Sarada, I have been a silent reader of your one shots, but just so you know, you write very well and I am enjoying this FF as much as your previous one. The way you handled SR along with Shilpa is done accordingly and I am loving the relationship so far b/w Sid - Shilpa, Ridz - Sid. I am sure you will do justice to Shilpa - Ridz relationship as well. The jealousy and vulnerability of Riddhima was depicted in a mature sense...it didn't make her look like a vella, or vile woman, but it was because of her traumatizing past which lead her to be insecure again. Sid was just fine...I'd expect him to be the more mature one as Riddhima seems to be fragile still, no? 😆 Shilpa was adorable in the first few parts, but in the most recent one, her weak side was shown which added to her character a lot!
There's depth to the characters...almost as if peeling off layers...which makes the story intricate.
Keep up the great work!!!
Oh...and do have in SR moments (like a lot of them...rofl😆)...the teasing ones...if DMG would have gone the way I wanted, I am sure SR would have acted the way you presented them.
Edited by zainab25 - 15 years ago