weekend wid rahul muskan 7! - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
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recap muski feels guilty n she xpects to meet him at sanjeevani...

She's the first one to reach dere ... she quickly changes herself into lab coat n runs to the nurse station to enquire abt rahul as to where is his duty today but was unfortunate to find that he was in OT and was assisting an important surgery...

She has to still wait to meet him n talk with him..... she couldnt wait any longer .....

Finally he comes out of OT....

She holds his hand n grabs him along with her without even noticing that thier senior docs were thr n takes him into fire escape..( I desperately want a scene of RM in fire escape so dats y)......

In fire esc..

Mu:Tu aise chala kyun gaya mujhe bina bataake .....Pata hai kitna ghabra gayi thi subah utththe hi tumhe naa dekhke .....

Ra: mein tujhe aur pareshaan nahi karna chahta muskaan isiliye .... mein tujhe aur pareshaan nahi karna chahta kam kam se kam tu mere bina peaceful to rahegi ....

Mu:Mere matlab wo nahi tha rahul... Mein to mazaak kar rahi thi.....

Ra:Lekin mein mazaak ke mood mein nahi tha muskan...

Muski is taken aback by his statement n she really feels sorry for wat she has said previous nite.....

Mu:Oye rahul mujhe maaf karde yaar....

Ra:sorry to mujhe maangni chahiye muskaan .... tujhe itna pareshaan jo kiya maine tere saath meri vajeh se tu ghar chod ke aa gayi meri vajeh se tu yeh jhoote shaadi ke chakkar mein padi .... isliye mein tujhe aur pareshaan nahi karna chahta .....

saying this he goes out of fire escape leaving her all alone n dejected............

she then decides to end all this tension b'w them n she'll kinda be at the bac of rahul til he pardons her... i mean kinda manaofying thing....

(i wanted to see this aspect that muski at the bac of rahul not to tease him but please him....)

Just hope someone continues with this idea

ramusk thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
sorry for the delay actually i was gettin varius ideas in my mind finally decided to post lik dis
SuhaniSonia thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53

Cool! I liked that.

Thats exactly the direction I wanted this to go in.
Its something different.
ramusk thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
hey thanx 4 the feedback suhani ..... thanks a lot

waiting for the continuation.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
hey awesome job guys, loving this weekend with RM a lot, especially liked the whole karva chauth scenes, keep it up guys, really nice part ramusk!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56
Well done Ramusk...left at an interesting point. 😉
Rahul walks out of fire escape..towards locker room.
LOCKER ROOM: Atul, Anjali and Nikita. (AR in fire escape now😛)
Rahul walks in..upset.
Does not say hi..and opens his locker, takes out a new pair of clothes and walks in the changing room.
Atul, Anjali and Nikita were 😲.
Anjali: Ab ise kya hua?
Nikita: Pata nahi..
Atul: hua kya hoga..muskaan ke saath ladai hui hogi. aur kya.
Muskaan walks in : hi atul hi anjie hi nikita.
Anj: hi...yeh rahul ko kya hua, phir se jagda hua kya?
Muskaan: er...kyun?
Nikita: wo rahul itne gusse se aaya aur kise se baat bhi nahi ki.
muskaan: phir kaha gaya?
Anj: changing room mein..
Musk: ohh...! wo na..rahul ko tum jaante ho..
Rahul walks out and glared at her..
Muskaan: umm..(she stops and turns around towards her locker. Rahul also walks back to his locker)
Everybody feels the tension between the two. Rahul looked more angry and hurt then ever before. Atul was looking at them one by one..tryying to figure out.
Atul: (finally): Kuch toh gadbad hain. Muskaan kya hua?
Musk: wo kya hain na...mere pujya pati parmeshwar humse naraaz ho gaye hain. (making a puppy dog face)
Anjali was no more interested as she thought it was one of their usual fights.
Rahul sighed and looked towards her..she looked at him thru the corner of her eyes.
"lekin hua kya"
R: haan muskaan...bata na..kya hua?
Muskaan: uhmm uhmm...
R: bata na. muskaan kya hua tha?
M: 😕
ok...sorry wa this one...actually was gonna write something totally different...but my mom came and started staring at my computer screen...
so i had to make it this boring. 😆
Edited by mits002 - 16 years ago
ramusk thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
eagerly waitin 4 that mits
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
well done Ramusk....finished beautifully.....waiting waiting waiting for lovely Mits
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
lol mits, well maybe if ur mom left now u can write something else, but this was good too, or someone else can continue
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
That was really good, Mits!
I like how the parts are all ending openly so it is easy to continue.
Someone keep going. Be back soon! Hope to read more.

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