guys thnks to all who liked my parts and commented and "like"d it and also to silent readers ...
i thgt to post it later..but i will be busy for 2 days so am posting it now..,will be updating after 2 days..
hope u all like it..please post comments..a sentence/a word ..it means a lot,,but please do post as thats my feedback and my encouragement to write even at time of my important exams,,
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ARMAAN-RIDHIMAA : PART 5
"Laye hum Hasi laye hum Khushi jee le phir se zindagi…
Taaron se aage hum jaayenge cheen le ayenge roshni …
Dil ho jahaan dost ho vahaan aisa manzar hain yahan…
Manzil nayi,rasthe naye …
Phir bhi chale,hum saath mein…
Hum toh chale the dost banke…
Jaane kahan dill mill gayye!!!!"
At operation threater..
All are trying to handle the situation..
ARMAAN:Dr.Tamanna aapka dhyaan kaha hain…..now quick …..
Tamanna responds quickly this time and gives injection,,
Armaan injects the patient ,and after sometime his pulse beat comes to normal..……..
The operation is a success…
All are washing their hands…
ARMAAN:Good work Dr.Sidhant and Dr.tamanna..(facing tamanna)apne work par concentrate keejiye….yahan ek second mein kuch bhi ho saktha hain…yeh aapka first surgery hain…so its ok..par aage se dhyaan rakhiye…jab tak aap apne darr ko face nehi karenge..u cant overcome it….
He leaves…
Tamanna was feeling guilty,,its because of negligence,patient could have died…she never imagined that sid cud do better than her…
She leaves the place crying…..
Sid is shocked to sees her ….
SIDDANTH:Tamanna….(he calls her,but she goes away.)
General ward..
Yuvi and naina..
Yuvi was seeing a patients report…
Naina was looking him from her corner of eyes seeing someother patient near by….she sees again but couldn't find him anywhere,,,she turns back and finds face to face with him..
YUVRAAJ:Mujhe doondh rahi ho…
NAINA:Nehi toh…
He starts leaving…
NAINA:Ruko…
He stops..
NAINA: (seeing his arm)Tumhari chot kaisi hain…tumne dawayi toh le liya hain na..aur bandage kar lee hain…nehi toh septic ho jaayega…
Yuvraj was seeing her with a questioning look..
NAINA:Wooh….kal ke liye ……….thank q…….
YUVRAAJ:Kya kaha tumne…
NAINA:Dekho ab zyada akado mat….kahan na ..thank q
YUVRAAJ: kya ..phir se kaho….mujhe sunayi nehi diya…….
NAINA:Ek baar kahan na thank q,,thank q thank q…!!! bas!!!
YUVRAAJ:U r welcome..
He leaves…
NAINA:Maine yeh kya keh diye…….yeh dafod bhi na..
At canteen…
Very less people were there…..
Armaan was tired after the operation..,it was evening now..all interns have left already..he saw atul and nikki and joins them…….
ARMAAN:Hey guys,,
NIKKI:Hello armaan….so kaisa raha tumhara operation….
ARMAAN:Hmm..successful..,,,,
ATUL:Congrats yaar armaan….(hugs him)
ARMAAN:Thnks champ…
NIKKI:Congrats armaan..
ARMAAN:Thanks…so baato kya chal raha hain….
NIKKI:Kuch nehi ..bas aise hi…
ATUL:Bahut din ho gaye…kuch party warty ho kar…pehle toh hum kitna maza karthe the..
NIKKI:Haan!!ab kaam hi itna hain,,,mauka hi nehi miltha…
Armaan gets an idea….
ARMAAN:Guys ,,mujhe ek idea aaya hain..(he hits the table)
ATUL:Kya??
ARMAAN:Main kal batata hoon..abhi mujhe jana hain..bye..(he gets up and goes away smiling)
NIKKI:Arre armaan suno toh..(But he has already left)
ATUL:Chala gaya..yeh bhi na..bilkul nehi badla…
NIKKI:Par hum bahut badal gayye…(a bit loud)
ATUL:Kya??
NIKKI:Kuch nehi..
Next day………
At shashanks cabin..
SHASHANK:Dr.Keerthi….
KEERTHI:Yes sir..
SHASHANK: Main ek bahut zaroori kaam se bahar ja raha hoon,shayad kal tak na aapau,aap ridhima ka khayal rakhye,wooh anjali bhi bahar gayi hain,,iss liye..
KEERTHI:Its ok sir,,don't worry ,,I will take care…
Shashank nods and goes away..
Armaan hears this conversation….
ARMAAN:Toh..sasurji bahar ja rahe hain…so time to implement my "idea"…..ab dekhthe hain…
At fire escape…
Sid was passing by fireescape and heard some sound....he opened the door and saw….
Tamanna was sitting..
SIDDANTH:Hee!!miss.gayab..main subah se tumhe doondh raha tha,., aur tum yahan ho….kal bhi tum jaldi chali gayi..kuch baat bhi nehi kiya….
He didnt see her face,her eyes were filled with tears..
SIDDANTH:Kya..kya hua…tum ro kyun rahi ho..??
SIDDANTH:Kisine kuch kahan??
Tamanna didn't talked,but just cried..
SIDDANTH:Tum baatogi nehi toh kaise pata chalega..maine kuch ..
TAMANNA:Nehi tumne kuch nehi kiya..
SIDDANTH:Toh mujhe batao ..
TAMANNA:Kal operation mein meri wajah se…
Sidhant nods his head allowing her to say further..
TAMANNA: Meri galti se agar us patient ko kuch ho jata toh main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nehi kar paati….sob…sob…baba ko mujhpar bahut bharosa hain..main unke bharose ko thod nehi sakthi..unke sapne,unke armaan…..sob..sob..meri ek galti ki wajah se sab kuch ..sab kuch ..khatam ho jata…sirf meri darr se………
(she cries )main apne baba ke sapno ko kabhi pura nehi kar paungi..kabhi nehi..kabhi nehi….sob.sob.sob
SIDDANTH:Tum aisa kyun kar rahi ho..kabhi kabhi aisa ho jata hain…don't worry.. aur haan operation toh successful raha na…..
TAMANNA:Par meri wajah se..
SIDDANTH: (keeping his hand on her hand and consoling her)
Tumhari wajah se kuch nehi hua…apne aap ko is sab ke liye zimedar mat samjho…tum ek bahut achchi doctor ho..believe me….bas tum thodi darr gayi..it can happen to anyone…aaj tumhe hua ,kal mujhe hoga….aur itna complicated case tha…hain na……(she nods)bas apne aap par bharosa rakho….tab tum apne baba ke sapnon ko bhi pura kar poungi… himmat mat haaro…just do it!!!ok…
Now smile..smile…
TAMANNA:Hmm..she smiles … (she felt sid was a flirtious guy,but today he made her gain confidence back with his words)
SIDDANTH:Wow!!!dekho main ne itna bada speech diya..lagtha hain tumhare saath ka asar ho raha hain….
Tamanna sees at him..
SIDDANTH:Phir se rona mat shuru kar dena,,,,be confident …and see u will do it…(he gets up)
TAMANNA:Thanks…
SIDDANTH: U r welcome miss.gayab ……….Ab chale warna miss.khadoos hamari peeche pad jayegi aur phir hum dono ko yahan aake rona padega..
Tamanna feels better ,she smiles and They both leave..
Some one who has been noticing all this,entered the fire escape and …its ARMAAN..
He remembered the day when he consoled ridhima on terrace when she failed in her operation,she was crying like tamanna and he supported her like sid,actually he could see sid and tamanna's images changing to himself and ridhima….
He sat on steps,all those memories flashed infront of him..….
ARMAAN:Basket……kyun….jab bhi hum kareeb aate hain..toh phir se dooor ho jathe hain..pata nehi….yeh sab humare saath kyun ho raha hain…….aaj mein tumhara itna kareeb hote hue bhi tumse bahut door hoon..bahut door….
He sits for sometime and comes out of fire escape and sees Dr.keerthi
ARMAAN:Dr.Keethi…
KEERTHI:Oh Dr.Armaan ..congrats aapki surgery successful hone ke liye…aap aathe hi apna kaam bahut achchi tarah se handle kar rahe hain…
ARMAAN:Thank u Dr.Keerthi.. aapke interns bhi kam nehi the ,they have done a wonderful job..
Itne kum samay mein ..they handled very well,,aapko inki points badani hogi..
KEERTHI:Ya…!!!i was also impressed,par aapne unhe achche see guide kiya hain…
(armaan smiles)
ARMAAN:yes..I was thinking of a party in evening....why don't u join..
KEERTHI: Nehi armaan meri tabiyat theek nehi hain,,waise Dr.shashank ne mujhe duty di hain,par Dr.Anjali aa gayi hain ,iss liye main ja rahi hoon..ok armaan I need to go ,,bye
ARMAAN:OK Dr.Keerthi,,u take rest..bye
Keerthi leaves
ARMAAN:……………Anjy aagayi hain….aur mujhse mili nehi…
Just then anjy enters from back and hugs him..
ANJALI:Hey ..armaan..
ARMAAN:Anjy…kaise ho ..
ANJALI:Main theek hoon armaan .sorry main tumse milne nehi aayi…wooh kuch kaam tha..
ARMAAN:Haan haan....waise bhi tumhe toh meri parwah hi nehi hain,,tumhe to sirf apni family ki….
He felt that he have unintentionally hurt her with his words,,
ARMAAN:Anjy..wooh mein toh bas…aise hi…
ANJALI:Armaan ,,kya tum meri family nehi ho,,……….tumhe nehi pata maine tumhe kitna miss kiya……….armaan…..tum mere sabse achche dost ho..meri behen ki..
She couldn't go further,,armaan felt that he shud divert the topic.
ARMAAN:Anjy..tum aur senti ..oh god!!!tum anjy hi hona…ya phir koi aur..ek minute,,,(he started examing her) tumhari 2 ankhen hain…..,2 kaan hain,,………1 naak hain..
ANJALI:Armaan…..(she hit him playfully)…achcha maine suna tumhara operation successful raha….congrats..
ARMAAN:Thanks…..aree ..Haan.!!Waise main yeh soch raha tha ki is mauke par hum ek chota sa success party kare,waise bhi mere joining ke khushi mein koi party toh aapne diya nehi….toh mera welcome party mein khud de raha hoon..
ANJALI:Aisi koi baat nehi hain..armaan..
ARMAAN:Achcha baba chodo…aaj sham ko hum party karthe hain….
ANJALI:Kahan???
ARMAAN:Yahan canteen mein aur kahan….pehle bhi toh bahut baar kiya hain na..
ANJALI:Armaan..kuch cheeze ab badal gayi hain….
ARMAAN:Mujhe nehi pata..party hoga aur wooh bhi sanjeevni mein ..
ANJALI:Par papa….
ARMAAN:Wooh toh ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,yahan nehi hain…. (saying seriously)kisi kaam se bahar gaye hain..
ANJALI:Oh!!!tabhi toh mein sochu…..(folding her hands)
ARMAAN: (laughs) Anjy………achcha mein nikki,Dr.Modi,jiah,saare interns aur baaki staff ko inform kar detha hoon..,, shaam ko milthe hain…. Ok..
He starts leaving …
ANJALI:Aur atul ko …
ARMAAN:Oh haan….atul ko….Anjy …..Tum kehdo na..
ANJALI: Par armaan…
ARMAAN:please..
ANJALI:ok!
ARMAAN:Ek aur wicket gira..ab baaki match khelthe hain..Dr.Armaan…get ready..
He leaves smiling…
Armaan informs staff,and then he meets jiah on way,,,,
ARMAAN:Jiah…
JIAH:Oh hye..Dr.Armaan,,,congrats for u r operation success…kafi comlicated tha..u did well…
ARMAAN:Thnks!!ussi ki success mein aur meri tarf se ek welcome party rakhi hain..evening..in canteen,,u and Dr.Modi should come..
JIAH:Oh !!sure ..i love parties,…par abhi ko toh sirf aur sirf kaam kaam aur kisi ki nehi padi hain……..I don't knw abt him….i will surely come..,,ok ..toh mein shopping karne ke liye chalthi hoon..bye…
(Talking on phone)
JIAH:Hello Manish..aaj party hain..select a beautiful dress for me..ok ..i will be coming there….bye ..
ARMAAN:Ajeeb hain….pata nehi yeh Dr.Modi ko batayegi ya nehi..main khud invite kartha hoon aur waise bhi mujhe usse bahut kaam baaki hain…..
At canteen….
Armaan enters and sees all interns except atul……
ARMAAN:Hey guys..
SIDDANTH:Hello armaan..
J.P:Hello sir…
ARMAAN:Achcha dekho aaj shaam ko party hain….
NAINA:Party ..par kiss liye….
ARMAAN: My joining and on my first success in sanjeevni…
NAINA:Oh wow!!!!bada maza aayega….
TAMANNA:Main nehi aa paungi..
ARMAAN:Aise kaise nehi aaogi aap aur Dr.sidhant dono bhi iss success ke zimedar hain….so u shud come…and yuvi(who was sitting away as usual)..u too..(he nods)
NAINA: (to herself)Paat nehi apne aap ko bada hero samjtha hain….
TAMANNA:Par sir..
ARMAAN:No arguments..aaj shaam ko canteen mein party hain..aur tum sab ko aana hi hain..and that's final!!!bye..
Outside canteen..
ARMAAN:Umar bhai,,,
UMAR BHAI:Jee armaan beta..
ARMAAN:Maine ek welcome party organise kiya hain..aur haan operation successful hone ki khushi mein bhi ….
UMAR BHAI:Operation..
ARMAAN:Haan wooh Dr.tamana aur Dr.sidhant ne bhi bahut achcha perform kiya hain….so..
UMAR BHAI:Tammu ne kiya hain..(A bit loud )
ARMAAN:Jee..aap ne kuch kahan..
UMAR BHAI:Nehi …nehi..
ARMAAN:Maine saare arrangements kar diya hain..aap please ek baar check kejeeye…
UMAR BHAI:Jee main dekh loonga..(to himself) tammu ne kiya hain..arre wah…
Armaan leaves..
He sees tamanna coming from canteen..
UMAR BHAI:Dr.tamanna…
TAMANNA:Baaba..
He takes her to a corner…
UMAR BHAI:Tammu tumne baatya nehi..tumne operation kiya hain.. main bahut khush hoon beta.. aur uske liye party bhi rakhi gayi hain….
TAMANNA:Baba mujhe nehi jana party mein…
UMAR BHAI:Nehi beta tumhe jana hoga..tumhare liye to hain..tum zaroor jana ..theek hain…. khush raho beta….(he keeps hand on her head and blesses her)main chaltha hoon…bahut kaam hain….party ke saari tayariyan karni hain… meri tammu ne operation kiya hain….
TAMANNA:Baaba kash main aapko pura sach bata paati…..
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Anajli goes to atul to inform about party..
ANJALI: Atul…
ATUL:Haan anjali..
ANJALI: Wooh armaan ek party organise kee hain..aaj shaam ko….wooh busy hain..isliye mujhse kahan ki tumhe bata do…
ATUL:Hmm..theek hain anjali..(he leaves)
ANJALI:Tum aa rahe ho na…(he turns and both of them see eachother for sometime)
ANJALI:Main tumhari wait karoongi…
ATUL:Haan..mein zaroor aaounga anjali…….tumhare liye…
Anajli smiles and they both leave…
Abhis cabin….
ABHI:Jiah please mujhe kaam hain..
JIAH:Par baby…
ABHI:Please jiah..mujhe pareshan mat karo..mera koi mood nehi hain party mein…(he cuts the phone)
ABHI:Pata nehi yeh sab kya ho raha hain.… Kyun jiah ..kyun tum mere zindagi mein phir se aayi, kyun wooh sab karna chahthi ho jo kabhi nehi hoga,,,agar tumne divorce de diya hotha toh,,shayad aaj nikki aur main …..mujhse aise kya galthi ho gayi,,,jiski mujhe itni bada saza mil rahi hain,,,why ……..why??? ..kya nikki se sacha pyaar karna meri galthi hain……………kya pyaar karna itni badi gunah hain…
ARMAAN:Nehi Dr.Modi ..pyaar karna kabhi bhi gunah nehi hotha…(Entering cabin..)
ABHI:Dr.Armaan ..tum..wooh main..
ARMAAN:Ek baat poochu aapse Dr.Modi ,,……kya aap aaj bhi nikki se pyaar karthe hain..(he was serious)
ABHI:Dr.Armaan..main…
ARMAAN:Sach sach boliye Dr.Modi..apko aapki pyaar ki kasaam…
ABHI:Haan …main nikki se aaj bhi utna hi pyaar kartha hoon jisse usse pehle kartha tha,..aur kartha rahoonga..par nikki..mere aur jiah ke risthey ko lekar…
ARMAAN:Dr.Modi..main bhi pehle appko galat samjtha tha..par shayad aaj main aapko samajh paya hoon… jab hum kisi se pyaar karthe hain aur wooh humse door hotha hain…toh.. kaise lagtha hain…mujhe pata hain….
ABHI:
(Abhi needed someone to share his feelings,but nikki never listened to him and jiah never cared,,,he has been living a very congested life till now..he felt the need to share today,,otherwise he will never get a chance…)
jiah se shaadi karke main kabhi kush nehi tha ,,,kabhi nehi….usse kabhi bhi meri parwah nehi kiya…hum dono ke beech kabhi bhi ek pati-patni ka ristha nehi tha………………………………….
phir mein nikki se mila….usse milkar aisa laga jaise mujhe apni khoyi hui zindagi wapas mil gayi ho……..Maine nikki ko apni shaadi ke baare mein pehle hi bata diya tha Dr.Armaan.……maine usse waada kiya tha ki ek baar mein jiah se divorce le lu..phir hum hamesha saath rahenge….par achanak jiah phir se aagayi…(he got up from seat..and walked towards armaan saying)
nikki ko lagtha hain maine usse dokha diya..par yeh sach nehi hain….main nikki ko kabhi dokha nehi diya,,na hi dokha dene ke baare mein soch saktha hoon….usne mujhe phir se jeena sikhaya,pyaar karna sikhaya..main usse kabhi bhi dukhi nehi dekh saktha Dr.Armaan ..uski ek muskurahat ke liye main kuch bhi kar saktha hoon…woooh meri jaan hain..meri zindagi..
(he remebered all those moments he and nikki shared,and how jiah entered again in his life..)
par jiah jab aayi,,..toh main usse …..usse …kuch nehi keh paya.. n..usse meri zaroorat thi..wooh bahut akeli thi,,, wooh meri zimedari thi,,,,mein usse chod nehi saktha armaan ..aur uski tabiyat bhi…,,(he didn't go futher)
Armaan understood that's something bothering him and he cant share it with him,and he felt that this is not time to ask about it for some reason
ARMAAN:Dr.Modi its ok..apko mujhe apni aur jiah ke baare mein aur kuch batane ki zaroorat nehi hain……
ABHI:Armaan jiah wooh….sirf aur sirf meri… meri…
ARMAAN:Jiah sirf tumhari majboori hain Dr.Modi..,aur nikki tumhara pyaar….
Abhi felt that at last someone understood him..he nodded..
ABHI:Par kya nikki mujhse aaj bhi ……..pyaar…
ARMAAN:Wooh tumse bahut pyaar karthi hain Dr.Modi..par shayad batana nehi chahthi ..woh apne aap mein uljhi hui hain….wooh apse naraz hain….(He knows nikki well),,,wooh apne pyaar ko dabana chahthi hain ..nafrat naam dekar..par wooh aisa ……..Zyaada din nehi kar payegi..main jantha hoon usse..
ABHI:Mein kya karu armaan..maine nikki ko samjha ne ki koshish ki hain par…
ARMAAN:Pyaar chupaya nehi chuptha..,, Abhimanyu ….Tumhe usse yeh ehsaas dilna hoga ki tum aaj bhi usse pyaar karthe hoon,,tumhe uski parwah hain …tumhe uski feeling ki kadar hain….tum uske har sukh aur dukh mein uske saath ho…..wooh khud tumhare paas aayegi..dekhlena..
Abhi felt happy with those words but suddenly..
ABHI:Par jiah..
ARMAAN:Jiah tumse pyaar nehi karthi,,,,,,,,,,,usse ek sahare ki zaroorat hain….jo tum usse de rahe ho…bas aur kuch nehi..
He nods again..
ABHI:Main yeh sab…,,akele..
ARMAAN:Ridhima hamesha chahthi thi ki tum aur nikki ko saaath dekhe..shayad main hi uske baat aur aap dono ke pyaar ko samajh nehi paya..aur kuch aisa kar betha jo mujhe nehi karna chahiye…(He remembers the swimming pool incident) ..Main ismein aapki help karunga…..yeh ek dost ka vaada hain aapse..friends….
ABHI: .. (he gives him hand and abhi shakes it)Thank u Dr.Armaan..
ARMAAN:Sirf armaan..doston mein no formalities..right…
ABHI:Right….Toh phir aaj se tum mujhe sirf abhimanyu kahoge…(abhi gives him a hug and armaan too hugs him..)
Par armaan kaha chup rehne wala hain,,,he is as naughty as always…
ARMAAN:Abhi….arre yeh kya kar rahe ho..nikki dekhegi toh kya sochegi…chodo mujhe ..chodo..
He tries to free himself…abhi sees him for a second and they both burst out laughing…
ABHI:Armaan..thanks ……..maine kabhi socha nehi ki tum mere liye yeh sab ..
ARMAAN:Main aapke liye thodi nikki ke liye kar raha hoon….agar ab usse pareshaan kiya toh pehle mujhse mar khani hogi….
ABHI:Pehle hi bahut kha chuka hoon aur maaroge kya?(he remembers the boxing match)..abhi bhi dukha hain(keeping hand on his cheek with sad face)
ARMAAN:Usske liye sor…
ABHI:Abhi toh dost kahan phir sorry…
They both smile… And hugs again..
Jiah enters..
JIAH:Abhi…????yeh sab kya ho raha hain…????
ABHI:Jiah wooh…
ARMAAN:Main abhi ko..i mean Dr.Modi ko party mein bulane aaya tha…...(in a girly style moving near to him)toh aap aarehe hain na Dr.Modi
ABHI:Haan..ofcourse .!!!!
Armaan leaves waving hand to abhi ,saying "bye.."and giving him flying kiss.. jiah sees it and is shocked and confused..and so is abhi..
JIAH:Jab Maine poocha toh..tumne kaha nehi aaoge..usne pooch toh aane ke liye maan gaye,…
ABHI:Jiah aisi baat nehi hain..main to sirf..
JIAH:Abhi please…main ja rahi hoon,,shopping karne,,..party ke liye mujhe pick up kar lena.. (jiah leaves)
ABHI:Yeh armaan bhi na…pata nehi kya kya kartha hain,,(he sits smiling..)
Armaan sees jiah leaving cabin angrily…
ARMAAN:Abhimanyu….tum jiah ko nehi chod sakthe ………par wooh toh tumhe chod sakthi hain na…
He smiles..
Kya armaan abhi-nikki ko mila payega???
Kya armaan ka idea kamyab hoga???
thnks ...
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sri 😊
Edited by sri_4 - 15 years ago
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