FF: Hate or Love: Promo: Pg 146 - Page 2

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desi344 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
Our 1st DMG FanFiction in the forum . I hope it rox cause I love the intro and I am definately going to wait for the next update!! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: maha_prakrti

Great one do continue 😛 Except a doubt???? You said Anjali is Riddhi's step sister, but her mom and dad died... So from who's side is she step sister... Or is it like they adopted her 😊 Meaning Riddhi's mom married Anjali's dad second and then Anjali's dad died???? Is it like that 😕

Will tell u. If u read Ridzs sketch then there it tells that Ridz dad ditched her mom. So Anji is Ridzs dad and another womans daughter and Ridz/Anjis dad adn the woman died so Ridz mom had no other choice then to adopt Anji.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#13

Part 1 -

A girl is shown sleeping and suddenly the girl screams and gets up. Another girl whos name is Sapna gets up, turns the light on and asks the girl who had just screamed if she was OK.
S: Are u OK Riddhima?
Riddhima: Yea. I just had a bad dream about.....
S: U were thinking about it and him right?
R: Yes, I don't know what to do! I try to forget him but I just can't! Can't believe that it was all a joke! I loved him more then anyone! His eyes, his smile, his talks! He was just perfect! While Riddhima said that, there were flashes and then the guys Eyes, smile and talks were shown.
S: BUT U HAVE TO FORGET HIM! Said angirly!
S: Don't u know what he did to u? That night? U even lost your baby u fought with everyone for! Even ur own mom! Don't u remember?
And Ridz started crying on hearing the word baby.
R: I know! I lost my everything to him!
S: I hate men! They are just soo selfish! I want to go back to my old liffe! Away from these horrible memories! Away! I want to fulfill my dream of becoming a doctor that I had a year ago! When I was in collage...with u, Atul, Radhika, Sunny! I want those days back!

Flashback -

A girl is shown playing cricket with boys from the age of 10 to 15. The girl is up for batting and the boy throws the ball, the girl hits it and the ball goes high in the air, comes down, hits Atul on the head eventually making him go bonkers, then the hitting the car, then a bald man, and finally breaking the glass of a window. The girls face is finally shown and its Riddhima. The guy whos window the ball had landed in comes to his balcony and yells at Riddhima and the other kids.
Guy: How dare u hit a ball at my window? U know how much the window costs?
Kid: Well, lets see, more then the ball and the bat toghter!?
Guy: Yea! It does cost more then the ball and bath put toghter!
Kid: Uncle...why do u have this much costly window when u could get the cheap ones so that when we break the windows, u don't have to get double the money!
Guy: Well, this is the 1115 ball that has hit my window in the last 5 months! If this keeps on going on then....then...then...I don't know what I will do but i will do something real bad!
Kid: Whatever.
Atul was trying to get up from the ground when the guy throws the ball down again and it hits Atul at the same spot that it had before driving Atul more bonkers!

That was it for today guys. More after I get more comments.

Edited by *Shifali* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
Well, this is the 1115 ball that has hit my window in the last 5 months!

^Loved that, Shifali 😆 Wonderful part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
its going soo good::yaar::plz Cont" 😳 ::loved teh first part:
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
it was a brilliant part... you must continue soon..

riddhima lost her baby.. 😭 😭 😭

i hope armaan comes into her life and changes it for the better!


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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
^^^I don't want to reveal much about the baby and its father as it might come as a shock to u all...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: *Shifali*

^^^I don't want to reveal much about the baby and
its father as it might come as a shock to u all...



omg.. i hope you dont want to say that Armaan is the father!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
hey!!! thats a good start plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
wow, finally what i have been waiting for...a arman-ridz ff!!!! well awsome start! i really am excited for more! continue!

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