Wow that was really good. I have never done one before but I will give it a try....
Muskaan returns home and decides to wait for Rahul, maybe he will turn up tonight. She looks at the clock and it shows 7.00 pm. She decides to make Rahul's favourite for dinner, achar gosht (lol. I dont know if Rahul really likes this). She looks at the clock and it shows 9.00.
Muskaan: Shayed night duty lag gayee ho. Ja ke Dr. Kirti se poochti hoon
Muskaan knocks on her door.
Dr. Kirti: Ji Dr. Muskaan, sub kuch theek to hai?
M: Nahin woh maam..bus younhi sirf puchna tha kuch.....woh Rahul....Rahul ki night duty hai kya aaj?
Dr.Kirti. Nahin to un ki duty to 6 baje khatam ho gayi thi. Unhon ne aap ko bataya nahin?
M: Han woh...um main hi bhool gayi thi. Thanks maam. (Muskaan didn't want to make it look like they were having trouble)
Muskaan went back to her room and started pacing again. She decided to fix his pillows on the floor and make his bed for him so when he comes tired everything would be ready.
M: Rahul to kahan hai? She sits beside his pillows and starts looking at their wedding pics.
She notics that Rahul was looking so nice but she was too busy looking at the food.
M: Main bhi na. Woh mere liye sab kuch kar raha hai, aur ek main hoon key har waqt jhagarti hoon.
She looks up at the clock and sees that it's 11.00pm.
M: Tu aaj jitna bhi time ley Rahul. Main yahin par tera intizar karoongi.
Muskaan waits all night but Rahul never comes.
The next morning at Sanjeevani. She enters the locker room and sees that Rahul is putting stuff in his locker.
M: Hi Rahul.
Rahul just looks at her...slams the locker door and starts walking away. Muskaan grabs his hand.
M: Rahul please...ek minute
R: Muskaan please, dekho main bohat thak gaya hoon tumse jhagarte jhagarte...bus aur nahin lar sakta.
M: Rahul main thora tum se lar rahin hoon? Woh main to....
R: Tum kya? waise bhi jaise hum dono bolna shuru kartein hain, doosrey ko kuch bura lag jata hai...aur phir larai.
M:dekho rahul...
R: Nahin muskaan....tum dekho. Yeh sab...yeh shaadi...yeh pati-patni ka natak.....yeh jhoot tha. Such to yeh tumhain meri har baat buri lagti hai...har aadat sey chir hai....har kaam par ghusa ata hai. Aur sach to yeh hai Muskaan key main ne koshish bhi ki....bohot koshish ki tumhain khush karne ki par lagta hai ke yeh sab mere bas ki baat nahin.......tu main ne socha hai key ab bas yeh natak band kartein hain...takey main bhi khush or tum bi khush...Rahul turns to leave again but muskaan grabs his hand again
M: Ab main boloon?.....tumhey lagta hai key mujhey tumhary har baat buri lagti hai? har kaam se nafrat hai?...Paagal ....tum ne kabhi socha nahin key main tum hi se kyoun larti hoon? Kyoun ki tum se larti hoon to apnay pan ka ehsaas hota hai. Aisa lagta hai ke kuch bhi badal jaye duniya mein.....tu to hai na larne key liye. Aur tum ne kaha kai tum ney bohot koshish ki badalne ki par tum se kis ney kaha badalne ko? Main nahin chahti key tu zara sa bhi badle.
Rahul is staring at her not sure what to say..but Muskaan is on a roll.
M: Dekho Rahul..... Main janti hoon key tu ney mere liye bohot kuch kiya,,,au main ne aik bar bhi thanks nahi kaha...par tu itna nzaraaz par gaya? Main sari raat intizaar karti rahi or tu aya nahin....Main ney khana bhi pakaya tha par tu tha gahyab. PAr main naraz nahi hoon...main sirif sorry kehna chahti hoon. Please mat jao Rahul....Agar tumhain mera larna acha nahin lagta to main kabhi nahin laroogi tum se.......Agar tumain mera phidda bulana bura lagta hai....tum main kabin tumhain is naam sey nahin buloungi.
Rahul main wada karti hoon tumhain nahi sataoungi...bas tu ja mat.....warna...warna .....and she bursts out crying.......
PLease someone else continue......
I hope u guys liked it. It wasn't as good as the other authors but I tried....lol. my very first time
Anyway the next person can end it bec I am not good with romantic scenes. I can do angst only
Edited by leaves45 - 16 years ago
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