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...Aphrodite... thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
WOW....that was amazing!!....i was considering to carry on from the post before this one...but i'm so glad you did because I probably wouldn't give it the same justice....
loved it...loved it...loved it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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That was so sweet. I could not figure out how to do that scene also.
I will continue some since no one else is.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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They stand there hugging for a few minutes before they realize that everyone had gone back inside.

Atul - Chalo. Khaana lag gaya hai. Muskaan tujhe to bhadi bhook hogi. Ye sab apne ghar mein ja ke karna.

They part abruptly.

Muskaan - Chalein

Rahul - Haan chal

They go inside and eat their dinner and head home - the whole time feeling"awkward" but happy.

They both lay down in their respective places but neither one of them can sleep. So many thoughts are running through their heads. Eventually Muskaan did fall asleep first.

Rahul still feeling restless - stood up and walked over to where Muskaan was. He sat down on the bed next to her trying not to disturb her. He just watched her sleep and he just wanted to take her in. Just then she turned over and somehow got ahold of his right hand. He could not do anything as he did not
want her to wake up and he was enjoying the touch. He leaned in some more and with his other hand he brushed aside a strand of her hair. Thats when Muskaan opened her eyes. But instead of moving she kept her hand on his and they both just looked deeply into each others eyes; drowning in them.

OK thats a perfect set up to continue with something so someboy please write.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
hey hello all,

I am a hard core fan of RM...i was a silent reader b4..After reading this topic i also wanted to share my views and thoughts so immediately registered...

nice work music diva it was fabulous work......

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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
ohoo suhani soni gr8 work i wanted to post my thing but by the time i registered n activated u were out with ur's ... neways gr8 work keep it up... i'll think all over again
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
After a while she's back to her senses n all self again...

mu: oye tu yaha kya kar raha hain??? Mera gala dabane aaya hai kya???

Ra: arey tu hamesha mujhpe shak kyun karti hain... mein to yahan takya lene aaya tha.....

Mu:oye pidhe neechi itne saare takye jo hain na tujhe ek kaam kar lottery ke paise aane ke baad naa teri share se ek takye ki dukan kharid le......

Ra:Tujhe itni prob kyun ho rahi hai ....mein neeche sota hun, prob to muje honi chahiye....

Mu:Haan haan jaise ki mein hi teri bahut badi prob hoon .....pata nahi yeh paise kab milenge kam se kam tera peecha chut jayega mujhe.....

Ok i cudnt think of anything more plz someboyd continue....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Muskaan couldn't withstand his intensity...she had to move...to breathe. She lowered her eyes and moved back a bit but Rahul took hold of her hand and held it tight. She tried to move...her heart was beating against her chest and the butterflies in her stomach were incrdible...she wasn't used to the feeling and being with Rahul and liking his warmth was something she had to fight for some reason.

M: Kya kar rahe ho Rahul??

But Rahul didn't want to speak...he leaned in and kissed her on the cheek. Making his way down to her neck she melted...but this wasn't right...she jolted up and loosened Rahul's grip on her...

M: Rahul yeh tum kya kar rahe ho?!...hum sirf shaadi ka natak kar rahe hai...yeh sach me shaadi nahi hai!...aur tum meri madat kar rahe ho isleye mera faida mat untaon...

Muskaan hurt herself while she said what she said...she knew she was in the safest hands with Rahul and he wouldn't lay a bad finger on her. But she didn't want to fall for him more than she has already and maybe this would just make him stop.
Rahul was shocked...he didn't know whether to be angry or upset...did she just accuse him of taking advantage?

R: Tumhe lagta hai ke mein tumhara faida unta raha hoon??
M: Haa

She was quiet and couldn't face lying to him to his face.
A tear strolled down his eye....and he stood up.

R: Fine Muskaan...bachpan se aaj tak tum mujhe jaanti ho aur tumhe ab bhi shak hai to humare saath rehna...yeh natak karna...yeh sab koi maayne nahi rakta..mein kal se yahan se phir se ghar shift hota hoon....
aur Muskaan...fikar maat kar...yeh shaadi ka natak bana rahega...mein koi bahana bana loonga...sorry Muskaan...sorry ke tum mujhe pehchan nahi payee

and with that he left....and as she cried all night...he started his car and went for a drive...

sorry for the depressing post...but now maybe muskaan will value Rahul's company....and we can see some manaoo scenes.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sorry Ramusk!!
I didn't know you had continued....ermmm I'll withdraw my post if you want...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh no dats ok but i wud be happy if u continue from my post coz i am writing it for the first time(but dont withdraw ur's
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Uhoh! Both of you guys wrote from the same part. Both were good but different. But they ended pretty much the same where they separated.
Maybe we should stick with Shrinas' as she already set up what the next scenes can be. ??? or ramusk.. it doesn't matter as long as it keeps going.
p.s. Shrina - your parts have so much intensity. Love it!
Edited by SuhaniSonia - 16 years ago

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