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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi dis is my first ff can post a part now but ill give u a lil part of the beginning.

Ridz was duin her usual morning jog when she saw her shoe lace untied again

R:Urghhh why is my shoe lace untied every single day

She went to a nearby basketball court and sat down to tie her lace.
But while walkin there she did see armaan

R:(Thinkin 2 herself) Why isnt armaan here 2day

She shrugged her shoulders and sat down. After a couple seconds later she got hit in the head with a basketball and heard the word bullseye shouted from someone.

tell me how its is i'll post a part 2morz.sorry i cudnt do it 2daii didnt have time. also give me sum ideas of names for my ff then ill hve a vote of wich one to choose.


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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey
do update ur ff
i will be waiting
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey!!
nyc start!!
do continue soon!!


Marisha
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gud start. continue soon. can't wait 2 read teh next part😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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šŸ‘ šŸ‘
continue plzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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sounds gd
updte soon šŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ok heres the nxt part
Part 2

Ridz swung her head around to luk bck and saw him there (shirtless 😳 )

As soon as she saw him she finished tiein her laces and got up.

Ridz: Urghhh Armaan cant u see where ur hittin the ball u blind or sumfin.

Armaan:WHAT u callin me blind u shudnt have been sittin here u no dis is a basketball court not sum park where u can wateva u want.

Ridz: 😔 I was finking for once ur not here and i wont have anymore brain damage(rubbin her head).

Armaan: Basket ur a Doctor why dont u take care of tht "brain damage" and go away. Shooooo

Ridz: 😲

Armaan: Yo Basket if u keep ur mouth open any longer an insect wud go in there and i dont want those poor little creatures to be trapped inside a monster like u šŸ˜†

While sayin tht he closed her mouth for her and left.

Ridz:ARGHHHHHHH what does he think of himself.

She then stamps her feet and walks away angrily.

Then the scene moves to ridz room

Ridz: Get up di

Anji: 5 mins more ridzie

Ridz: Diii u've said 5 mins move 4 times and luk its 8:30 and we hav to get to snajeevani at 9:10

Of hearin that Anji got straight up, got her clothes and ran into the bathroom

Sorry the part is short but ive got homewrk to do so sorry


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Posted: 17 years ago
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ahh that is really great do update soon and let m kow once you have plzzzz..... thanks alot for the update do continue soon..... šŸ‘

loved the scene so far.. šŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
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NICE FF

i suggest "DIL HARA RE" NAME FOR UR FF
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 3

The scene moves to outside sanjeevanik where we see atul talking to the plants.

Atul: Hello Sia,Jia and Pia did u miss Papa coz i mised you. Yesterday i talked to Maya about you 3 and she really wants to meet u i no u 4 will become gud friend.

Then atul luks at the time and he realises its time to go inside

Atul: Sorry my friends but ive got to go dont miss me to much. I will see you after i finish my duties.

Then we see Armaan on his motorbike (luk hot as alwaiiz 😳)

Armaan:Ahhhh anoda day at saneevani.another day to tease ridz. Muahahahahah (his background music plays)

Armaan also goes inside and see's atul

Armaan:Hey champ

Atul:Hey armaan i need a word wiv u bout ur bhabhi

Armaan:Bhabhi???

Atul:ARMAAN u no (shys) Anjali

Armaan:Champ ur gettin all shy by sayin her name wonder whats gonna happen to you wen u say 2 her i luv u

Atul:Are yaar thts what i need u for . plz help me to say to anjali i luv u.

Armaan:Ok Champ ill help u

We then see armaan tellin sumfin to atul but we cant hear anyfin.

Atul:Armaan me...mei.....me

Armaan: Whats dis me me u wantin to be a goat.

Atul:Mein kaise, how can i do tht r u crazy.

Armaan:Ok den atul if you dont wanna do it then i cant help u.

and armana wlaks off in fake sadness.

Atul feels sorry for him and he also needs help so he can confess to anjie

Atul:Dost

Armaan luks bck and see's tul wiv his hands out

Armaan:Champ

they come running together and hug.After 2 seconds they break apart and atul says yes to armaans plan

We then see Ridz and Anjali coming in.

The winds blowin on armaan and ishq leta hai plays in the background. He can feel sum1's presence.

How do u like dis bit
Nxt bit will be the plan maybe




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