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ramusk

@ramusk

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

hey mits ,

nice work that pani puri scene was v cuttttteeeeeeeee . loved the last part ...

rock on guys!!!

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Simone

@-simi-

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+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

aww amazing parts guys!

specially the pani puri scene! haiii only if they show that in the show..

i wanna write a scene.. but i cant seem to get in the flow of the story yet. (im not a pro writer.. so its hard to pick up from wherever ahhaa)... i'll wait for a couple more scenes and maybe add up later :D

but guys keep continuing!

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Mitsy

@mits002

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

c'monn!! Some one continue! its been 5 hours that i posted!

@Musicdiva..

You are soo good..! You dont need time!

@ramusk

kaha gayi hamari RM deewangi?!

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Sonia Bhalla

@SuhaniSonia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Rahul takes a step closer to muskaan and with his thumb picks up one droplet of the pani from muskaan's edge of the lip and tastes that. " Bahot achhi"

Muskaan looks up to him with a blank expression.

Muskaan - Umm.. ab chalein...

Rahul - Jee bar ke khaliya? Ya aur kuch chahiye madam ko?

Muskaan - Oy! Phir se khane ki baat??? Waise mere pait bar gaya.. chal wahan
bench par baith jahen.

They sit down and Rahul starts talking about what he wants to buy with the money. Muskaan is barely contributing to the conversation as she is feeling really sleepy after eating so much. Her eyes start fluttering and she starts drifting off.

Rahul notices this and moves over as her head starts tilting to the left. Her head is now on his shoulder and she starts to cuddle into him. There they stay for a few hours.
Rahul with a smile on his face.

Just then it starts to rain.

I can't really write as good as you guys or think of great ideas but I wanted to contribute a bit and figured someone can continue from my part. So please someone go on...

Edited by SuhaniSonia - 16 years ago

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MOONA

@luvingRM

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

hey guys nice start

but i m missing other writers

wherez komal ,mansi ,kanika ,aproova , imane 😔

u guyz r gud

waiting for next contuination

mOonA

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Simone

@-simi-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

im continuing.. sorry a section of my scene got deleted so i am rewriting it.. hopefully it doesnt take very long!

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Simone

@-simi-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

ok guys i'll continue.... i still dont have the feel to the story, but i'll give it a shot since nobody else is updatig..

this is just a romantic scene, nothing original, and no twists or turns.. (im very bad at those, maybe i'll try some day) ahha
hope it isnt too long or boring to lose ur interest in the middle 😃

Originally posted by: SuhaniSonia
They sit down and Rahul starts talking about what he wants to buy with the money. Muskaan is barely contributing to the conversation as she is feeling really sleepy after eating so much. Her eyes start fluttering and she starts drifting off.
Rahul notices this and moves over as her head starts tilting to the left. Her head is now on his shoulder and she starts to cuddle into him. There they stay for a few hours.
Rahul with a smile on his face.

Just then it starts to rain.

it starts raining.. waking up rahul who was now a little sleepy himself..

he tries to wake muskaan up, but she seems to be in deep sleep, because she was too comfortable on rahul's shoulder

so he quickly picks her up in his arms and walks towards the car. He opens the door and lays her down across the back seat, so that she would be comfortable. he feels muskaan shiver a little, and so he takes a shawl and wraps it around her to keep her warm.

he quickly gets in the driver's seat and starts driving home.

midway, the lightening get louder and more frequent, and all of the sudden, the car comes to a abrubt halt.

"DAMN! abhi gadi ko band padna tha!" cursing under his breath, rahul gets off, and checks the engine, not surprised to find water all over inside that has made the engine stop working..

muskaan wakes up rubbing her eyes as she hears the opening and closing of the bonnet of the car..

its still raining heavily, water drops running through the glass, covering it, but she can make out that rahul is standing outside checking the car, and she realizes that the car is broken down...

"ITS RAINING!" she quickly realizes with a huge smile on her face. she hops off the car opens her arms and looks up at the sky welcoming the rain. she starts jumping around happily. rahul, who's watching all of this smiles at her child like behaviour, and remembers their childhood days in patiala where they used to run out of their homes and dance in the rain for hours, despite knowing that they will catch a cold, and will get harsh scolding from their parents.

CATCH A COLD! it strikes rahul... "MUSKAAN!! GET INSIDE THE CAR! U'LL CATCH A COLD!!"

he walks towards her, and tries to grab her hand to take her inside the car, but she escapes his grasp and runs away from him, gigiling.

he also smiles, also becoming a child again, runs after her trying to get ahold of her..

they start running around the car, giggling, splashing rain water on each other.. just like they did years ago...

he finally gets a hold of her hand, and pulls her to himself. she is still laughing, but her laughter dies down when she sees his intense gaze on her

"gosh she looks even more beautiful in the rain!" he thinks to himself, caressing her face with his eyes..

BOOM!! a loud thunder roars, completely shaking her, scaring her out of her wits.. she hugs rahul tight, hiding her face in his chest.. and starts shivering [i know i know very lame scene.. haha]

initially taken aback by the her sudden act, rahul understands her feeling, because ever since she was a child, as much as she loved rain, she got scared of the lightening as if she's just seen a ghost!

he puts his arms around her protectively. feeling his arms comfort her, muskaan gets a very warm and fuzzy feeling inside her, thinking about how safe she feels with rahul, thinking about how he always calms her down when she is scared, about how he protects her, as if she really was her husband.. she knows as long as rahul is there, she doesnt need to be scared about anything!

a few moments pass, they now have forgotten the rain, the lightening, and the fact that they are in middle of nowhere with a car that has a drenched engine. with their eyes closed, all they can feel is each other's warm bodies pressed against each other through clothes that stick to them just like second skin!

her hands, that were around his back, asking for protection, now pull out, and seductively go around his neck, and his arms that were protectly tight around her back, involuntarily slide down to her waist, now sensuously caressing her waist.. and to his uber hapiness, he finds that her dupatta had sliped down in the whole process of running. seeing her bare neck so close to him, he starts nuzzling her down her neck, his breaths sending shivers in her.. ..

they start swaying side to side, still with their eyes closed, only feeling each other's heartbeats... obvilious to their surroundings...

ok guys.. i got a little carried away because i was only planing to write upto the "dancing in the rain" part.. but couldnt stop getting more ideas in my head ! hahaha

hope u like it and hope it wasnt too long or boring to lose ur interest in the middle 😛
SIMI

Edited by musicdiva - 16 years ago

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Neha

@nehaluvsKSG

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

hey musicdiva u r really very gooog plzzzz continue.....

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ramusk

@ramusk

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#19

hey guys ,
i read all the parts!!1

good work by all mits, suhani and music diva

musicdiva even though its a lame scene as u mentioned .... it has its own magic with every couple n even more with our RM 😳