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Posted: 16 years ago
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RECAP:~~She reached the kitchen and looked for something.. she turned over and found a little bottle filled with venom.. she took it out.. and swallowed..

"muskaaaaaaaaaaan?.." doctor keerti screamed as muskaan fell down un conscious?

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sajeevani:~~~
dr.keerti tried to rush muskaan to sanjeevani as soon as possible.but there was a huge traffic jam which lost them over half an hour.muskaan's condition was getting more and more critical each moment and what really scared dr.keerti was that muskaan had now started spilling blood from her mouth at an alarming rate......
they reached sanjeevani after half an hour and dr.keerti rushed her to the I.C.U.
all the interns came rushing there,along with dr.shubhankar and dr.shashank.dr.shashank immediately took up the case and went inside the I.C.U.
anjali:yeh....yeh sab kya ho gaya..???mus-muskaan ne....
rids:usne aisa kyun kiya???????????
nikita:ab kya hoga?????????
atul:muskaan aisa karegi....maine kabhi socha hi nahi tha???kya hoga ab uska????
the girls were crying in anxiety now and even atul could not hide his tears.
armaan,however,knew perfectly the reason why muskaan had done this.tears rolled down his eyes.
armaan(to himself):rahul....tune yeh kya kiya.....jaate jaate muskaan ki khushiyan toh le hi gaya...aur ab uski jaan bhi?????
dr.shashank came out of the I.C.U. after sometime.
everyone rushed to him.
dr.shashank:listen guys...i'm trying....
armaan:what do you mean by you're trying sir?
shashank:drs.,muskaan ne aadha bottle zeher pi lia hai,uske upar se,if she was brought a bit earlier to the hospital....main kuch kar sakta.....par its been at least one hour since she's taken the poison....zeher spread hone lagi hai....she can even go to coma...
everyone broke down.muskaan???????coma?????????no one could believe it...
armaan knew exactly what to do.
he went to a corner and dialled rahul's number.
rahul:armaan?
armaan:i'm ashamed to call you my friend rahul.
rahul:armaan?yeh tu kya keh raha hai??
armaan:tujhe koi hak nahi hai kisi ki zindagi ke saath khelne ki.tune muskaan se pyaar ke vaadein kiye,usse kitne sapne dikhayein,aur phir tu usse chodke chala gaya???
rahul:maine jo kuch bhi kiya,uske bhale ke liye-
armaan:bhale ke liye my foot rahul!why don't you understand muskaan tere bina jee nahi sakti!!!!!
rahul:armaan...mere family..mere dad..my dad is dying armaan..
armaan:and so is muskaan.
time stood still.
rahul:abhi kya kaha tune?
armaan:tera letter padhne ke baad muskaan ko laga ki tujhse dor rehne se marr jaana zyaada achha hai.usne aadhi bottle zeher pi liya hai.dr.shashank keh rahe hain ki woh coma mein jaa sakti hai.
rahul's feet suddenly seemed to lose balance.he sat down on the floor,unable to believe his ears.he couldn't even bring himself to cry....he felt numb...he couldn't feel anything..
armaan:ab tu decide kar rahul-tere liye zyaada important kya hai.is muskaan important to you at all?did you ever love her?do you even care?agar tu usse pyaar karta hai,toh uska saath de,please...aur agar nahi karta...toh bol de...and none of us will bother you anymore.lekin ek baat sun le...agar teri wajah se muskaan ko kuch bhi hua na...toh teri khair nahi.
and he kept down the receiver.
just then~~
rids:armaan!!!!!muskaan ki condition bighar rahi hai!!!!!
well guys...i do comment here all the time....but i've never written here....i really hope you like it!!!!
please do comment!!!!!
saku
Edited by justluvmayank - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12

Hey i am sorry wasnt on for WWRM 16...i'll catch up wid tht soon!!...i read the 2 parts....very very gud!!....i m postin the nex part in a while.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Armaan rushed behind ridhima...they went towards the ICU...
Armaan-Dr.Shashank...koi improvement??
Shashank-Nahi Dr.Armaan...main aur Dr.Keerti puri koshish kar rahe hain.....but iss sab ka karan kya hain...dr.muskaan yun kyun kar rahi hain...
Armaan looked down while the others were clueless..
Dr shashank sighed and left..
Anjali-Guys..muskaan ne aisa kyun kiya hoga??..
Nikki-Pata nahi..lekin jo bhi kiya galat kiya!!
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There Rahul was shocked beyond limits...on one hand was his dad who was dying and the other was muskaan....who was not very gud either.....Armaans words rang in his head loud and clear...
Ofcourse he loved muskaan...but even his parents needed him now...he was trapped between the two....how could he leave his dad.....how could he let muskaan die..
He decided to call for Armaan at sanjeevani..
Armaan-Heloo..
Rahul-Armaan..main rahul..
Armaan was silent..
Rahul-Armaan....mu..musk..muskaan ko kya hua??
Armaan-Usne adhi bottle zeher pe li hain rahul aur abb woh marr rahi hain....
Rahul-Aisa na keh Armaan...muskaan ko kuch nahi ho sakta
Armaan-Tujhe kyun fark padh raha hain..
Rahul-Armaan..main nahi chatha ki muskaan ko kuch hoon..lekin armaan tu yeh toh soch main papa ko kaise chodh kar aao....muskaan ke saath tum sab hoon lekin mom dad ...mom puri tutth chuki hain armaan.....
main bhi wahan hona chatha hoon...meri muskaan ke saath...lekin its not possible armaan...meri situation ko samjhney ki koshish kar....pyaar karta hoon main muskaan se...
Armaan understood..
Armaan-Theekhe yaar rahul..main samjhta hoo..
Rahul-Meri taraf se muskaan ko ek message dega
ARmaan-Hmm
Rahul-Jab bhi usee hosh ayee usee keh dena ki Main usse milney aaonga....main wapas zarror aaonga....bas ek baar woh theekh ho jayee toh uska rahul uske pass hoga....aur ye bhi kehna ki...
Rahul broke into sobs..
Rahul-Aur kehna ki rahul usse bahut pyaar karta hain aurr usee bahut zyada gusaa hain....ladney ke liye wapas zarror aayega..
Rahul broke down completely...noone would understand the situation he was in.....he was completely broken down!!
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Hope you guys liked it!!....
Luv
Tina!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
that ws really good coolgal!!!!!wats ur name anyway?
i'm glad you continued it like this!!!!!!i'm looking forward to writing in WWRM more frequently now!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thnx a lot sakina...my name is tina...

Edited by cool~~gal - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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recap~~Rahul broke down completely...no one would understand the situation he was in.....he was completely broken down!!
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armaan went back to the others.
armaan:kya hua guys???
nikki:pata nahi armaan.....lekin muskaan baar baar rahul ka naam liye jaa rahi hai.....
atul:pata nahi...lekin armaan...kya muskaan k aisa karna...rahul se related hai?
armaan:kya??nahi toh!!!!aisa kuch nahi hai!!!!!!!!!!
anji:armaan itna chillao mat...
armaan:sorry...
rahul banged his fist on the wall agan and again.
rahul:yeh sab mere saath hi kyun hota hai??????pehle dad....aur phir muskaan!!!!!!!!muskaan ko agar meri wajah e kuch bhi hua ....toh main apne aap ko kaise maaf karunga?????why me?????
he sat down on the floor and cried his heart out.just then someone kept her hand on his shoulder.
muskaan:rahul?
rahul:muskaan.....tune aisa kyun kiya muskaan????????kyun???????
he grabbed her by the shoulders and hugged her.
muskaan:rahul....main jaa rahi hoon rahul.....apne saare doston ko chodke....sanjeevani ko chodke....tumhe chodke.....is duniya ko chodke.......tere bina main jee nahi sakti rahul....toh mera marr jaana hi theek hai.....main jaa rahi hoon rahul......
rahul:NAHI!!!!!!!!!MUSKAAN!!!!PLEASE MUJHE CHODKE MAT JA MUSKAAN!!!!!!!!!!!!MUSKAAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the figure of muskaan seemed to move away from him....and floated away.....
back in sanjeevani...
dr.keerti:OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MUSKAAN KI HEARTBEAT UNSTABLE HOTI JAA RAHI HAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!SHE'S DYING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wow!!thats 2 parts in a day!!!!!!!!!!!!seems like the bug has bit me!!!!!!!comment....and continue!!!!!!!!!!!
saku
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great going guys plzzzzz continue!!!!!!
-Mansi- thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG!! The parts are so critical!! Ill try 2 continue in sometime!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Omg saku!Ahh whats gna happen to Muskaan..Mansi u writing?Please write ASAP ahh im dying,Nahi Muskaan!!Beautiful writing you guys!will try and continue after Mansi...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Rahul ran… ran to Mumbai… ran to sanjeevani… where his life was ending…

He had consoled his mother and made her understand that he has to leave… his mother understanding the situation literally forced rahul to go… he took a flight to Mumbai… he knew this wasn't easy… he just prayed to god… of muskaans safety!

Meanwhile at Mumbai… muskaan got weaker as each second passed by… she lost a lot of blood… and was un conscious… her friends stood there waiting for her to get better while riddhima sat infront of gaanu and prayed for her safety… Three days has passed by and muskaan was still in the same condition… Time seemed to have stood still…

Rahul pushed the door of sanjeevani with all his strength which made some ward boys fall… he could barely notice… and again started to run… finally he found riddhima… he rushed to her…

Rahul-riddhima…. RIDDHIMA… where is muskaan??

Riddhima looked up and murmured… "rahul… tum… yaha… muski… woh…"

Rahul-speak ridziiiii…

Riddhima-she is at the ICU…

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