Weekend With RAHUL MUSKAAN 31 ! * Last Part 30/7* - Page 11

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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome part tina! loved it..
i love the way you continue your story.. amazing!!
Continue soon guys :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
@radhika
thnx!!
@rose.three
thnku so much !!... y dunt u try ryttin smetym :)
@namrata
thnx dear !!... hmm if no1 ryts i'l cntinue as usual !! :)
@ejaz_lover
thnx a lot..
@rapi_c
thnx a lot...i was relly thinkin of da same.....will think of sme concept nd maybe then u'l see one official only RM FF ... :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow.. we have awesome writers!!
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someone please continue!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
imane, it's been so long since u wrote here.. could u continue, plz? 😳😳😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow yaar...its ssoooooooooo lovely....plzzzzzzzzz continue...........
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Posted: 16 years ago
hmm...since no1s cntinuin...here i strike for da 4th or 5th tym ... :D
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Drashti-Please mayank...jab kuch tha hi nahi tu yeh log humein itna tang kartey the...ab toh....
Mayank smiled..
Mayank-Tumhe wahi baat sata rahi hain,....ya phir you dont want to be open about us..
Drashti-I want to...i dont mind...but give me some time to getting used to being your girlfriend!!
He smiled..
Mayank-Thekhe nahi bulaonga tumhe girlfriend...lekin meri wishes ki khilaf kuch kiya toh bula dunga...jaisa main kehta hoon waisa karna padega..
Drashti sighed...she could see the cheesy grin on his face..
Drashti- Thekhe!!
Mayank-Alright then...aaj raat 10 bajje...i'l pick you for icecream..
She nodded..
Mayank-Ab wapas chalein yah phir direcetor se khaani hain..
Drashti - Chalo chalo..
The walked back to the set...this time drashti much more calmer and they gave their shoot properly...
Mayank promised to pick her up at 10 sharp !!..
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She was a little late as usual......but it was worth the wait...she looked stunning....minimal make up ...simple jeans and white sleveless tee...thats what he loved about her..
She sat into the car..
Mayank-Lookin super !!
Drashti smiled..
Drasht--Thanx!!
Mayank drove down to a slightly isolated place..
Drashti-Umm...woh...hum kahan jaa rahe hain?
Mayank-Bas itna bharosa hain mujhpar....tum ladkiyyon ko hoo kya jata hain?... thodi si sunsan jagah dekh li toh ladke par shak karti hoon... ;)
Drashti-Nahi...ah ...woh ...aisa kuch nahi hain...puch rahi hoon.....no problem mat batao..
Mayank-Drashi !!..... tum bhi na.....dekho tumne kaha tha na ki you want to get used to being my girlfriend and then tell everyone....toh aggar main tumhe koi icecream parlour le jaoon...toh there will be half a dozen people who will recognize us na....so i dint want that..
Drashti looked a him lovingly...he cared so much for her..
Drashti-Mayank... i know...tumhe yeh chupa kar rakhna pasand nahi...but i mean...it was just last night...we can have some time for ourselves right....i know we are celebrities and theres so much else too it...mujhe bhi pasand nahi ...i want to tell the world...but i guess just a few days....uskeey baad we'l tell everyone..
He nodded..
Mayank-No probs babes !!..... for now i m taking you to a local place haan....in a little isolated place......thoda durr hain...but wahan par sab aam aadmi rehtey hain...so no issues..
She smiled..
They soon reached that place and mayank got them their icecreams and they settled on a bench on the roadside..
Drashti-Kitni innovative date hain yeh..
Mayank laughed !!
Mayank-Date means spending time jaanaa.....woh jahan bhi hoon aur jaisey bhi hoon....we can even have a date on the set...
They laughed..
Drashti-Seriosuly....main kabhi kisi ke saath koi 5star hotel main toh chali jaoon...but aisey jagah par tum hi lee aa saktey hoon...
Mayank smiled..
Drashti-I like simple things mayank !!... like you said its important to spend time.....i like it here !!..
He smiled...
There was a silence which suddenly gripped the place...there was nobody in sight...the icecream vendor gone.....they were both conscious of each other..
And suddenly she could feel mayank coming closer...she looked at him....his head coming closer....she closed her eyes..
And suddenly she felt his finger on his nose..
Mayank removed some icecream from there and showed her with a naughty grin...
She blushed....
Mayank-Tune kya socha???
Drashti looked down...
In a few minutes it began to pour..
Drashti-This is so filmy !!....
Mayank smiled..
Mayank-Maybe even the gods want us to unite !!
Mayank stood up and offered his hand for a dance..
Drashti-Yahan?
Mayank-Kyun....its innovative na??
She smiled and gave in..
He walked her to the middle of the road...
And pulled her close...
He dint reallly dance with her...he just stood close to her....
There eyes interlocked throughout.......the contact dint break for even a second !!...
Their closeness kept reducing.....at one point muskaan could feel his breath on her shoulders.....
He kissed her bare shoulders.....she shuddered by his touch .....and the rain too add to it...
She shut her eyes....this is what she had always longed for.....to be in his arms....with him forever....
He slowly moved towards her neck and her cheeks....his lips doing all the work !!.....
He looked at her....soon his lips touched hers....the feeling which passed thru her body was inexplainable.....the cold icecream the rain drops and their burning passion sent up shivers up her spine....she responded to him and they shared their first official kiss on their first INNOVATIVE DATE !! !!...
She was completely seduced !!..
His hands were playing on her waist......she could feel him all over...their body sticking to each others..as his hands slid under her tee he heard her say..
Drashti-- Mayank !!..
She said in the most seductive tone !!
He smiled..
He removed his hand..
Mayank just looked at her....she looked happy and satisfied...she loved the closeness...
They both were totally drenched....he looked super hot with his t-shirt clinging to his body.....while she was very uncomfortable with the white tee exposing too much of her skin by clinging to it..
Too top it up Mayanks gaze was killing...he couldnt help but adorn her perfect curves shown off by her wet tee....
He realized she was uncomfortable...and immeidately looked at her in the eye..
Mayank-Its ok...relax.....its me.....chalo...gaddi main baith te hain...
She nodded and followed him.....
They sat in the car...it was still pouring badly.......and they were wet and shivering....
Mayank-Gosh...i hope yeh timepass ki baarish hoon...not those serious bombay rains..
Drashti-Yeh rukney types ki nahi lag rahi....jaaldi wapas chalna chahiye...
Mayank- I cant drive in this rain...its crazy....its increasing !!
Drashti looked tensed and scared...
Mayank-Umm kahin.......i mean..kahin aaas pass aaj raat rukey kya?..
Drashti looked at him..
Mayank wanted to hit his head.
"aaj raat rukey kya" --- pagal ho gaya hain toh mayank.....drashti ko itna ajeeb lagega..bichari is feeling so odd still.....
Mayank-Umm mera matlab hain ki atleast hum baarish se bach jayengey na..
Drashti -Aur koi chara nahi hain. ..na....its ok..
They got out of the car locked it and walked ....
They soon found a small house....
They decided to try their luck....
Drashti-Are you sure?
Mayank-Drashti....yeh jagah bahut his chooti se jagah hain..its like a village in itself...yahan humein koi nahi janta i can bet.....yahan par sab kam kamaney walley hardowrking log rahtein hain...they dont have time for DMG.....chalo...
They knocked and some old woman opend the door..
Woman- Kya hain chorra?.... itni raat gayye humka kyun tang kar rahe hoon??
Mayank-Woh..bahut tez baarish ho rahi hain..
Woman-Acha...hum toh andhe hain...humein pata hi nahi tha baarish ho rahi hain....
Mayank-Ahh..nahi woh....autny jee.....humein kuch waqt rukney ki jagah chahiye thi..
Woman-Aeey chora....tum idhar ka rehney wala nahi hain....koi shehri launda lagta hain.....kyun mujhe sata raha hain??
Mayank-Aunty please....humein kuch waqt rehney dee jeiy na..
Woman-Shadi shuda toh tu lagta nahi...yeh ka teri behen hain??
Mayank-Nahi ...ah woh..
Woman-Behen nahi hain...hayee rama !!..... tum kisi parai ladki ke saath itni raat gayyee....
Mayank-Nahi nahi...nahi aunty jee woh yeh meri patni hain.....
Woman-Patni...
Mayank-Jee patni...
Woman-Aise kapde pehnti hain...aur koi suhaag ki nishaani nahi hain..
Mayank-Arrey aunty mere saath hain....toh meri patni hogi na...hum ka kisi parii aurat ke saath khumengey.....shee !!...... kya yahi sanskar miley humka yahan se??
Woman-Oyee tu itthe ka chora hain??
Mayank smiled....anything to save them..
Mayank-Haan..ithey ka chora hoon......bahut saal baad lauta hoon....bachpan yahin bitaya tha....abb wapas aaya hoon...
Woman-Acha acha....chal chal...andar chal.....tum log pati-patni hoon toh mujhe chinta nahi hogi...aa jao..bahut baatein karengey
Drashti walked quietly behind him !!..
Mayank sighed !!... They had shelter for the night !!
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another part 4m me.....heavnsly long !!.... .hope u lykd it..sme twist in the stry rather than only romance !! :D
and btw i dunno if those kinda places exist in bmby...suma wrote !! :)
TINA!
Edited by -Tina- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
omg awesome part tina!!!!!!! 👏I love the way you give us back-to-back awesome parts :)
Edited by ejaz_lover - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
woww tinnaa soo gooood!!!!
im going to continue
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Posted: 16 years ago
There was a tiny room with just one small bed.
Woman: Yeh lo tum log yahan par raat guzar sakte ho, thoda chota hai lekin...
Mayank: Aunty, thank you. Chota hai toh kya hua? Thank u again.
Woman: Ji its okay, agar tum logo kuch chahiye toh mujhe utha lena, main dusre kamre main soh rahi hoon.
Mayank: Ji okay..
When the woman went out of the room, mayank felt dhrastis eyes staring at him.
Mayank: Kya hua?
Dhrashti: Uhm... ek bed?
Mayank: Oh iske bare toh maine socha hi nahin.... ab agar aunty ko lage ga ki hum pati patni hain toh woh humme ek hi bed degi na.. dekh tu bed par soja aur main floor par so jaunga.
Dhrasti: Nahin...its okay. tum bed par so jao.
Mayank: No tum bed par sojao.
Drashti: Fine. Lekin mujhe neend nahin a rahi, please mere saath behto na.
Mayank: Hmm
Drashti went and layed on the bed and Mayank sat beside her caressing her hair. Drashti was wide awake, staring into Mayanks eyes. Mayank did the same, even though they didnt say anything their eyes said so much.
Mayank leaned closer and started kissing Drashti on the neck. Drashti closed her eyes and pulled Mayank closer to her.
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ill stop right there... i dunno if they should continue or break away... so someone please continuee :)
Edited by Namrata_12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey guys the story is been great so far...Mayank/Drashti interaction is described perfectly through ALL writers.. i would love to continue but gotta run for a class right now....But i just wanted to let you guys know about my RM short stories that i opened up in FF section, it's a new concept ut i hope u like it...here is the link...enjoy yourself with them until i get back...your comments are always appreciated...
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1219457/rahul-muskaans-story-house-new-upd-pg-17-10-23

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