weekend with rahul and muskaan 17!

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ankita

@muskaan_ankita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

sakina and tina... both of you did a mind blowing job... I hope I did justice too!! 😊

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Neha

@nehaluvsKSG

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

u didnt only do justice but also wrote a superb part plzzz cont

cant wait any longer!!!!!!!!

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ankita

@muskaan_ankita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: luv_dmg_armaan
That was fantastic!!!

Thanks!! 😛

@kiran

awww... That was so sweet!! Thanks a lot!!

someone please continue!! I want to read too... hehe!!

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Apoorva

@0o.Leah.o0

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Awesome Amazing ! Superb !!!

I seriously have NO words for how amzing this WWRM is !!!

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

omgg!!!! WOWWWW im speechless! this is sooo excitingg. pleasee someone continue soon.. ill try to continue later on. gr8 story so far. reallyy gudd!

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Komal

@AshiYuvi4life

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Hey everyone, nice job. Okay I have a serious question to ask all of you... We all have known Muskaan for over a year now. We all know how strong she is. But for the past week, a lot of new R-M ffs have been starting up and they all have the same thing in them. Muskaan tries to commit suicide. My question is... WHY? Why do you guys feel that she would do something so stupid. She's a brave girl and she's a strong girl. Yes she'd be shattered and pretty heartbroken as well, but she would never try to kill herself. She knows better than that. She's a well-educated doctor. Between Rahul and her, she's the one who has faith that he will come back. She's HAD faith that he will come back and she told him that as well. Everyone is already depressed about the crappy ending they gave R-M's love story and now when we are given a chance to be excited about WWRM 17, we write about Muskaan committing suicide because Rahul left only to depress ourselves more?

Sorry Saku and Sonia, I know you guys like my writing and I know you guys wanted me to write, but I'm not going to take any part in this WWRM because honestly, I'm completely fed up with this new 'make Muskaan a weakling so she can try to kill herself' trend, and I have no respect for people who try to commit suicide for any reason whatsoever especially something like this. I have an immense amount of respect for Muskaan's character because almost all of my friends who watch DMG right off the bat were like Komz, that's you on screen. The loud, bubbly, ready-to-pick-a-fight Punjabi girl. My middle name is even Muskaan. I know that I am not like that, and I know that Muskaan was not a character who would be portrayed that way. What happened to the fun-loving, bubbly girl?

Sorry if anything I said hurt anyone, but I just can't bear this anymore. Sorry once again my R-Mians. Love you guys very much. R-M 4 life!

-Komz

Edited by AshiYuvi4life - 16 years ago

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luv_dmg_armaan

@luv_dmg_armaan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life
Hey everyone, nice job. Okay I have a serious question to ask all of you... We all have known Muskaan for over a year now. We all know how strong she is. But for the past week, a lot of new R-M ffs have been starting up and they all have the same thing in them. Muskaan tries to commit suicide. My question is... WHY? Why do you guys feel that she would do something so stupid. She's a brave girl and she's a strong girl. Yes she'd be shattered and pretty heartbroken as well, but she would never try to kill herself. She knows better than that. She's a well-educated doctor. Between Rahul and her, she's the one who has faith that he will come back. She's HAD faith that he will come back and she told him that as well. Everyone is already depressed about the crappy ending they gave R-M's love story and now when we are given a chance to be excited about WWRM 17, we write about Muskaan committing suicide because Rahul left only to depress ourselves more?

Sorry Saku and Sonia, I know you guys like my writing and I know you guys wanted me to write, but I'm not going to take any part in this WWRM because honestly, I'm completely fed up with this new 'make Muskaan a weakling so she can try to kill herself' trend, and I have no respect for people who try to commit suicide for any reason whatsoever especially something like this. I have an immense amount of respect for Muskaan's character because almost all of my friends who watch DMG right off the bat were like Komz, that's you on screen. The loud, bubbly, ready-to-pick-a-fight Punjabi girl. My middle name is even Muskaan. I know that I am not like that, and I know that Muskaan was not a character who would be portrayed that way. What happened to the fun-loving, bubbly girl?

Sorry if anything I said hurt anyone, but I just can't bear this anymore. Sorry once again my R-Mians. Love you guys very much. R-M 4 life!

-Komz

Hey Komzie,I guess coz thats what we expect Muskaan to do,commit suicide,but maybe coz we all think that her character wont be bubbly any longer.I understand that Muskaan is not the type of girl who would do that,but don't you think she would atleast be sad,even depressed about the way things turned out.Rahul's letter might just have taken all that faith out of her!The faith that she had in love,their love possibly Love itself.Hence all these suicide writing thingos,sorry about my FF having that 2 but I think that Muskaan would definitely have been broken after this.I mean something would still be wrong with her deep down,even if she did try and become bubbly.Through all this suicide,depression,its just going to be normal for her not to be the same.Plus suicide is a relevant reason for Rahul to come back!Iand save our Muskaan.Hence suicide.

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Sonia Bhalla

@SuhaniSonia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#28

Hi guys!! I was finally able to read your parts and I must say you guys are doing a fabulous job!! Ankita, Saku (you finally are writing here!!) and Tina!! Love it a lot!! Its really emotional but super well written..

@ Komz - I completely 100% agree with you that I don't believe Muski's character would do such a thing ever but all FF's and WWRM's don't have to be based on reality.. I think this is a little different and we should roll with it. The next time we will make it more lighthearted.. It really sucks that you don't feel you can participate!!

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Veeki

@Veeki

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Posted: 16 years ago

#29

Recap:

Riddhima looked up and murmured… "rahul… tum… yaha… muski… woh…"

Rahul-speak ridziiiii…

Riddhima-she is at the ICU…

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Rahul ran to the ICU as fast as he could.

Everybody saw him and turned to llok at him. Everyone except Armaan was shocked. They all ran up to Rahul and started questioning him.

But Rahul didn't listen to any of them. He didn't even glance at them. He simply went to the ICU door and looked in.

Dr. Shashank and Dr. Keerthi were struggling to help her. He glanced at the heart rate monitor, her heart rate was dropping.

All the courage he'd had when he ran into Sanjeevani had now disappeared. As he saw Muskaan dying before his eyes, something within him fell apart. He stopped at the door and just stared at Muskaan.

Muskaan; the girl he'd fought with and played with in his childhood. The girl who he loved to annoy, and now he just plain loved. The girl he loved with all his heart. The girl whose smile could light up his life. The girl who was fighting between life and death.

His life flashed before his eyes and the only thing that stuck out to him was her smile. Uski Muskaan.

He shifted his gaze from Muskaan, to the monitor, and back to Muskaan.

"I love you Muskaan...please mujhe chod ke math jaao...please" he whispered, half pleading, half praying.

His eyes welled up with tears, and as he closed his eyes for a second, a tear rolled down his cheek.

"Muskaan...meri Muskaan" he whispered once more.

When he opened is eyes, he saw Muskaan smiling at him. No, it wasn't a dream. There she was, on the hospital bed, with a lingering smile on her lips.

Her smile once again lit up his life, but not for long. When he looked around, he saw the worry on everyone's face.

With fear clutching his heart, he looked at the heart monitor again.

She'd left sanjeevani, her friends, him and this world. She'd left with a smile.

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Hey Komal,

I hope you don't mind...the muskaan dying with a smile idea was inspired by your ff.