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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Noorya...

very nice part

finaly someone get to know about the truth im sure now Sid will help her😳



Thanks Noorya. Yeah now the story would come to this plot and you have see how Sid helps Shilpa out.

Originally posted by: indian_beauty

Awesome update....the teasing part is too good...!!! will be waiting for the nxt part...nd thnx for the PM.!!!



Thanks Zarqa. I will try to upload the next part most probably by Sunday.
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Posted: 15 years ago
@Sarada- So we will have Shilpa and Sid for the next part aaa?


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: monty22

nice update.

can't wait for next part. update soon.





Thanks for your comments. I believe this is the first time you have commented on my OS. So thanks for that and special thanks for your beautiful emoti-con. I really like it.

Originally posted by: sidma_love

Sarada 🤗

Nice update dear

So now d sister track will go on ?? looking forward to it..

Plzz update soon

Harshita



Hi Harshita thanks for writing your name. I was little tired of calling you sidma_love so now I know your name. You have to see how the track proceeds from here.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: bhavi20_s

@Sarada- So we will have Shilpa and Sid for the next part aaa?




Okay for you I am giving out the next part. Next part would be Sid-Shilpa and it would be updated on Sunday.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran255

awesoe update and this is definitely a cliff hanger

plz update fast ;)
gr8 going



Thanks Kiran. Don't worry you would have to wait only 1 more day to get the next update.

Originally posted by: monar

good one sarada I loved it!



Yaar monar. Itna chota comment toh tumhne kabhi nahi likhi. 😭😭😭. Next time I want a bada wala comment from you. Okay.
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Posted: 15 years ago
As usual awesome update :))
Enjoyed reading it😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nikita_88

Awesome update!

Loved the teasing by Sid!

Cont soon!




Thanks Nikita. Thanks for your lovely comments

Originally posted by: divi4u

Hey Sarada🤗

1st of all....thnx 4 d PM🤗 i think this tym m not so late😉😉 very nice part......awesome buddy👏 really loved s way Sid teasing Riddima😳.....i want scenes lyk this in DMG also😉😉 n Sid now knows Shilpa's truth...good👏👏👏 waiting 2 knw hw Sid handle this situation😃😃 cont soon👍🏼 dont frgt to PM me😉



Thanks Divi. Yeah this time you are not that late. Now the next part would be with Sid and Shilpa and I would most probably update it by Sunday. I will pm you when I update the part.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: romiosugar

As usual awesome update :))

Enjoyed reading it😃



Thanks romiosugar. May I know your name. I hope you are liking the story so far.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: psarada



Thanks romiosugar. May I know your name. I hope you are liking the story so far.

Yes, I am loving your OS to the core :)) You have been doing an awesome job. I wish you were a script writer of DMG😍
I am Sabz😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Sarada, I have been a silent reader of your one shots, but just so you know, you write very well and I am enjoying this FF as much as your previous one. The way you handled SR along with Shilpa is done accordingly and I am loving the relationship so far b/w Sid - Shilpa, Ridz - Sid. I am sure you will do justice to Shilpa - Ridz relationship as well. The jealousy and vulnerability of Riddhima was depicted in a mature sense...it didn't make her look like a vella, or vile woman, but it was because of her traumatizing past which lead her to be insecure again. Sid was just fine...I'd expect him to be the more mature one as Riddhima seems to be fragile still, no? 😆 Shilpa was adorable in the first few parts, but in the most recent one, her weak side was shown which added to her character a lot!

There's depth to the characters...almost as if peeling off layers...which makes the story intricate.

Keep up the great work!!!

Oh...and do have in SR moments (like a lot of them...rofl😆)...the teasing ones...if DMG would have gone the way I wanted, I am sure SR would have acted the way you presented them.
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