happening, Subhs expression, Kerrti's anger, Atul trying to breathe properly, everything, & last Arman will all his shirt buttons closed..you are hilarious 🤣

😆 😆
wow deepu!!! 👏 👏 👏
awesome..u wouldnt believe..main soch rahi thi next part mein aman haddi ko musku ke saath karun cuz rahul jealous kaise hoyega then??
humare thoughts bhi kitne milte hain na.. 😆 😉

Originally posted by: d101

hey thanx ttimpy 😳 😳
k so i know iv already posted but me very bored n vella..so bear with me....

armaan turns towards atul..his face is red…all he can see is ridz hand on amans arm..
armaan: mein…mein…n before he even realizes what hes doing…
atul sees armaans hands coming towards his face……………n passing by
armaan: grabs hold of da plant behind atul….mein tere podhoon ko zinda nahi choorunga….starts tearing the plant apart n throwing up in da air…
atul: pehle anjali…ab mere bachche…nahiiiiiiii..
he catches hold of armaans collar…mein…mein
armaan: kya karegaa???
Atul: mein…mein..tere shirt ke saare button band kar doonga….

Shashank n shubhankar enter to see armaan throwing leaves in the air n atul closing his shirt buttons….some leaves n dirt lands on shashank

Shashank: DOCTORS
Armaan n atul both turn..shocked…they turn to statues…
Shashank: looks at his coat…kya aap mujhe bata sakte hain..MERE COAT PE PATTE KYUN HAI?
Shubhankar: arre yeh chorro..armaan tumhari DONNO shirt ke sab button band kyun hai???
Shashank: turns to shubhankar: WHAT?
Shashank: dr shubhankar, aap senior doctor hain…looks at his watch..now im really late…sees keerti passing by…dr keerti…
Keerti: yes sir…
Shashank: dr shubhankar will tell u what happened..i hope I can trust you to deal with these jungalees
Keerti: confused..but nods…
Shashank leaves..
Shubhankar:OMG
Keerti turns to see armaan n atul on da floor…clearly not able to breathe..
Keerti n shubhankar run to them..
Keerti leaning over atul: dr atul kya hua….
Atul: dr keerti….huh..huh..(trying to breath..)issne saare…saare padhoon ko mar deeyaa…uhh..uhh..oxygen ki kammi…..uhhh
Meanwhile…Shubhankar: armaan kya hua…tum …???
Armaan: sir…aisa pehle kabhi..uhh kabhi.. nahi hua…issne...mere..mere..collar ka button bandh kar deeya..oxygen..oxygen…
Before dr keerti can scream….
Shubhnakar: (not realizing da joke…yess hes dat dense) omg keerti mujhe lagta hai maamla serious hai..tum atul ko mouth to mouth do mein armaan ke kapare uttar ta hoon..then realizing what he just said…nahi..nahi..tum armaan ke kapare utaro me atul ko mouth to mouth deta hoon…umm..nahi
Keerti: SHUBHANKAR GET OUT…
Aur tum donno….....

i really liked ur last 2 posts...very original thinking..........................................u rock darling!!!!!!!!!