My Prediction.....*Updated*... (Pg-6)

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Part #1 - Pg1

Part #2 - Pg 3

Part #3 -Pg 5

Part #4 - Pg 6

Hope u all lyk my prediction 😃 ....I think Riddz is RYT dis tym....Arman was vry mean 2 herr....So Mein yeh Riddzy ki favour mein likh rahi hoon......If u don't lyk it then jus ignore itt....Srry!

Jahan se katam hua tha (3/20) wahi se likh rahi hoon.... 😭

Last Part - (Thnx 2 Pyaridost467)

http://youtube.com/watch?v=zW-P2PW3qSk&feature=related

Continueeee....Part # 1

A: Just w8 & watch!!!

(Both of them r shocked 2 c another side of each other's nature....Arman iz still mad @ her....n Riddzy iz brokennn but keeps staring @ Arman.......She almost criedd.....She thinks how could he behave lyk dat wid her? & She keeps thinking wht's her fault?)

R: Tumhe jo karna hai woh karo Arman.....After all it's ur lyf....& Mein koun hoti hi tumhe rok ne wali? Hai Na?

A: Exactly....Finally akal ayi tum mein?

R: Cries sooo badly & she runs away from there......

(Arman pura bikhar jata haiii.....n he also criess n luks into the skyyy.....)

A: Yeh mein ne kya kar diya? 😲 ...... n then luks @ d doorrr.....Tum chali gayi Ridhimaaa? 😭

~ At Nyt~

Anjie iz nt in the room....Riddz is alone...She goes near d window....n stars @ d moon....& she criess....& syas Yeh sab kya ho gaya? She tries 2 move 4rm there n suddenly hear the noise of the "Payal".....She also notices "Pustani Kada".....She remembers dat Arman told her dat his mom wanted 2 give this kada 2 his "Hone wali bahu"......

Then Ridhima woh sab yaad karti hai jo Arman ne usse aaj kaha tha....."Chali jao Ridhima".................."Aab hamare beech kuch nahi............ "U r great Dr. Ridhima"............ Kuch Karna hai to pulse aur BP check karo, yahan mere sar pe khade mmat raho"...... "Mein nahi chahta ki tum mere ass pass bhi raho"

These harsh words made her weakkkk.....She then decides 2 give those things bk 2 Arman 2mo in Sanjeevni.......Woh apne asson poch ti hai n then she hears Anjie's voiceee...

A: "Ridhimaaaa..."....."Ridhimaaaa".....Chalo....Khana taiyar haiiii....

R: Aye di.....

(Ridhima iz going downstairs....but she keeps thinking abt *Arman*......She hears/remembers those sentances dat came out of Arman's mouth...."Mein nahi chahta ki tum mere ass pass bhi raho" .........N then Anjie again calls Ridhimaaa....."Ridhimaa....Chalooo"...

R: Ayiiii dii.....Aa rahi hoon....

Itne mein hi uska pair phisal jata hai....n she falls downnnn 4rm d stairs......

Shashank, Anjie n Nani jaldi se wahan par jatein hai....n they c riddzy on the floor....She iz bleeding.....uske sir pe bahout chot ayi haiii....Shashank takes her upstairsss....n Nani brings first aid boxxxx.....Anjie usko check kar ke Dressing karti haiii.....

S: Uski halat to bahout kharab hai...

A: Hannn....Papa....lagta hi ke sidi sar par lagne ki wajah se uskaa...

N: Aisa mat kaho....Meri Bacchi ko kuch nahi hogaaa.....(& then Nani mandir ke pass jati hai n she prays 4 Ridhimaaa...)

A: yeh bahout weak hai Dad...She reallie needs 2 eat somethingg....

S: As soon as she wakes up, try 2 feed herr....I hv emergncy @ 9'o clock.....So I won't b here @ nyt....Plzzz take care of herr.......

(Shashank goes 2 Nani...)

S: Don't wrry....She will b allrytttt.....Hamari gudia ko kuch nahi hogaa....

N: Tu usko bol ke jana ke kal Hospital jana ki koi zaroorat nahi...

S: Okiee...I will tell herr....Bye...

N: Byee....Dhayan se jana...aur riddhi ki fikar mat karna....

S: Okieee.e.....

~In Riddi's Room~

Riddhi ko hos aa gaya haii....N Anjie tries 2 feed herr.....

A: Tum apna khayal kyun nahi rakhti Riddzy?.....Kuch hoo jata toh? Kisa feel kar rahi ho? Yeh lo kha lo?

R: Nahi di....Mujhe nahi khana....

A: natak mat karo...Chup chap khalo warna mein papa ko phone karoon gi...

Riddzy eats n smiles....She tells Anjie...."Aap meri kitni fikar karti hai di" Anjie also smiles n put her hand on her head....."Meri bahaennn..."

B4 she could finish her sentance....Nani comess....

N: Han...hann...Aab to meri koi sunta hi nahi? Dono behen jo itni samajdar ho gayi hai...

Anjie n Riddhi both hug Nani & Nani tells them 2 take a resttt....

~In the morning~

Riddzy iz in hospital @ 6:30 in the morning b4 Anjieee......

Anjie found a note on d dinning tableee....Riddz wrote..."Agar mein aap se pehle nahi aati aur Nani agar uth jati toh woh mujhe kabhi nahi aane deti...So I left early.....Srry! I m fit & f9 di....Don't wrry abt me.." Anjie gives a cute lukkkk....

Nani comes n Anjie explains the whole thing 2 her...Nani didn't say anythingggg & gives "Wht the hell" look? But then she also smiles.....She was happy dat her Riddhi is perfactly OK noww.....

Keerti already gave Riddz duty....Riddz doesn't want 2 work wid Arman now so she tells Kirti dat: "Can I hv dat new case in ICU? Plzz....? Arman is smart enough 2 handle NANA's case...plz???"

Riddz still has dat bandage on her head...

K: Yeh Kya hua?

Riddz explains the whole thing 2 herr...but didn't tell her how she fell down? (Obviously)

K: Aab aap theek hai (asks vry sweety)...Okie aap ICU mein kam kar sakti hai...

Riddz is now doing her duty in ICU.....All other interns come...Atul asks Anjie "Where iz Riddz?"

A: Woh already aa gayi hai...

Arman didn't hear thiss....but he iz wondering where is she? but didn't ask anybody anything....(Attitude Probb....Samja karo yarr 😆)

Muskaan asks Rahoool: Oye kan-khajure tujhe Ridhima dikhi kya?

R: Ridheeeeemaaa....???

M: Oye Chupp....Tujhe kuch pata nahi hoga.....Rehne de...

Arman's eyes r searching for Riddz.....He reallie wants 2 c herr....but doesn't wanna ask anybodyyyy....Dr. Kirti comes....She gives every one their duty....

Every one hears their duties....n leaves...

***Updated***

~ @ 12:30 P.M. in Sanjeevni (Lunch tym)~

Every 1 goes 2 locker room....

AT: Mujhe to bahout bhukh lagi hai aaj..

Anjie: Kyun?

AT: Yeh Mr. Deshpande pata nahi kya kya mangwate rehte hai? Woh to "Puran poli" aur "Halwa" khate rehte hai per mere waat lag jati hai unka khana la la kar?

Every one laughs @ Atul.....

Arman iz in deep thoughtsss.....He iz reallie missing Riddzz....He reallie wants 2 know where she izzz.....He thinks "Kahan hoo tum Ridhima..???...Meri baaton ka itna bura man liya ke mujhe aapna chehra bhi nahi dekha rahi ho?"...........He luks @ her lockerrrr & makes sad faceeee.....

(lyk dis 1....Awww 😭)

Atul: Aab Ridhima kaisi hai?

Anjie: Theek hai....Lekin abhi bhi mujhe uska khayal rakh na padega....

Arman iz sooo confused....He still doesn't know wht happen 2 her?

Every one is in cafeteria nowww...

Atul: Kaash ki mujhe koi ghar ka khana la deta? Anjie tum mere liye banao gi na? 😆

Anjie: Wht? Atul.....STOP ur nonsense....😡

Atul: Okie Anjali 😃

Hhahaha.....Every 1 laughs 😆

Anjie: Tum kuch kyun nahi kha rahe Arman? Itne chup chup kyun ho?

Arman: Wohhhh...kuch nahi.....

(He thinks "Aaj Ridhima ayi to hai na?" Agar ayi he toh aab tak kyun nahi dikhi?")

Every 1 iz talkin abt how they r gonna celebrate Holi...???...Jab sab baat kar rahe hein tab wahan pe Dr. Shashank ate haii.....Every 1 iz shocked 2 c him in cafeteria....Everybody gets up...

S: Betho Betho......2 Anjie - Aab Ridhima kaisi hai?

Anjie: Theek hai papa...U don't wrry....I will take care of herr....

Atul: Hannn hum sab hain na yahan per...

Muskann: Waise bhi dost hote hai kiss kam ke?

Rahooool: Hannnn..... (😆lol!)

Arman is soooooooo confusedddd NOW....Can't take it anymore....He iz dying to know wht the heck is going onnnn...? He just wanna get up n ask Anjie rytaway....Woh aab bahout fikar kar raha haiii.....N now he feels reallie srry.....He again remebers "Mein nahi chahta ki tum mere ass pass bhi raho"..... "Mein nahi chahta ki tum mere ass pass bhi raho" "Mein nahi chahta ki tum mere ass pass bhi raho"

Uhhh! It's killin him nowww.....He didn't eat anythingg.....

Dr. Shashank iz nt in cafeteria anymore....

Arman: Anjie....Aaj woh....wohhh....ummm....

"SABHI INTERNS DR. KIRTI KO REPORT KAREN"

M: Chalo yarr! Warna woh gabar hamara bend baja degi...Aye hero...Chal...

Arman leaves 4rm there wid other internsss....n now he thinks dat if riddz iz in Hospital today then usko aabhi Dr. Kirti ko report karna padegaa....His eyes r ready 2 meet herss...

But unfortunately she is nt there.....Kirti has already told her abt the new cases and holi's celebration in sanjeevni.....

Kirti tells every abt Holi and some new cases in ICU....Riddz duty is in ICU...n Kirti tells Arman 2 go in ICU for some new cases.....But b4 he goes there....he again tries to ask Anjie....

Arman: Anjie... Aaj... Riii....

Atul: Chal yarr! Jana ICU mein....Apni bhabhi ko pareshan mat karr... 😆

Arman gets mad @ Atul.......Atul notices dat......Arman leavesss...........Atul goes after himmmm......."Arman Suno tohh...

Srry Mein khane chale gayi thi tohh... but hey Arman iz gonna c riddz in next part so stay tuned....

Will continue soonnnn....Oh! ya ...srry 4 the mistakes! 😕

Tc

Amie

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: prettyasjen

Oh wow... do continue!

Should I?

I think I shoulddd....Okie...

Lemme continueee...

Thnx hun 4 reading itttt 😊

Tc

Amie

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Posted: 17 years ago
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very interesting..i am looking foward to the next part..continue soon..i will be anxiously waitin
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i a spechless! i really wish dis happens! plz do cntd!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Really awesome.. I find it very interesting.. Conitinue soon. 😉
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Originally posted by: pwincess kanzi

i a spechless! i really wish dis happens! plz do cntd!

thnx hunnn.... i will

tc

Amie

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mariam1986

Really awesome.. I find it very interesting.. Conitinue soon. 😉

Okiee...i will....thnx a lot guyzzz

tc

Amie

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: teenb12

very interesting..i am looking foward to the next part..continue soon..i will be anxiously waitin

I will deffo cont. for u hunnn...tum jo bhi kaho i will do itt....thnx a lottt 😃

@Marim: thnxxx 😃

Tc

Amie

Edited by cute14us28amy - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice work....realli interesting but it would be a double treat if this actually happens 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awsummm 👏 👏do continue soon

~*~Sofia~*~

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