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Posted: 16 years ago
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Reality hit him like a slap in the face. He started crying. He fell to the floor.
This was it. He had lead her to this. Knowing this, he knew he'd never live again.
Everybody crowded around him, to console him. But nothing they said, nothing they did, was of any help.
He just sat there on the floor, with his face covered with his hands.
Suddenly, someone took him by the shoulders and shook him as hard as they could.
As he looked up, in shock, he noticed an unfamiliar setting.
He was still in Mumbai airport. He had dozed off while waiting for his flight. His face was still wet, because even though it had all been a night mare, he had cried a lot.
He just sat there for the next 10 minutes. He didn't know if he should be glad that it was all a dream or worried because it was actually possible.
Then he reasoned with himself. "Meri Muskaan ithni kamzor nahi hain. Pagal zaroor hain, lekin ithni bhi pagal nahi hai ki koi ulti seedhi harkath karle."
"Flight A19-37 ke passengers check-in counter pe aajaye. We are now boarding Flight A19-37 to US. Passengers, please come to the check-in counter"
Rahul figured it was time to leave, so he grabbed his hand luggage and headed towards the check-in counter.
At the check-in counter, somebody pushed past him in a hurry. Usually he would have been agitated, but this time, he didn't seem to notice.
Half an hour later everybody had boarded the flight and rahul was lucky to have gotten a window-seat; J10.
He was sitting at the seat, looking out the window at all the airport staff loading the baggages. But he didn't care about all this, he was just thinking about Muskaan.
Deep down in his heart, he knew he would probably not end up returning to Mumbai, but there was another part of him that said, "No matter what, I'll come back, for Muskaan, for our love. I can't break her faith like that."
Just then he heard a voice behind him ask an air hostess which one was seat J9. "Oh great!" he sighed "I was hoping to have some quiet time and some space, but so much for that!"
In less than 2 seconds, the person came up next to him and mumbled "Is this J9?"
"Yes" he said, not even bothering to turn.
"Oye! Yeh kya 'yes' 'ves' laga rakha hain"
Rahul turned his head in a split second, in total disbelief.
"Dekh, hamaare vahaan pahaunchne ke baad agar thune yeh tera American style vyle shurooh kar diya na, tho main agli flight pakad ke wapas punjab jaa rahi hoon....aise ghoor kya raha hain, pehli baar dekh raha hain kya?"
Rahul didn't bother replying, he simply jumped out of his seat and took her into his arms. "Muskaan, I love you!"
"Oye! Ullo-ke-patte, main tho jaanti hoon, ab kya poori flight ko bathani hain? Chup chap baith!"
Rahul completely ignored her bellowing. He simply held her in his arms. He never wanted to let go. Not, like she did either ;) She wrapped her arms tightly around him and let out a single tear.
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Sorry, I realize it is insanely long. I know everybody worked really hard on the poison parts btw, but i just wanted to satisfy everyone. I didn't want people to have any hard feelings. After all now that Mayank is gone, WWRM and FFs are our only hope, so I wanted all our great writers to be part of it.
Please make it cute from here guys, don't make this a dream, i'm so depressed from the actual DMG as it is.
AND I'M SORRY IF IT SUCKS, YOU GUYS CAN LIKE IGNORE IT, I DON'T USUALLY WRITE, BUT TODAY I WAS REALLY MISSING MAYANK AND R-M!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
Hey awesome.Wow if I had a nightmare like that I would die!Lol wonderful writing!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
that was crazy. y did u change it? it was going well.
u wrote it well but its not fair to every1 who wrote b4 just for 1 person.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
that was good yaar.....i really wanted to write in WWRM because everyone had been saying.....so i did...but even i wasn't liking all this dying and stuff......but the thing is....now that the storyline here is such that muski is also going to U.S......we will have to start writing about their life over there....but we have already done that in WWRM 16!!!!!and we have had a wonderful ending to that by mansi as well.......
so do we just repeat the whole thing again???
thats why i had suggested another idea for WWRM 17.........
that rahul has just been chosen IOTM!!!i know that in dmg only armaan and rids become IOTM but here we could show that rahul's got IOTM and there's this huge party organized to celebrate his success.....we could continue from what happens between him and muskaan at the party,now that both have confessed their love for each other.....maybe some really cute(but substancial) RM romantic scenes....or maybe a huge fight...just to add some spice!!!!!
i really dunno whether you guys like the idea or not....but its not that bad...we could give it a try.......
because the poison stuff was getting really depressing and writing about their life in U.S. will just mean a repetation of WWRM 16....
so wat say guys....?give your opinions whether we start WWRM 17 afresh or not......do give your views......
Edited by justluvmayank - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
ummm... I dont know.... you guys could have said that you didnt like the suicide idea before... then I could have deleted it!! anyway I think what sakina is saying is good too... we can go with her idea for sure!! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: justluvmayank

that was good yaar.....i really wanted to write in WWRM because everyone had been saying.....so i did...but even i wasn't liking all this dying and stuff......but the thing is....now that the storyline here is such that muski is also going to U.S......we will have to start writing about their life over there....but we have already done that in WWRM 16!!!!!and we have had a wonderful ending to that by mansi as well.......

so do we just repeat the whole thing again???
thats why i had suggested another idea for WWRM 17.........
that rahul has just been chosen IOTM!!!i know that in dmg only armaan and rids become IOTM but here we could show that rahul's got IOTM and there's this huge party organized to celebrate his success.....we could continue from what happens between him and muskaan at the party,now that both have confessed their love for each other.....maybe some really cute(but substancial) RM romantic scenes....or maybe a huge fight...just to add some spice!!!!!
i really dunno whether you guys like the idea or not....but its not that bad...we could give it a try.......
because the poison stuff was getting really depressing and writing about their life in U.S. will just mean a repetation of WWRM 16....
so wat say guys....?give your opinions whether we start WWRM 17 afresh or not......do give your views......

Heyy yeah maybe we could leave this WWRM in this happy ending!where Muski goes with Rahul,and then we could start the new WWRM with your topic,something different maybe we could also add some Nokh-Jhok between the two,I like,I like.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
Yeah I guess its okay if we change the theme....I dont think many of them like it..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
Well umm i was reallly lukin frwrd to this WWRM after missin out on the 16th one....well do reach to a conclusion soon...i wanaaa read nd ryt more yaar!!.....i hvnt read 16 so for me this one was going fine..maybe lyk sme1 said its a repeat...i dunno..
do smthin and cntinue this guys!!
luv
tina!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
Guyzzz wats going on here ????????????????????
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
@Veeki: Fab! That was unexpected. Seriously. You write so well babe, so why do you only stick to reading. I know you've been reading my ff since like April. You should write one. Thanx for that, and no I didn't mind that you used the smile thing. It gave brought back meethi "Yaadein" 😉. You really didn't have to do that. It kind of upset a lot of people especially one in particular. I said I wasn't going to write in this, but doesn't mean I wasn't reading anymore.
@Saku: It would be a repeat of the story in America and maybe this was the perfect end to this story... by Veeki.
@Ankita: You did a really good job! Majority rules. You guys don't have to feel bad just because I felt differently. I did apologize at the end of my "note" in case I offended anyone. You're a fantastic writer and if you felt that this is the way it should have gone, then so be it. A writer should never ignore their inner thoughts. You did the right thing and it was really good.
I honestly didn't think that my note would cause so much tension. Sorry you guys. I was simply stating what I felt and I honestly meant no offense to anyone. I'm sincerely sorry if I have hurt anyone at all.
-Komz

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