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ramusk

@ramusk

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Posted: 16 years ago

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In the process after a minute Muskaan fell on the hay stack kept in one corner.......Rahul purposely fell on top of her.He placed his hand over her palms...locking them both.....They both had forgotteen evrything tonight.....all they wanted was the others presence.......

Rahul looked into Muskaan's eyes..

Eye lock!!.. (r-m guitar tune in the background)

Rahul bends down...a little closer to her head...he looks at her lips and leans in some more....

continuation:

He comes so close that muskaan can feel his heart beating for her ...

She closes her eyes ....

Rahul backs off n starts laughing loudly 🤣. [Rahul c c c playing in backgnd]

Muskaan opens her eyes now n sees rahul laughing his heart out holding his stomach....🤣

Mu: Rahul...(He doesnt hear n is on with his laughng)

Mu: Rahul (she yellls at the top of her voice)

Ra: Oh my god !!! 🤣 🤣 Ghabra gayi kya??? Ghabra gayi na...

Hey muskaan Dar gayi booo boooooooooo👎🏼 🤣

Mu: Shut Up rahul..

Ra: (just coming out his laughter) Chill yaar mazaak kar raha tha..

Mu: gadhe yeh kaisi mazaak hai .. ullu de pathe ... isiliye mein bolti hoon tera koi bharosa nahin...tum mera fayda uthaana chahte they... starts hitting him in her own usual way n throwing things at him...

just a small one this time and a more routine one .. couldn't write it properly....

Edited by ramusk - 16 years ago

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sonia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

yoe all had a awesome part soe oone contieu

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Tina

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

ok i was gttn really bored...so heres one more from my side!!

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Rahul-Muskaan ,,,muskaan ruk..abeyy ruk na yaar....musk.....aah..

He started running....they both were running....she was chasing him...

He was running for his life..lol!!...after all muskaan grewal was behind him.....

Just then there was a scream....a female scream...rahul turned around to see muskaan flat on the floor..

She was holding her leg and screaming....

Rahul-muskaan..

He ran by her side..

Muskaan-Ahh..oucch..

Rahul-Muskaan kya hua..

Muskaan--Rahul ahh dard ho raha..

She had twisted her ankle..

Rahul-Kisney kaha tha iss umar main yun bhagam bhag karney ki,,,

And there rahul got one on his back..

Muskann-Oyye matlab kya hain tera.....bol toh aise raha hain jisee main koi 60 saal ki aurat hoon.....

But Muskaan was in terrible pain..

Rahul-Abb chal uth jaa..

She tried getting up but she couldnt....rahul gave her a hand.....she took hold of his hand and tried to et up but almost fell yet again...but Rahul caught her this time.......

She looked away....

He sighed...and lifted her in his arms...Muskaan was shocked......shocked beyond limits.....god alone knoes what else this night had in stock for them....

Rahul moved to the other end of the room where he had made the place to sleep....he carried muskaan like that sweetly in his arms and placed her there carefully..

Rahul-Tu yahin ruk....gaddi main koi davai hogi main lekar aata hoon..

Muskaan-Rahul..please...main yahan akeli nahi reh sakti....mujhe darr lagta hain...andhere se bhi bahut darr lagta hain..

Rahul-Lekin muskaan tera pair(leg)

Muskaan-Rahul woh theekh ho jayega..

Rahul-Muskaan kabhi toh doctor jaise baat kiya kar...aisa kaise theekh ho jayega...

Muskaan-Rahul please...main bhi sath chalo..

Rahul gave her a killer look...how was she gonna walk..

Rahul-Abb aise kyun keh rahi hain....main toh tera kya tha haan main toh tera fayda utha raha hoon na...

Rahul was a little hurt...

Muskan looked at hiim...she knew she had messed it..

Muskaan-Gussa hoon??

Rahul dint reply..

Muskaan-Arrey tum harkatien aisi kartey hoon ki mujhe aisa lagta hain..

Rahul looked at her with a "excuse me " look!!....

Muskaan-Acha baba...i m sorry ...

Rahul-Muskaan baat sorry ki nahi hain.....baat yeh hain ki tum apne dost ko samjhoo...bahut ho gaya muskaan ladai jhagda.....hum kya ache dost nahi ban sakte...

Muskaan-Rahul ..

Rahul-Bolney de mujhe muskaan..

Rahul--Mein hamesha tera acha dost ban na chatha tha aur chatha hoon muskaan....aur jahan tak tere yeh fayda uthaney ki baat hain na muskaan....aggar mujhe uthana hota toh main bahut pehle utha chuka hota muskaan......

.tumhe yaad dila doon....tum aur main ek hi ghar main rehte hain aur ek hi kamre main sote hain.....fayde uthaney ki baat karti hoon tum..

Aur ek aur baat muskaan shayad tum janti nahi ya janna chathi nahi hoon lekin main auratoon ki respect karta hoon....

Rahul ne gusse main thoda zyada bol diya..

Muskaan just kept looking at him.......he was scolding her but uske expressions bilkul match nahi ho rahe the...he looked so cute!!...even when he was screaming at her!

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Tina!!

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Sonia Bhalla

@SuhaniSonia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

That was great. He totally put her in her place.

Sounds like some filmi dialogue. I liked it very much.

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ramusk

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

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Recap:

Rahul ne gusse main thoda zyada bol diya..

Muskaan just kept looking at him.......he was scolding her but uske expressions bilkul match nahi ho rahe the...he looked so cute!!...even when he was screaming at her!

continuation:

Finally with the night which had all in it-romance,naughtiness,flirting,seriousness was at its peak and voth of them fell asleep..

Next morning Rahul finally found some garage and they set off to their home...

Sanjeevani:

Being diwali they got lot more cases than usual and all the interns were busy with the Over time work..

they hardly got any break...

Rahul was in cafe .His head was aching to its peak .. No matter how hard he tried to forget things which happened the last day he is unable to and the work pressure was adding more pain..He was burying his head in his hands...

Muskaan comes and sits besides him and gently puts her hand on him...He gets up as to see who it is n sees muskaan and...

Ra:(still in a tired voice)Tu ... Tu yahan

Mu:(offering him the cofee) yeh le cofee pe le toh mood acha ho jayega..

Ra:no thanks ...

Mu:abhi tak gussa ho??

Ra: nahi bas thoda pareshan hoon,thak gaya hoon 😔 ....

Mu: hmm haan kaam itna jyada jo hain... ab jaldi se yeh cofee pe le...

Ra:(taking the cofee) thanks ...

Mu:Anytime

saying this she gets up to go to resume her duty and while goin she ruffles his hair in a cute manner...
Rahul just stares[RM guitar rune in bcgnd] unable to believe it.... was it a dream muskaan talking so sweetly and nothing going wrong this time...and ruffling his hair.. he just pinches 😵 himself to make sure and looks up and sees muski turning and waving him a bye along with a flying kiss....

Note:plzzz dont make it a dream this is a sincere request for the next writer

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Hajra Nizamani

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

WOW!!!!!!!!!! it was really good............PLease continueeeeeeeeeeee

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Sonia Bhalla

@SuhaniSonia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

Mu:Anytime
saying this she gets up to go to resume her duty and while goin she ruffles his hair in a cute manner...
Rahul just stares[RM guitar rune in bcgnd] unable to believe it.... was it a dream muskaan talking so
sweetly and nothing going wrong this time...and ruffling his hair.. he just pinches himself to make
sure and looks up and sees muski turning and waving him a bye along with a flying kiss....

He gets quite excited at this loving gesture. Little does he know that it was just an act for the
camera. She had someone taping the whole time they were in the cafe. (sorry I had to incorporate the
camera - atleast i didn't make it a dream)

He forgets how tired he is and goes looking for her everywhere. He comes up beside her while she is at
the counter looking through charts. He decides to return the gesture. He takes a strand of her hair
and tries to put it behind her ear. She furrows her brow and looks at his hand from the corner of her
eyes and pulls back.

Muskaan - Are! Yeh kya kar raha hai?

Rahul grabs her hand and pulls her close as she tries to get away. She tries to pull away but he is
much stronger than her.

Muskaan - Chod! Sab dekh rahe hain?

Rahul - Ab tujhe sabki pari hai. Woh tune jo pyar ke ishare kiya the cafe mein, uska kya?

Muskaan - Woh to bas acting thi, yaar. Tujhe kya laga? Apni shakal dekhi hai? Mein aur pyar se kuch
bhi karoon ki tere saath? Paagal nahin hogaya?

She felt bad saying all this but she couldn't let him possibly know how she really felt inside and how
much she was enjoying being around him.

Edited by SuhaniSonia - 16 years ago

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ramusk

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

awww suhani!!😭 kya kar diya... but ok it happens in RM world... luvd the way he's at the back of her....

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Sonia Bhalla

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Posted: 16 years ago

#39

@ Ramusk - I am sorry. You can disregard my post if you don't like it. I just didn't want things to progress too quickly. I love their misunderstandings. And thanks on the comments for my ff.

Edited by SuhaniSonia - 16 years ago