SR OS - Unknown bonds of Love - last part pg 26

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: psarada

Yaar why so small comments these days. You have reserved the spots but haven't commented too. Kya baat hai. No liking the story ?

hey Sarada🤗

hey m really sorry yaar 4 d small comments😔

dont u dare 2 think tht i dont lyk ur FF😃.....i really lyk it😃

d thing is i really dont get enough time to spend here on IF....1st coz of my studies n 2nd coz my mom is not well....so i hv to do some stuffs at home also

Edited by divi4u - 15 years ago

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#102

Hey Sarada🤗

very nice part yaar😃👏👏

i really lyk it😃

i always enjoyed a lot....n d jealousy idea is too good.....n d way Riddima told abt it 😳

thnx 4 d PM🤗

update soon....m waiting desperately😉😉

do write some more👍🏼

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PSharada

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Posted: 15 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: monar
Hey Sarada great update yaar! Sorry for earlier comment 😳.. I loved this part and it justifies Riddhima's jealously 4 Siddhant's proximity with Shilpa.. good one Sarada waiting for more

Thanks Monar. Yaar itna late comment kar rahi ho. Anyway thanks for the comment and it is good that you are liking the jealousy of Riddhima

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PSharada

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Posted: 15 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: bhavi20_s
@Sarada- Gr8 work yaar, bit of jealousy, bit of fights, and bit of romance.
I say a perfect mixture. 👍🏼
Last time u killed us with suspense but I am also enjoying ur new track.
But until now shilpa has got no big role in this OS other than making R jealous.
I bet she is gonna get a bigger role to play in the next 4 parts, 😊
Keep writing.
Bhavi 😛
PS: I have certain things to straighten ut at the univ hence I am a little busy yaar. Will catch u when i am free. 🤗

Thanks bhavi. Yeah the point is to write different stories right. This OS is different than the earlier two. But when you are all set at your univ you better come and chat with me okay.

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PSharada

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Posted: 15 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: divi4u
Hey Sarada🤗
very nice part yaar😃👏👏

i really lyk it😃

i always enjoyed a lot....n d jealousy idea is too good.....n d way Riddima told abt it 😳

thnx 4 d PM🤗

update soon....m waiting desperately😉😉

do write some more👍🏼

Yaar Divi, Thanks for commenting even though late. Sometimes when I don't see my regular visitors commenting then it feels little bad. Thoda hi sayi do please comment on the OS.

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PSharada

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Posted: 15 years ago

#106

SR OS unknown bonds of Love part 5

Recap:- Riddhima bursts out on Sid in fit of jealousy and Sid finally figures out what is bothering her. Sid and Riddhima spend a night full of passion assuring each other that they are meant to be together.

Ab aage:-

Riddhima has never had a more peaceful sleep. It is as if all the demons that were driving her crazy just left her when they saw Sid with her. It is morning 8AM but Riddhima still was sleeping. Sid has already gotten ready for hospital and he was in double mind whether he should wake Riddhima up. After all she was sleeping like a baby. He decides to go and have some breakfast and if Riddhima wakes up by that time then both will go to office together but if she doesn't wake up then he will give in an application for leave for today.

Sid is in the kitchen fixing some toast and juice for himself. Riddhima wakes up and sees that Sid is not with her. She looks at the time and it is already 8AM. She just rushes to the hall to see if Sid has already left for hospital.

Riddhima comes and see Sid fixing his breakfast in the Kitchen. Sid has his back towards Riddhima. Seeing Sid in Kitchen Riddhima has a gush of love and runs and hugs him from the back. Sid is little surprised to see Riddhima being so expressive and forceful but Sid being Sid can't resist teasing and pulling her leg.

Sid(in a teasing voice):- Wow some one seems to have had a lot of sleep. So how are you feeling

Riddhima(all shy and embarassed):- Yes Sid I had the most beautiful sleep yesterday night. It is as if all my doubts were never there and I just can't explain what yesterday night meant for me. I am sorry Sid for bursting out on you yesterday. Will you forgive me.

Sid:- Hmm. Let me think. Yeah I can forgive you on one condition.

Riddhima(now little surprised looks up from Sid's back):- Condition. What condition Sid.

Sid(turns around):- Hmm you need to allow me to assure you of my love now just like I did yesterday night. what say(and winks at her).

Riddhima turns red with embarassment and can't look into Sid's eyes. She tries to go away but Sid catches her by her waist.

Sid(in a very sensual tone):- Tell me Riddhima. Are you sure of my love now or should I .....

Riddhima puts her finger on Sid's lips and silences him. It is as if both were acknowledging what they meant for each other. Riddhima lowers her eyes slowly.

Riddhima:- Sid wait for 30 mins. I will get ready and we can both go to Hospital.

Sid agrees and both go to Hospital. Things become normal between them and Sid makes extra sure that Riddhima never feels left out. Slowly Riddhima starts to warm up to Shilpa too.

1 month passes by and in Sanjeevani they have a family day celebration. It was a day when the family members of Sanjeevani could meet the patients and there was a small celebration meant for them.

There was a small skit of a happy family that the pediatric ward children put up for everyone. All the doctors were enjoying the skit but not Shilpa. She has tears in her eyes and she just can't sit there through the presentation. Sid turns to look at all the staff members and notices that Shilpa had tears in her eyes.He doesn't know why she is sad.

As soon as the skit ends Sid tries to talk to Shilpa but he sees that she is not there in the celebration hall. He decides that he should go and comfort her and find out her reason for being sad.

Sid searches all through the hospital and at last finds Shilpa sitting on the steps of Basketball court clutching a photo album and crying.Sid goes and sits near her.

Sid(in a slow voice):- Shilpa are you missing your family. Is that the reason you are sitting here alone and crying.

Shilpa is shocked to hear Sid's voice. She just wants to go away from there. She stands up suddenly and the photo album that she was holding falls down. Before she could bend and retrieve the album Sid has his hand on the album. He picks it and tries to look at the photos.

Sid:- Oh let me look at your family photos. I can guess you from your childhood photos.

Sid glances at the photo album and there are photos of Shilpa during her childhood and with her parents. He comes to the last pages of the album and he is shocked to see Gupta family photo and Riddhima's photo circled in red. Sid is completely shocked.

Sid(in a shocked voice):- What is this Shilpa. Why do you have Riddhima's photo circled in Red. Answer me.

Shilpa doesn't answer anything but just stands there. Sid gets angry as Shilpa doesn't answer anything.

Sid(in a angry voice):- Shilpa you were my friend but if you think you can harm Riddhima then you are heavily mistaken. No one can harm my Riddhima as long as I am with her. Now tell me why you have her photo circled in red.

Shilpa can now no longer hold her tears. She falls down clutching the photo album to her chest crying.

Shilpa(crying):- Because she is my sister Sid. That's why I have her photo with me. That's why I came to Sanjeevani.

Sid is completely shocked by this revelation.This was something which he never expected.

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Guys this was supposed to be cliffhanger but since supercool3 wanted the story to not be cliffhangers, I extended the story a bit. Hope you liked this bit and I will be waiting for your comments.

Edited by psarada - 15 years ago

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Bhavana

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Posted: 15 years ago

#107

hmmm thinking ......kya likhoon ........scratching my head🤔 sab kuch tho maine pehle hi discuss kar diya Sarada se.......

OK here is the thing, a good continuation from the last part and good to read the light hearted moments between SR
But again I thought in this OS SR ke saath Shilpa was also an imp character. but i didnt find her picturisation any strong or important .

I hope u do justice to her character in the forthcoming parts.

Take care and Keep writing
Bhavi 😊

Edited by bhavi20_s - 15 years ago

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Akankshaa.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#108

👏👏👏

Awesomee update !! 👍🏼

Awww, the teasing and the nakhre and the hesitation just overpowers me !! 😳😳
I so want it to happen in DMG !! 😃

Keep rocking ... 😊