weekend with rahul and muskaan 17!

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luv_dmg_armaan

@luv_dmg_armaan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#51

Guys where are we continuing on from??I am super confused,wanna write but super confused lol,are we just contiuing on with the poision thingo,or is it the plane thingo where Muski boards the plane...Do let me know want to write this is really confusing me!

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#52

heyy i want to continue rite now.. but from where?? i think we should keep this weekend going so ill continue from the part where rahul reaches the hospital and sees muskaan in the I.C.U if thats fine with everyone else..

ill continue and if no1 likes it then they can delete my part.

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#53

Recap:

Muskaan is in the icu and rahul just reached and saw her there.

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Rahul couldnt see this, muskaan was unconsious, he fell on the floor, totally shocked, and everyone was around him not sure how to support him or to react.

Finally armaan comes and sits beside him.

Rahul: Armaan!!! yeh maine kya kar diya? maine... main.. muskaan...

Armaan didnt say anything, he hugged him tight, and rahul started to cry and couldnt stop. Atul anjali and ridhima also come to sit beside him.

Ridhima: Rahul.. dont worry, sab theek ho jaye ga.

Anjalai: Yea rahul everything will be fine.

Atul: Rahul, dont worry,

Then a nurse comes out but shes in a hurry.

Armaan: nurse, muskaan kaisi hai.

Nurse: please dr. armaan excuse me

she goes without replying to his question, and when she comes back she is also in a hurry, and she has some supplies in her hand, before armaan could ask her again she went in the i.c.u

rahul got up, and left from there. he ran up to the terrace. ridhima, anjali, and atul were about to follow them when armaan stopped them.

Armaan: Usse thore time ke liye akela chor do.

Anjali: Lekin armaan..

Armaan: Just leave him for a while anji.

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Thats it guys i didnt write too much because maybe someone would mind if im changing around the story, so if someone wants to continue they can continue from here or delete my part.

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i-love-dr.rahul

@i-love-dr.rahul

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#54

goood oneee!!! thank u for continuing!!!!!!

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Simone

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Posted: 16 years ago

#55

aww u guys.. i just read all the parts! all you guys are totally FAB!! this one is so intense and emotional!! kudos to the person who brought in the 'suicide' track (im too lazy to go back and check who it was) 😆

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luv_dmg_armaan

@luv_dmg_armaan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#56

heyy Namrata that was good,finally someone continued!

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Sakina

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Posted: 16 years ago

#57

good yaar namrata finally someone continued!!!!!!!!!that was a really good part.....now someone else continue and i'll write after that!!!!!

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Tina

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Posted: 16 years ago

#58

Thnku guys for cntinuing...heres my part...hope u lyk it..

Tina!!

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Rahul reached the terrace and cried his heart out...

Rahul-Why me....why me...why does this happen with me everytime...kya mere bhag main koi khushi nahi hain...

HE just kept weeping until he felt a hand on his shoulder...

He looked over to find ridhima..

Ridhima-Kuch nahi hoga rahul....dont worry..tum bas ab ek baar muskaan ko apna chehra dekhao..she'l be fine....jab usse pata chalega ki tum wapas aa gayye hooon she'l be perfectly fine..

Rahul looked at her tears flowing down his eyes..

Rahul-Aggar muskaan ko kuch hota hain na toh woh sab sirf meri wajah se hoga...maine muskaan ko..

Ridhima-Shhh!!...relax...muskaan theekh ho jayegi...all she needs is your love and your support rahul!!..

Rahul looked up..

Ridhima gave him an understanding look..like "i know everything"

Rahul wiped his tears and decided to go down..

He went down..

He peeped in he saw her ....pipes running all over ...her face reflecting sadness and depression...her usual smile was not there..

Rahul-Maine muskaan ki muskaan chini hain....ab usse theekh hona hoga...

He requested Dr.Kirti to go in just once and see muskaan

Dr.kirti first refused but after recurrent pleads from rahul she let him go ...but just for 5 minutes ..she knew they shared somehting special...she let him go..

He went and sat by her bed...and took her hands into his.

Rahul-Kya kar diya tune muskaan....pagal hain kya??....ek baar mere barrey main nahi socha...kaisa pagalpana hain....i mean dimag kahan tha tera....waisey bhi pata nahi kahan hota hain..

HE smiled while crying..

Rahul-Kyun muskaan kyun....teri jaan lene ki koshish maltab meri jaaan muskaan...tune aaj meri jaan leney ki koshish ki hain...aur uske liye main tujhe kabhi maaf nahi karonga.....

kyun kia tune aisa...muskaaan tu aggar mujhe chodh ke gayyi na toh main wada karta hoon ki tere piche piche aaonga tujhe tang karney..shayad dunoo nark main hi milengey.....

He smiled again...tears flowing non-stop..

Dr.KEerti signalled him from outside...it was time for him to leave...he placed a kiss on her cheeks and left...giving one last glance to her!!

Rahul-I am waiting for you janaa!!...jaldi theekh ho jao!!..

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Misha Rai

@DMG4EVER

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Posted: 16 years ago

#59

Hii Guys' my name is Riddhima nd i just want to say .. you all rock ! I mean i love Rhaul and he is just so perfect as a persona nd lover boy .. Great going everyone