My Prediction For AR Entry(Part13 link-Pg-33) - Page 6

sri...

its good but i really dont want riddhima to go in comma!!!!!

Originally posted by: ambryn

Excellent... i hope the CVs are reading and use this story line....

Keep writing..

Love,

Ambryn...

thanks a lot ambryn
sri

Originally posted by: Gurnish_

goood imgation

thnks alot !!!
hope my imagination works
sri

thanks for each and every one who liked it and yes i have also posted this in fanfiction corner..will post link...
sorry couldnt update due to net problem,,,,so updating 2 parts...
enjoy and please comment...
and yes I AM A GIRL!!!!
so "dude" seems to be a bit out of place for a girl...sorry...
and thanks u all liked it!!!


sri ❤️

Guys sorry for the late update,I was struggling with my net connection all these days,,,,
And thank god I got it now..,,
I will be including my title song which I wrote for DMG..(its like old one,but with some different touch,hope u like it)from now before my every part…
Thanks for everyone who read it and comented,and also others who "like"ed it..
I am posting my next two parts….hope u like it..

ARMAAN-RIDHIMAA : PART 3

"Laye hum Hasi laye hum Khushi jee le phir se zindagi…
Taaron se aage hum jaayenge cheen le ayenge roshni …
Dil ho jahaan dost ho vahaan aisa manzar hain yahan…
Manzil nayi,rasthe naye …
Phir bhi chale,hum saath mein…
Hum toh chale the dost banke…
Jaane kahan dill mill gayye!!!!"


Shashanks cabin….

VOICE:Aap..yahan kya kar rahe hain???

Armaan is shocked listening to voice,,,he keeps file back on table…he turns around….

He starts sweating..and sees the person..his tensed face turns to normal and he heaved a sigh of relief..

ARMAAN:Yuvraaj…………..tum yahan kya kar rahe ho..
YUVRAAJ:Woooh..main Dr.Shashank se milne aya tha..par aap yahan kya kar rahe hain..??
ARMAAN:Good question..main bhi wahi karne aaye hoon jo aap karne aaye hain..
YUVRAAJ: (He was a bit tensed)Main ..main kya karne aaya tha….
ARMAAN:Dr.Shashank se milne..
YUVRAAJ:Oh!!par wooh toh yahan nehi hain..
ARMAAN:Yeh toh mujhe bhi dikh raha hain..
YUVRAAJ: shayad wooh ab tak nehi aaye…

SARE INTERNS NURSE STATION PAR REPORT KARE..

ARMAAN:Shayad aapko kahi report karna hain..
YUVRAAJ:yes!!!(he turns to leave)
Just then armaans pager rings asking him to come to nurse station,..
YUVRAAJ:Aap nehi chal rahe……
ARMAAN: (to himself,)Shit!!ab main kya karoon!!!
YUVRAAJ:Sir..
ARMAAN: Haan chalo!!!(to himself)yeh toh mere pecha hi nehi chod raha..

Armaan sees the file on table,want to take it, but unwantedly goes out of room and yuvi follows him..

AT NURSE STATION

Every one comes fastly and stands ,.
Sid still didn't came …

NAINA:Yeh sid kahan hain..(asking tamanna and wearing her lab coat)
TAMANNA:Mujhe pata nehi..
NAINA:Arre jaldi nehi ayye toh maar padegi….
ATUL:Aur haan rectals bhi..

Just then..Armaan and yuvi comes
Yuvi joins them,hes standing beside naina..

Sid comes running and pushes yuvi and stands beside naina..
J.P: sidhant ji…aap late ho gaye..
SIDDANTH: (wearing his lab coat)Ya I knw..traffic jam..miss.kahdoos toh nehi ayi na..
NAINA:Nehi!!!yaaar ..chill..

Armaan sees atul and usually talks to him….
ARMAAN: Hye champ!!!kaise ho tum!!!
SIDDANTH:Champ!!!!
J.P: Aap ek doosre ko pehle se janthe he…
SIDDANTH:AJ toh kal armaan se baat bhi nehi ki.. (atul is tensed now)
Everyone are seeing armaan and atul with questioning look…yuvi too with his eyebrows raised..
ATUL:Wooh…Hum aaj …..
ARMAAN: (armaan realises what he said and tries to handle the situation)Aaj …..aaj subah parking par mile..wahin hamari dosti hui..
SIDDANTH:Aur "champ"!!!
ARMAAN:Wooh..……………..yeh bilkul champion ki sunny deol lagtha hain ,iss liye maine isko champ naam diya..haina champ!!!
ATUL:Haan !!!!haan…(laughing artificially)
SIDDANTH:Ohk!!!

J.P: Sunny deol!!

IMAGINATION..

Atul as sunny deol and all interns staff are back of him cheering and shouting with "A.J" wriiten on cards in boxing ground…
CHEERING:A.J,…A.J,….A.J…!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
J.P is his competitor…armaan is refree and he whistles indicating to start the fight..…
Atul came towards J.P and caught his collar
ATUL: "yeh dhai kilo ka haath agar kissi pe pad jaye toh,aadmi gir nehi uth jata hain…"
Atul beat him hard and we can see black circles around his eyes..
Armaan and atul were laughing in a very horror style..(we can see there closeup faces while laughing..)
Atul started beating him more and more ,armaan encouarging by shouting..
"Champ …cahamp!!!!",,
After getting beaten by Atul ,J.P heads spins and he is fainted…

IMAGINATION END..

(Out of his dream-he is still confused and is scratching his hair..)

Dr.Keerthi enters..

KEERTHI:Hello Dr.armaan..
ARMAAN:Hye maam…
(facing inerns)Interns !!!
KEERTHI:Dr.Tamanna and Dr.sidhant aaj se aap dono Dr.Armaan ko unki case mein asssit karenge..
Dr.Atul-aids ward, Dr.Yuvraaj and Dr.naina-general ward, Dr.prasad-path lab phir aap children ward mein jayenge..
Now go to u r duties..

Keerthi leaves..
Armaan thinks to talk to atul but thinks its wud be problematic for atul to talk infront of interns..he smiles at him..atul nods…
Atul and J.P leaves for their duties…yuvi following them,,,he sees seriously towards armaan..
Armaan notices yuvi seeing at him..and feels that there is something mysterious about him…
Naina is watching armaan and has not moved from her place..

SIDDANTH:Uff!!!yeh miss.khadoos bhi na..
SIDDANTH:Hello kya dekh rahi ho…(he shakes naina)
NAINA:Haan!!!
SIDDANTH:Chalo…tumhe general ward mein duty hain…
NAINA: Arre yaar haan us dafod ke saath…ok..bye!!!
She leaves staring back at armaan again..


ARMAAN:Aap dono mere cabin mein aayiye..
SIDDANTH:Miss.gayab chalo..
TAMANNA:Haan..
(walking)
ARMAAN:So Dr.sidhant,…………….abhimanyu….i mean Dr.Modi aapke bhai hain..
SIDDANTH: (he starts talking nonstop…)oh yes..mera cousin hain,,papa ne aur bhayi ne zid kareke mujhe sanjeevni mein internship ke liye join kiya,,nehi toh mera man to bilkul hi nehi tha,,aur wooh bhi india mein..oh god..aur koi jagah hi nehi millli..
ARMAAN: (Armaan cutting his words) Dr.Modi ki shaadi kab hui..
SIDDANTH:Bhai ki shaadi..nearly 1saal ho gaye hain..
ARMAAN: (he stops walking)1 saal (to himself) Matlab jab Dr.Modi yahaan aaya tha,uski shaadi ho chuki thi,phir bhi usne nikki se pyaar kiya,………..usse dokha de raha tha…aur nikki bhi..,,,mujhe Dr.Modi se baat karna hoga..oh god!!!
SIDDANTH:Kyun armaan..kya baat hain..
ARMAAN: Nehi kuch nehi..chalo.. (walking again)

They enter armaans cabin..armaan sits in his seat and sid and tamanna sits opposite to him..
Sid is as usual cool,but tamanna is afraid thinking how she will handle the case,,
Armaan takes out some files..and takes one out of them..sees and gives to sid and tamanna..

ARMAAN: Yeh case file hain.. Mr.Avinash ki,inhe brain tumor hain,,….case kaafi complicated hain….
(he gets up from seat and starts explaining) iska illaj sirf operation hain,par Mr.Avinash iss state mein nehi hain ki hum unhe operate kare..woh ek diabetic hain..aur sugar levels kaafi high hain..
Pehle humme unki sugar levels ko kam karna hoga,phir operate karna hoga..hamare paas time zyada nehi hain..,,so hume jald se jald yeh karna hoga..u both need to attend this case with full concentration and yes u will be helping me in operation too..is file mein unki sari reports hain and yes agar aapko koi doubt hain toh u can ask me..
Tamana was fully concentrating and taking notes,,,sid was playing with a pen nearby..

ARMAAN: Sid aur tamana aapko samajh mein aaya maine kya kaha..
Tamanna nods her head..
SIDDANTH:Haan !!armaan don't worry we will handle..haina miss.gayab..
ARMAAN:Main aapki help kartha rahunga..but u two have to handle this..so its team work..got it..
ARMAAN: Ok then main ab chaltha hoon.. page me agar kuch problem hain…
Tamana was already scared with her first case and sid being a part of it made her more worried as he never used to be serious in any thing….we see her tensed face…

Armaan thinks before shashank comes he has to take the file which is on table…
He goes towards shashanks cabin..but he stops when he sees shashank entering ..

He hides behind wall…and sees inside from corner of door…

Shashank sits and is checking all files,,when he sees ridhimas file…

SHASHANK:Yeh file yahan kaisa aya hain..

He sees here and there and towards door..armaan quickly backs off from door..and sees again after shashank is seeing towards file..
Shashank takes the file and keeps in locker ,but locks it and takes keys with him and keeps in his coat and gets up…
Armaan again hides behind wall,shashank leaves not noticing armaan..
Armaan seeing inside towards locker..

ARMAAN: Shit!!!!ab mein kya karu..ek achcha mauka mila tha..wooh bhi haat se chala gaya…

Everyone was tired after the long day full of work..

J.P was still in childrens ward and was trying hard to get away from there but the children were not letting him go…and one was pulling his right hand and other his left..and other children rounded him..

J.P: Arre..chodo..chodo mujhe,,kya kar rahe hoo..mujhe jana hain..
1st child: Pehle hume kahani sunao..
2nd child: Mujhe chocolate laake do..
ALL:Mujhe bhi….Mujhe bhi..
J.P: Aree koi..bachao….mujhe…

Tamanna ,sid ,yuvi and naina who were leaving to their homes stopped by his shouts…


J.P: Naina ji….tamanaji..bachao..mujhe..yeh bach..(before he could complete sentence children made him sit down and were beating him)
SIDDANTH:Hahaha!!!wow india ke bache toh bahut strong hain..
TAMANNA:Tum india ke nehi ho kya..
SIDDANTH:I mean..
J.P: Bachao…
NAINA:Guys chalo…

Sid and naina helped J.P stand and were trying to control children,,,,but they couldn't and children were shouting more and more..yuvi was enjoying all this without saying a word and then left.. ..
Tamanna tried to sort out the situation..


TAMANNA:Bacho…kisko kahani sunni hain,..wooh yahan aa jaye,,,


All children who were around J.P,sid and naina left and gathered around tamanna who was standing near a bed ,shouting and screaming with joy..

SIDDANTH:Yeh kahani sunayegi toh sab bachche darr jayenge..hahaaha..
J.P: Tum kuch karthe toh nehi ho,,,,jo karthe hain,,ussse kyun pareshan kar rahe ho..
SIDDANTH:Come on ….ab tum mat shuru ho jana…

1st child: Kahani,,,,!!!
2nd child: Kaunsi kahani.??
3rd child: Pariyon wali..
pinky:Nehi rajkumari wali…
ALL:Batao na didi????
TAMANNA:Pehle sab chup chap apne bed par jao…

All children went to their beds fastly and covered with blankets,,,

ALL:Sab log chup chap sunenge…pinky..shaitani nehi chalo bed par jao..(the little girl goes back to bed)
(tamanaa starts telling story)Ek baar ek sundar si ladki thi….
pinky:App se bhi sundar..
TAMANNA: (She blushes,)haan mujhse se bhi bahut sundar..uska naam the "cindrella"..

Sid,naina,J.P were also listening to her,,

NAINA:Arre yeh kahani toh mujhe pata hain…
J.P: Mujhe bhi ji,mujhe sab kahaniyan paata hain..panchatantra ke bhi,,,main hamesha story writing mein first aata tha,,,…main bhi batata hoon tamana ji..
Naina smiles at him artificially..

Naina and J.P joins tamanna telling the next part of story and all are enacting it ..

J.P: Uski ek sauteli maa thi ,,bahut buri…HAHAHA!!(showing his hands in air,children were afraid..)
NAINA:Aur haan uski do sauteli behen bhi the,bahut tang karthe the usse,saare kaam karathe the….satathe the..

1st child: Bahut bure the wohh….bechari cindrella…
2nd child: Usske paas koi nehi tha..
TAMANNA:Hain na..usske friends the..
pinky:Friends ..kaun kaun the..

Tamanna started telling the story again..J.P and naina helping her in between….

Sid was seeing tamana ,actually staring,not even blinking his eyes,,,the way she talked ,her hair moving with wind ,how she moved her hair back to her ears…the way she was enacting,the way she was going to children and helping them cover blankets….he could only see her and nothing else…

Someone else who was seeing her was……. Atul…Who was passing by and stopped seeing her…

He remembered all his old days he and his friends has spent in that ward…

How Armaan planned and surprised ridhima..
How they all danced to make dhruv back to normal….
Mini,gappu,nana…how they all enjoyed with them..
All those beautiful moments…
Tears start flowing from his eyes remembering those moments…

A hand was kept on his shoulder,……..he quickly wiped his eyes and turned back to see ..
ATUL:Armaan…who mein bas..
ARMAAN: Apne bhai se ansoon chupa rahe ho….
Atul cant control himself,he was waiting for this moment for 6 months…he hugged him tightly and so did armaan..
ATUL:Armaan..mere bhai..kahan chala gaya tha tu..apne champ ko akela chod kar kaha chala gaya..
Armaan also couldn't control his tears..They both come back to positions..and started walking ..
ARMAAN:Champ!!i am sorry main tumhare saath us waqt nehi de paya jab tumhe meri bahut zaroorat thi..mujhe maaf.. (he felt bad that he couldn't be there at time he failed)
ATUL:Yeh kaisi baatein kar rahe ho….bhala apne bhai ko koi sorry botha hain kya…
Armaan smiled…
ARMAAN:Pata nehi yaar….kitna badal gaya hain sab kuch..pehle kya tha..aur ab kya hain..
ATUL:Hum kitne masthi karthe the…,kitne shaitaniya karthe the,,
ARMAAN:Ladkiyon se kitna jhagdthe the ..
They remembered all those moments starting from joining sanjeevni..
ATUL:Arre haan yaar…wooh basket ball match..yaad hain..
ATUL:Aur lonavla ka trip..truth aur dare…
ARMAAN:Jab humne girls banke gaye,tum-shobha tai..
ATUL:Aur tum-gurpreet..
ARMAAN:Aur rahul-stella…kitna hot lag raha tha…
ATUL:Pub mein party..
ARMAAN:Haan humne ladayi ki aur jail bhi gaye the yaar..
ATUL:Agar Dr.shasahnk nehi aaate toh ..
ATUL:Padma aunty ke shaadi mein kitni masti kee thi humne..

Armaan was feeling sad remembering all those days he spent with ridhima and his friends and shashanks name made him more sad…making him remember the day he asked to break his relation with ridhima..
Atul noticed and changed the topic..

ATUL:Aur jab hum picnic ke liye gaye the….
ARMAAN:Aur ladkiya hume chod kar akele hi chali gayi lorry mein..(he was smiling again).
ATUL:Anajli kitni hot lag rahi thi na swim wear mein…
ATUL:Aur Valentines day party…..
ARMAAN:Sanjeevni ka concert….. hum sab ne kitna mehnat kiya..
ATUL:Doctor modi ko kitna sataya…..…
ARMAAN:Jab hum mere summer house gaye…aur wooh kabaddi match…..
ATUL:Arre yaad mat dilla,pata nehi sukeerthi ko bachanae ke chakar men mujhe aur rahul ko paat nehi kya kya jhelna pada….uske baad toh padma aunty aur anjali mujhe kuch aur hi samajhne lagi….
Atul face was sad..
Armaan was laughing out ,,,,after few seconds atul too joined him…
ATUL:Shubankar sir aur keerthi madam ki shaadi…..kitna achcha hua tha..
ARMAAN:Kya din the yaar….
ATUL:Armaan…………rahul aur muski ki bahut yaad aathi hain….
ARMAAN:Pata nehi wooh kaise hain….
ATUL:Sab milkar kitna masti karthe the na.
ARMAAN:Khair chodna yeh sab..ab main aa gaya hoon…phir se hum milkar sab theek kardenge..aur haan deklena rahool aur muskaan bhi jaldi hi hamare saath honge…
Atul noded..
ARMAAN:Atul……(after a long pause….atul was also worried what armaan would ask as he said "atul" and not "champ")kya tum anjali ko apne pyaar..
ATUL: (Atul understood what armaan was upto and tried to divert the topic)Chodo na Armaan in baaton ko..
ARMAAN:Champ…ab tu mujhse bhi baatein chupayega..,,apne bhai se??
ATUL: Armaan …………Anjali ab ek badi doctor ban gayi hain..aur main abhi bhi intern hi hoon………..wooh sahi kehthi thi…………….main kisi kaam ke layak hi nehi………
ARMAAN:Champ!!aisa mat kaho yaar….
ATUL:Kya fark padtha hain….pata nehi wooh mujhse..
ARMAAN:Padtha hain ,,,,,,bahut farak padtha hain..champ..,..tum agar koshish nehi karoge,,to kaise pata chalega…
ATUL:Par..
ARMAAN:Par war kuch bhi nehi…..
ATUL:Main yeh sab..
ARMAAN:Main hoon na..akhir tumhara bhai kuch toh kaam ayega..
ATUL:Armaan ...(he hugged him) thanks yaar..
ARMAAN:Bas bas…. ..bahut din ho gaye..chalo saath chalthe hain..mere ghar…??
ATUL:Chalo…
ARMAAN:Champ..tum chalo mein bas abhi aata hoon..
ATUL:Kahan jaa rahe hoo??
ARMAAN:Basket….. se milne..
(Atul smiled…he definetly has changed..if he would be same atul he would have asked that he too will come with him….but ..)
ATUL:Mein wait kartha hoon..
Armaan smiled,,,,

Armaan in ridhimas cabin….

ARMAAN:Ridhima…main har koshish kar raha hoon tumhe jaldi se theek karne ki…humare doston ko saath lane ki,,,,,,bas tumhe ab theek hona hoga….tab hum sab milkar party karenge….ladke vs ladkiyan..aur hamesha ki tarah tum hi jeet jana…
He starts crying…
A tear drop fells on ridhimas hand….
Armaan kisses on her forehead…
ARMAAN:I love u ….ridhima…
He gets up ..
ARMAAN:Goodnite basket….. leaves the room shutting the door..

Ridhimas hand moves a bit and stops..(its same place where armaans tears fell)

Kya ridhima theek ho payegi???
Kya hain armaan ka agla kadam???
Kya wooh apne maksad mein kamyab hoga???


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ARMAAN-RIDHIMAA : PART 4

"Laye hum Hasi laye hum Khushi jee le phir se zindagi…
Taaron se aage hum jaayenge cheen le ayenge roshni …
Dil ho jahaan dost ho vahaan aisa manzar hain yahan…
Manzil nayi,rasthe naye …
Phir bhi chale,hum saath mein…
Hum toh chale the dost banke…
Jaane kahan dill mill gayye!!!!"


Back in childrens ward…..

Tamanna completed her story..
TAMANNA:Rajkumar ne cindrella ko apne mahal le gaye aur wooh khushi khushi rehne lage..
All clapped after her story…
1st child: Rajkumar toh bahut achcha hain..
2nd child:Apko rajkumar kab le jayega..
Tamana blushed at the question..

TAMANNA:Kahani khatm…ab chalo sab achche bachon ki tarah so jau..chalo…
She off the lights and asked all to move out…
J.P and naina smiled at her and left..

Tamana was also leaving when a little girl catches her hand and asks again..
pinky:Baato na didi ,,aapko le jane kab aayega rajkumar..

SIDDANTH:Bahut jald…
Tamanna turns and finds sid..
TAMANNA:Kya..???
SIDDANTH:Kuch nehi chale..
Tamanna leaves,sid blinks his one eye to that little girl and leaves..the girl smiles and sleeps..


Outside in corridor..
SIDDANTH:Wow!!!tum toh bahut achacha story suanti ho..training lee hain kahi….jab mere kids honge na tab mein tumhe hi bualunga story sunane…hahaaha!!
Tamana sees him with her one eyebrow raised..
SIDDANTH:Sorry!!!.....achacha toh miss gayab ,itni achchi story sunane ke liye tumhe ek gift milthi hain..
TAMANNA:Kya??
SIDDANTH:Lift??
TAMANNA:Lift??
SIDDANTH:Haan main tumhe ghar drop kar doonga..
TAMANNA:Nehi main chali jaungi..
SIDDANTH: "Nehi main chali jaungi.."(imitating her)dekho mere paas gadi hain,aur tumhara ghar rasthe mein padtha hain..toh chalo..
TAMANNA:Ok!!!
SIDDANTH:Tum itni jaldi maan gayi..!!!!maine toh…….
TAMANNA:Sidhant.. ..
He moves his hand from left to right on lips like zipping it..
Tamana smiles…


Outside sanjeevni……..

Naina is waiting for her friend JIGNESH to come and pick her up,,but he hasn't come and its really late as they were busy in childrens ward all this time..
She tries to call him,,but its not reachable..

NAINA:Arre….. yeh jigni kaha chala gaya..ab mein kya karu..

She starts walking for sometime to find a taxi..but she didn't got any one..
She thght to ask someone lift..,sees a byke and asks lift..
NAINA:Stop..stop..
The byke stops ,,and the person removes helmet..
NAINA:Tum….??
He sees at her,,,and asks..
YUVRAAJ:Lift chahiye.?
NAINA:Tumse bilkul nehi..main akeli chali jaungi..
YUVRAAJ:Sochlo..
NAINA:Soch liya..main tum jaise dafod ke saath nehi jaungi……

Just then a jeep comes making lots of noise,,,,,naina asks lift from it..,,the jeep goes passing her and comes back….

There were 4-5 guys in it…
1ST GUY: (One of the guy asking others to be silent..and facing naina..)Lift chahiye…(asking nicely)
NAINA:Haan…
2ND GUY:Chalo..hum tumhe drop kar denge..

Naina sees yuvraaj who is still waiting…she doesn't want to go with those guys as shes a bit afraid but to show yuvarj that she can do anything alone..she goes with them…

YUVRAAJ:Mat jao…
NAINA:Tumhe kya…main jahan bhi jau…(facing the guys)..chalo guys..
ALL:Wowii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
They go with full speed…naina looking back at yuvi…and giving him a smile..

After covering some distance..

NAINA:Yahan roko….(but they did't listen and go more fastly.).
NAINA:Maine kahan roko…mujhe jana hain..
1ST GUY: Hey baby!!!humne tumhe jaane ke liye thooda lift diya hain…kyun??
ALL:Hahahah!!!yehh…!!
They stop the car near a deserted place..and tries to take naina out of jeep forcefully..
NAINA: Chodo mujhe..tumhe nehi pata ,,mujhe..mujhe ..karate mein black belt hain..
3RD GUY:Achcha toh hume bhi toh sikha…hahaha!!!

They take her out of jeep,3 guys are catching her and shes trying to free herself…

1ST GUY: Dekho babes..agar tum cooperate karogi toh….tumhe no problem..aur na hume..
NAINA:Achcha (in sweet voice)..toh pehle chodo mujhe..
1ST GUY: Hey!!!!yeh toh humari type ki lag rahi hain..chodo usse..
All left her and the main guy is coming close to her…
1ST GUY: Agar sab ladkiyan tumhari jaisi hogi toh humari toh koi problem hi nehi hogi..(touching her cheek)

Naina hits hard in his stomach and runs away,,some are trying to handle the guy who fell on ground with pain..
1ST GUY: Pakdo usse…pakdo…
All go back of naina leaving him…

Naina runs and runs and bumps ito someones byke ..
NAINA:Please help me..please…..

The 4 guys stand infront of the person in byke a little far..Naina is standing beside him..
The byke guy gets down and stands opposite them and naina back of him helding his arm..

2ND GUY:Hey ladki ko hamre pass bhej do,,,..
He removes the helmet and shakes his head,,,,naina sees him,,,Its yuvraaj….
3RD GUY:Zyada hero mat ban!!!chal ladki ko bhej..

YUVRAAJ:Maine thodi roka hain tumko…lejana hain toh le jau…mujhe kya?
Naina leaves his arm and moves back..
NAINA:Tum ….

2ND GUY:Hahahaah!!!yeh toh bahut darpok hain re…
3RD GUY:Ismein toh bilkul himmat nehi..
4TH GUY:Chal bachcha jaa,……..apne mamma ke pass……….,raat bahut ho gayi hain……..hahaha!!!
Saying this they all come towards naina who is Still looking at yuvi with hope…

One of the guy tries to catch naina with his hand..but..

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We see the guy on ground growling with pain…

The other 3 guys come and attack yuvi…surrounding from all sides..
He see them from corner of eyes….
One of them try to attack him,but he was acting fast and punched him hard in his chest..which made him tremble…and fell down..
The other two guys came together,but yuvi was prepared..
He kicked one of them with his right leg and punched other…both were growling with pain…
The two who fell regained and took positions to beat him..
4TH GUY:Tumne toh kaha tha,,tum hume nehi rokoge…
5th GUY: Lejana hain toh le jaou ..

YUVRAAJ:Kahan tha..,,,par yeh nehi kahan ki tum meri mazak udao…

Naina who was happy that yuvi was helping out,,,got furious to know that he had beaten them not for her but because they have insulted him..
NAINA:U …(She started coming toward him…)
Suddenly yuvi pulls her toward her and she is jammed on his chest,,they both gets lost in eachothers eyes ..but ..
YUVRAAJ: Awwa!!!
Yuvi arm was hurting as the main guy has come back and has hit him with KNIFE…he has pulled naina to protect from knife…
He moves naina back and takes out knife,blood started flowing..naina was shocked to see…

All 5 guys are ready to attack him…yuvi beats all of them to black and blue….they left him running ..
But still yelling..

1ST GUY: Main tum dodno ko chodunga nehi..awwww!!!

Naina comes close to yuvi…yuvi is keeping his hand on his arm which was bleeding…
Naina tries to see his wound,,but he moves back..
NAINA:Tumhe toh bahut chot lagi hain….
She takes out her scarf from her neck and bandages it on his arm,,, He sees into her eyes…
YUVRAAJ: Chalo main tumhe drop kardunga..
Naina didn't say a word all way and he dropped her home,,,
She got down and saw him ….

NAINA:Thanks..Agar aaj tum nehi aate toh….pata nehi ..woh log..
YUVRAAJ: Pata nehi tum un logon ka kya karthi…..becahre… bach gayye..
NAINA:Kya?kya kahan tumne…wooh bechare aur main..
YUVRAAJ: Nautanki….
NAINA:Tumhari to main…..
YUVRAAJ: Maine kahan na mujhe tumme koi interest nehi hain…
NAINA:Mujhe bhi nehi hain….. …good night….

She leaves banging her foot om ground….

He sees her going safely to home and smiles,goes away………
She goes into home…and bumps into someone….
JIGNI:Naina…
NAINA: (who was lost in her world till now ..gets angry seeing him..)jigni tum…tum kahan the..mein tumhari wait kar rahi thi,,
JIGNI:Wooh naina,soory che…main apni friend se milne gaya,,,,
NAINA:Pata nehi aaj wooh dafod nehi aaya hota toh kya ho jata..tum na,…
JIGNI:Kya hua,,tum theek to ho….
NAINA:Haan mein theek hoon,,par kal se time pe aajana…,,main bahut thak gayi hoon,,,sone jaa rahi hoon…bye….


Sidhant and tamanna

Sid drops tamanna…
TAMANNA:Yahan roko,,
SIDDANTH:Mein ghar tak drop kar doonga,,
TAMANNA:Nehi main chali jaungi… (To herself) agar baba ne dekh liya toh….(to sid) thanks…
She gets down the car,,,but her duppata stucks in car when she tries to close door....she is trying hard to remove it,, she tries to open door …. but its jammed…
Sid was sitting in back seat and was seeing her struggling with dupatta and is laughing loud…
TAMANNA:Has kyun rahe ho…help karo na…
SIDDANTH:Main kyun karu…jaake ke tum apne gaayab puppy se pooch lo…..help!!!!jaise us din tume uske liye kiya tha..,,
She was still trying with as serious face after hearing sid's words..
Tears started flowing from her eyes…
He sees her and is lost in her again….but as soon as he sees her tears…
SIDDANTH:Rukoo..main madad kartha hoon..
He comes and pushes the door hardly 2 times and it comes out,,,
TAMANNA:Thanks(she takes out dupatta)
TAMANNA:Ab ronna band karo..pata nehi hamesha roti kyun ho,,,,,,bye!!!!
He sits back in car seat,,tamana too leaves…he stares her going for sometime…..

SIDDANTH:Pata nehi jab bhi iss tamanna ko dektha hoon…kuch ajeeb si feeling aati hain..
Sid yeh tu kya soch raha hain..…stop it dude..!!!

Nainas place…

Back in her room,she changed her clothes and was thinking about what happened laying on bed….
How he helped her,how he fought,how he got hurt because of her..

NAINA:Waise jitna socha tha yeh dafod itna bura bhi nehi hain…naina..kya soch rehi hain..soo ja…!!


Next day…


Sanjeevni…

Tamana and sid
Tamanna is busy seeing patients reports which armaan handled them and talking to nurse..

TAMANNA:Sister,,inki sugar reports leke aayeye..
SISTER:Ji Dr.Tamanna…
She sees here and there…sid is busy chatting with a girl in side ward and flirting with her…

TAMANNA:Sidhant..sidhant…
SIDDANTH: Ek minute…(Saying to girl..who nods..he comes near tamana ..)
kya hain aise chilla kyun rahi hoon,,,mein gayab nehi hua hoon uss puppy ki tarah..saamne toh baitha hoon..
TAMANNA:Kya kar rahe the..
SIDDANTH:Kaam..
TAMANNA:Kausa kaam..
SIDDANTH:Bahut important..tumhe kya..
TAMANNA:Sidhant..yeh case hum dono ko handle karna hain..aur tum meri madad bhi nehi kar rahe ho…
SIDDANTH:Oh please…aise chote mote kaam tum akele handle karu,,,mein sirf complicated case hi kartha hoon..(raising his collar…)
TAMANNA:Complicated…matlab..
SIDDANTH:Matlab..koi badi si surgery…wooh bhi Dr.Shashank ke saath …..
TAMANNA:Aur Dr.Armaan..
SIDDANTH:Main aise chote mote doctors ke saath kaam nehi kartha u see..
Tamanna sees towards door and suddenly..
TAMANNA:Good morning Dr.Armaan..
SIDDANTH: (sid hearing armaans name stands still)Hello Dr.Armaan…mein wooh bas mazak…
He sees back and finds no one…tamanna and others are laughing..
SIDDANTH:Tumko toh mein…
TAMANNA:Kya karoge Mr.Sidhant….
SIDDANTH:Its sid ..not sidhant…
TAMANNA:Sidhant…
SIDDANTH:Sid…
TAMANNA:Sidhant…
SIDDANTH:Sid,,,sid,,,sid….
They both are fighting with there voices on top…all are seeing them suddenly…
The patient who has been enjoying seeing both of them fight..has sudden pain in his head…he keeps his hand on his head…and is crying and shouting,,,
"aaaawhh…………."

TAMANNA:Oh god!!!kya ho gaya hain..sidhant..
SIDDANTH:Sid…
Tamana gives a killing look…
SIDDANTH:Ok!!!Chill..
He starts checking the patients pulse and his condition…he laid down on bed…
TAMANNA:Lagtha hain inki condition kaafi serious hain..(suddenly it strikes to tamanna) Dr.Armaan….(facing nurse)sister..aap Dr.Armaan ko please jaldi bulayiye..
SISTER:Yes doctor..(she leaves)
Tamanna is sweating with fearing and tears coming out from eyes..sid sees it,,
SIDDANTH:Its ok!!!sab theek ho jayega..dont worry..
She nods…

Armaan comes just in time..
ARMAAN:Kya hua hain…what happened…he starts checking patients pulse and heart beat…
TAMANNA:Sir…achanak inki sar mein pain hone laga…
SIDDANTH:Inhi pulse bhi kaafi low hain…
ARMAAN:Hume jald se jald inki operation karni hogi…abhi issi waqt..tamana and sid ,,get ready..sister aap operation threater ready kijeeye…fast…patient ko shift keejiye..
SISTER:Yes sir…
ARMAAN: sister inke report leke aayiye…. Sid tum mere saath aaoo….we need to do some tests…..(he goes with armaan..)

TAMANNA:Operation!!! ….
Tamana was scared ,she was trembling with fear,,,,she saw the patient who was being taken in stretcher…who was in critical condition …
TAMANNA:Main kaise kar paungi…..mujhe bahut dar lag raha hain..



After sometime…
At operation threater..

Outside patients relatives are standing….they stop tamanna who is going inside..it was the patients wife…
PATIENTS WIFE:Meri pati ko bacha leejiye…(she starts crying.)
Theres also a small girl..
PATIENTS DAUGHTER:Meri papa ko kuch nehi hoga na..
Sid and armaan sees it…
Armaan tried to console the patients wife..and sid the little girl..tamana was still tensed.seeing them….
SIDDANTH:Kuch nehi hoga aapke papa ko…
ARMAAN:Bharosa rakhiye…..

They enter the O/T…
ARMAAN:Dr.Tamanna and Dr.Sidhant …..are u ready,,
Both nod while getting dressed in surgical gowns…
ARMAAN:Dr.tamanna ,…aap patient ki pulse track karthe rahiye…aur kuch bhi ho toh inform keejiye,,,
She nodded…
ARMAAN:Dr.sidhant..(armaan noded…and sid too..)
They started the surgery….it was a very long one and took a lot of time…

Outside ..
The patients family were worried…


At shashanks cabin………

SHASHANK:Yeh sab kya ho raha hain…meri permission ke bagair..wooh aise kisi ka operation kaise kar saktha hain….
KEERTHI:Dr.Armaan ne mujhe inform kiya tha.. Dr.Shashank…maine aap se contact karne ki koshish kii..par aapka phone nehi lag raha tha….case kaafi complicated hain….agar waqt par operate nehi kiya gaya toh….patient ki jaan ko khatara hain…
SHASHANK:I don't understand..kissi senior doctor ki help ke bagair..how could he do this all alone….
KEERTHI:Dr.Sidhant aur Dr.Tamanna unko assist kar rahe hain sir..
SHASHANK:Wooh abhi interns hain…….wooh aise kisi patient ke zindagi ke saath khel nehi saktha..,,,,,,,,,,pehle hi usne meri beti ke saath jo kiya hain..wooh kum hain kya??
He couldn't talk further,he gets frustated and leaves the place..


Operation threater..


ARMAAN:Dr.tamanna….(asking abt pulse)
TAMANNA:Its fine sir….
Armaan removed the tumour….the operation was in last stage ans crucial to know if patient has capacity to handle and survive..…
Sid was helping and tamana was still tensed that she couldn't concentrate for some time now and was sweating…suddenly..
SIDDANTH:Tamanna….!!!!!!!!!pulse…
TAMANNA: (she sees towards monitor)Dr.Armaan pulse gir raha hain…..

All are very tensed,the patients condition is dropping ,armaan,sid and others are trying hard to save him,,,
Armaan gives a look to tamanna…all are seeing her..

TAMANNA: Maine yeh kya kar diya….

Kya patient bach payega???
Kya hoga aage???

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very nice waiting for next part

Originally posted by: Lalita4

sri...

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thanks u liked it lalita4
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Originally posted by: roseflower_07

very nice waiting for next part

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